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orion 77
03-22-2005, 09:46 AM
jon has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5843)

Latest Update: Rendering: rendering and composition of scene
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115847788_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115847788_large.jpg)

very basic render and composition of the scene, nothing interesting. need to apply the textures to the models. wanted to see how the models were placed in the scene. i may move them around, its gonna be very tight at the deadline.

orion 77
03-22-2005, 06:27 PM
i have a few ideas that i thought id just throw out incase anybody wants something:

1: the concept of love where a person is so in love with another it dominates their life, they are obsessed it could be conveyed where the contents of the mind are on display to convey the feelings, thoughts and obsessions of the person.

2: what about the concept of god and his/her/its control over us and how we are uitimately under control of that force. it could be done as the punishing force destroying people or a massive swave of energy and light which we feed off.

3: what about our obsession with time and how it dominates us despite the fact it dosent really exist!! there are loads of ways to convey that.

good luck to everyone and enjoy it.

orion 77
03-23-2005, 10:31 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111620699_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111620699_large.jpg)

quick render of first stages of model, nothing great goin on at present.

orion 77
03-25-2005, 08:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111786486_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111786486_large.jpg)

simple layout test for the final piece

coCoKNIght
03-27-2005, 03:09 PM
So, wich idea are you going for?

orion 77
03-27-2005, 06:05 PM
wow somebody has taken an interest in my entry, i was beginning to think nobody would.

mines based on death, where he appears at the most annoying time and takes the life of a young man. very simple idea really.

im building my death model at the moment, it might get finished later on tonight.

cheers for taking the time to ask me.

orion 77
03-27-2005, 09:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111964064_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111964064_large.jpg)

needs tweaks and adjustments. advice and crits badly needed.

orion 77
03-27-2005, 09:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111964132_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1111964132_large.jpg)

needs tweaks and adjustments. advice and crits badly needed.

orion 77
03-28-2005, 01:21 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112019672_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112019672_large.jpg)

made changes that i like

javaejderi
03-28-2005, 10:31 PM
Hell-o-rion!!!
The Death Angel idea is great!!! May be I can steal some techniques from your D.A.'s robe, or you can steal from my wizard's!!!


And steal my techniques, don't buy, don't borrow or don't even ask, just steal!!!

No pencil sketches?!?!

orion 77
03-30-2005, 05:06 PM
im glad im not the only person who has added something to my thread.

gra7
03-30-2005, 05:09 PM
this is good !!
just the nose i think is wrong !
but is great !
waiting to see more !
c ya !

orion 77
03-30-2005, 05:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112208749_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112208749_large.jpg)

human model servant. how does he look?
needs hair which im gonna find a real task.

orion 77
03-30-2005, 05:55 PM
ive put a few images on so im gonna stay low for the next two weeks and just put my concept up in the meantime.

gra7
03-30-2005, 05:59 PM
great model ! i just think the eyes are in the wrong place and the body i dont like very much !
waiting to see more !
c ya !

coCoKNIght
03-30-2005, 08:31 PM
I like the modeling process so far, only the upper arms seem to be bent. Maybe correct that before proceeding.

javaejderi
03-31-2005, 07:41 PM
Good progress, moreover more to come!!!

orion 77
03-31-2005, 07:44 PM
i hope so cos im gettin pissed off a bit at the moment, thats mostly cos i have to go to work and i wanna stay home and do this challenge work.
im doing another head and its proving a challenge, i want to get as close to the image in my head and the feeling i have with this work.

mecman
03-31-2005, 08:45 PM
Hey Orion, IŽm very glad with your comment!:thumbsup:
YouŽve done a nice work here man!! IŽll visit your post t see the new death!
See you and good luck!

orion 77
04-04-2005, 10:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112655142_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1112655142_large.jpg)

facial expression could do with some crit.
how does he look? what is his expression saying?
the arms still look bent, i'll sort em tomorrow after ruddy work.

Claireabella
04-06-2005, 06:17 AM
Hi Jon. Great work so far! I like your young man model - I think maybe his arms are just held out too low below his shoulders. Have you got someone who can take some reference photos of you in a similar pose to see how the body lines appear? Also, they could take some of facial expressions to again give you an idea of the mouth shape. This wide open gape is made in making an AAGGGHH kind of sound. I imagine that if he has just seen death it should be more of a NNNOOOO scream in which case the mouth should be more pursed forward. Watch yourself in a mirror making various sounds. I know you have an image in your head so if you try to re-enact that you will get an idea of how you look. Hope that helps in some way. Good luck! :thumbsup: Claireabella

orion 77
04-11-2005, 07:31 PM
just bumping my thread up since i havent posted much in a while. ive changed my environment for the piece from a church to a room. the church wasnt working for me so there was no need to post work im not happy with.

orion 77
04-17-2005, 04:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1113756589_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1113756589_large.jpg)

layout and basic texture test for my scene, still have loads to do and times tickin away.

orion 77
04-17-2005, 08:58 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1113771506_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1113771506_large.jpg)

quick texture visualisation

Kenzor
04-17-2005, 10:26 PM
Dude. You're a lot further ahead than I am, I need to catch up.

I like the servant model, although I'm not sure what he's feelling. Without the arms posed, rather than looking shocked it looks more like he's singing opera.

It would help if the expression was asymetrical, and maybe you should quickly make the pupils for eyes. Firstly to check their size, and also to give the character a bit more life while you're adjusting the face.

The rooms coming along nicely, I guess that death will be framed by the door,

It's an orignal and cool idea. Good luck.

orion 77
04-18-2005, 03:26 PM
thanks for taking the time to post about my work ken. yeah im gonna adjust his face and screw it up even more but the poly count is huge on the model so i'll see how it goes.

nemirc
05-01-2005, 11:07 PM
Hello there, interesting concept. I have to say I liked the cloaked version of the Death better. As for your question about the facial expression. I think you want to have him say "terror" but he could really use some help in the brows area (making tthe brows go upwards). That would really add to the terror look :thumbsup:

Good luck!

orion 77
05-10-2005, 10:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115765311_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115765311_large.jpg)

just a quick lighting test to fulfill the milestone.

Virtuoso
05-11-2005, 12:30 AM
hey jon.....You are coming along well....Nice effort,I like the conceptma bit of the beaten track,and wll executed...work hard,and the best to you as you move towards that finishline....:arteest:

orion 77
05-11-2005, 09:43 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115847788_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5843/5843_1115847788_large.jpg)

very basic render and composition of the scene, nothing interesting. need to apply the textures to the models. wanted to see how the models were placed in the scene. i may move them around, its gonna be very tight at the deadline.

picolo
05-15-2005, 01:02 PM
an advise i could give you is to make some sketches before beggining to go on your 3d program and model... in this way you wont work for things that you wont use:shrug:

nemirc
05-15-2005, 04:46 PM
Hey man, you will have to speed up your pace. Deadline is almost here :buttrock:

Good luck :D

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