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W-I-L
05-06-2005, 01:56 PM
LOVE the pixie washing up liuid instead of fairy. calender rocks and i too share your hatred for spider plants... what does that post it say??

calisto-lynn
05-06-2005, 02:15 PM
:drool: :drool: :drool: this is siiiiick!

AndyH
05-06-2005, 02:41 PM
Crackin update!
Love the background now - the colours, lighting and detail is soo-poib!
Nice touch with the pixie liquid bottle - the old, classic design too!
I tihnk the spider plant looks kinda bold in comparision to the shades and shapes of the background - maybe it stands out too much? I wont really know for sure until the characters come back from their tea break.

Goro
05-06-2005, 03:22 PM
lovely environment! no crits from me :applause:

NOOB!
05-06-2005, 03:38 PM
that looks excellent!

Squibbit
05-06-2005, 03:49 PM
such a pretty kitchen , nice detailwork

ThierryS
05-06-2005, 05:45 PM
Very cool and sexy picture. Cool details and light. Great work man!:thumbsup: Good luck with it!

fooxoo
05-06-2005, 05:49 PM
Love the kitchen!!! Thumbs up! Getting better and better!

AlyFell
05-06-2005, 06:19 PM
Paul Davidson
Calisto - Thanks for the boost! :)
Walrus - You're right about the bit under the cabinets, I just checked my own, so I'll raise them a bit. And chuck in some bits of stuff that Kitty didn't clean up when ordered to do so! Old chips (fries ;) ) and maybe a sprout or two...
BlackDidThis - Eyepatch was a definite NO! So it's gone!
Arkinet
Climax
MalachiMaloney
Smash.rs - Village people, Lol! Maybe Missy should be dressed as a construction worker!?
RedRaven
CameronGardner - Maybe 'Iams'? Do cats get that in the States?
SnowKiwi
Wil
Tariq12
Abourabe
Fiduciose - Coming back to the mistress later, I was getting to wound up with the faces and forgetting everything else... Ta!
Evil Gerbil
Scarlet
SteveThomas
SavageCreature - Good point! The hat and patch don't really fit in with my original story either, so arividerci to them I feel!
Mindrot
Voluntas
CreatureMonkeyApe - Hehe! ;) I am going with the old headpiece, but thanks for the considered thoughts!
the1st_Angel
Zephyri
Kaparo
Art Renderman
Fiolka Alexandre - :)
T-lapia - It 20 x 30cm (ish) at 300dpi at the moment. Should have started bigger really...
KeremBeyit
AndyH - Ta matey!
Walrus (2)
Nebezial - or disappear up to another room in the house... ahem! Cough.... ;)
Wil - The post-it says Shopping list, Kitty Litter, Cream, Worming Tablets... I think I might change the last one though! :)
Calisto (2)
AndyH - Working on the spider plant ATM
Goro
Noob
Squibbit
Thierry2005
Fooxoo

Wow! Hope that's all! This is what happens when you don't update for ages! :D Thankyou all for checking this thread still! Going to check the rest of the Challenge now as I've not had much time to look at it all recently. TTFN

TheFirstAngel
05-06-2005, 06:59 PM
damn, ur chrunch rox.... could i have one of those Aly Fell pinup calenders up there on the wall too? :p it gets a nice place over my pc... lol go go go Aly!

GhostInTheMachine
05-06-2005, 08:11 PM
this is looking great. love the pixie liquid! this looks just like halls from my college.
good work! :D

beelow
05-06-2005, 08:32 PM
This one is phenominal! keep up the good work.:thumbsup:

JasonChan
05-06-2005, 10:25 PM
The background looks great! Nice poster. Is it yours? I also spy Sargent's Madame X, do I not? Very nice. I hope you're not detailing areas that will be covered by the characters... Would be sad to see those loving details disapear in the final.

AlyFell
05-06-2005, 11:45 PM
Jason - The pic on the cupboard is 'Sappho' by Charles Mengin. Read into that what you will! Heh! :) I AM trying to avoid covering things up...

arkinet
05-06-2005, 11:53 PM
wow... very clean & detail is just enough... what can i say? hmmm... bring out the girls? hehehe

ace4016
05-07-2005, 07:18 AM
lol, I knew it, everyone outside of NY has a "I love NY" product. No critiques from me, hope you finish on time. Keep it up:thumbsup: .

Miyagu
05-07-2005, 09:29 AM
awesome work on the kitchen details!! :eek: :applause: :love:

ilusiondigital
05-07-2005, 11:42 AM
Tons of talent here, congratulations for a mmasterpiece, hope to see this finished

O.Martin
05-07-2005, 01:55 PM
Thought I'd posted here earlier, but I probably got a bit discombobulated by your brilliant artwork and totally forgot to do it! :thumbsup:

NinjaA55N
05-07-2005, 07:22 PM
Hi there!

Awesome pic man! Sush a great details and that nice morning ambient light makes u feel u wanna sit there for a while and enjoy drinking coffee from those cups hanging there :D And watch a master and a servant ofcors.. hahaha. Really one of my favorites. keep up the great work man!

AlyFell
05-07-2005, 10:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115504402_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115504402_large.jpg)

I've worked a bit more into the BG, tightening up the details. I'm still not happy with the lighting though, or the window view... I think I need to up the contrast a bit. But I need to pay a bit of attention to Kitty and Missy. And I'm still trying to decide what to put in the cupboard... I'm going to put a couple of dishes in a rack next to the sink, but I won't spend too long on them as Missy will hide a lot of that. Starting to burble now...

Any crits or suggestions really appreciated! :)

andreasrocha
05-08-2005, 08:11 AM
Wow, Aly. What masterful rendering you got here. This is really nice. Congratulations. Really reminds me of the technique of some school books I used to have, and I loved the illustrations in them. Your final image could almost be a scene from "American Beauty", if you know what I mean...

A winner for sure!

BlackDidThis
05-08-2005, 08:42 AM
Woow.. my favourate part!! The Kitchen!! Aly you shouldn't have :)


I see that you have tried some calculation there.. but the opened closet door has an isometric perspective applied to it more than a two point.
Makes it look kinda broken and hanging.. Was that the intention?
Sort of like the hight on where it attaches to the cupboard is greater than it's hight to where the handle is.. when do to it being more distant it should have been visa versa

I KNOW you worked hard on it all, but it takes from the image (You know the "A chain is as strong as it's weekest link" thing?) Might be a better idea that you just keep it closed shut.

I prefferably hope that I am seeing wrong.

Amazing details when are the girls gonna come in the play? (Literally)


Black

AndyH
05-08-2005, 10:27 AM
Feckin ace stuff
Id say the BG is abart done now!
Great shadows, colours and detail, and the plant is integrated into the environment much better. It also looks very bright and 'morningy'
My only comment (and im being hella picky) is that i cant quite figure out what those dots are on the window. On seeing them, i had an idea - maybe cover the window in raindrops - as if to show that its just been raining and the sun has come out - that will make it seem even brighter, and up the 'britishness'.
I also agree with blackdidthis on the cupboard door. Maybe keep it closed? Most cupboard doors these days kinda close by themselves once they reach a certain angle - seeing this door open at such a small angle makes it look broken - gah - im babbling about the technicalities of cupboard doors now! SCHTOPP!

Class stuff - looking forward to seeing kitty and missy getting their workover.

learner88
05-08-2005, 10:52 AM
AH!!now i'ts great!!can't wait to see it finished!

nailuj
05-08-2005, 11:11 AM
gosh that is looking real good. Reminds me something of a Norman Rockell pages!.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

werezoo
05-08-2005, 01:37 PM
Great work!! I love the subtle lighting, the reflections and soft shadows, Beautifull. Looking forward to the final piece.

MuratCengiz
05-08-2005, 05:14 PM
gee, I don't know, it looks cool enough to me :) and actually window view might not need that much work anyway. Yes a bit of tightening up would work I think but it looks fine as a blur in my opinion.

Spin99
05-08-2005, 05:45 PM
Huh? Stunning work.
Love the style - French B.D (graphic novel) influenced?
Thinking of "Dany" (or was it?) comics and Mad magazine, dunno (?)
Amazing how perfect digital stuff comes out.

Love the roleplaying outfits.
Poor blondie :(

eclipson
05-08-2005, 06:27 PM
Thats nice bg, amazing details man, looking forward to ur final!!:bounce: :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
05-08-2005, 10:52 PM
Lol, Aly, that level of perfetionism causes me pure pain, reminds me how much is undone yet on my piece. Keep on rocking, your kitchen has some nice classic touch, hehe, love that bart simpsoncup up there:thumbsup:
way kewl detailing. very brittish kitchen i might say, all for tea and lack of a coffeemachine ;)
keep it up mate, fantastic work on the background!

Vahn
05-08-2005, 11:13 PM
wow your kitchen is fantastic! i love the pasta-glass...nice colors there :D

I think the lightning is very good as it is ... but if you are not happy ..well u know best :shrug: :D

I agree with black & picky Andy .... close the cupboard door! it looks better ... and i couldnt imagine missy's kitchen having a half open door somewhere :D :D :D

lonewolf304
05-09-2005, 12:53 AM
wow. its turning out to be like one of those paintings at
NewYork's contemporary art museums.

top notch.

SavageCreature
05-09-2005, 01:55 AM
Whooo Hooo! Gorgeous! I must admit, I agree with BlackDidThis. The perspective is a little off on the door of the cupboard, but I'd still move in if the house became available :D I was starting to get a smidge worried 'cause you hadn't posted in so long. (maybe it just seems longer than it was) Did you finally make a decision on the eyepatch? Can't wait to see it!
c

JMcWilliams
05-09-2005, 02:20 AM
Hello,

really nice so far, good luck! :D

Nightwing
05-09-2005, 09:30 AM
Amazing details Aly. Love the work you've put into the background, little things like the shadow of the pasta canister complete with caustics are very nifty indeed.

Can't wait to see the details you put into the girls, hope to see some updates soon!

GhostInTheMachine
05-09-2005, 10:33 AM
i'd play with the trees a little more, maybe just a few specks of light green. it looks like it could be dirt on the window right now. clean it up! :D

paulwdavidson
05-09-2005, 10:43 AM
very cool!!

AlyFell
05-09-2005, 10:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115677066_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115677066_large.jpg)

Another lighting test that has turned out a bit dark, but it's the kind of idea I'm after. Working on rendering Kitty up, but her arm needs changing as it's not right. In fact the drawing is all over the place at the moment. Her ears are going to be fluffy I think... And I'm going to change her expression a bit to more sulky; like she's really fed up with it all... but not completely! Hehe!

AlyFell
05-09-2005, 10:18 PM
arkinet
ace4016
dunkelgold
illusiondigital
O.Martin
NinjaASSN
Beelow
learner88
nailuj
werezoo
MuratCengiz
Spin99
eclipson
the1st_angel
Evil Gerbil
Vahn
lonewolf304
SavageCreature
JMcWilliams
Nightwing - Are caustics those little spots of magnified light?
GhostintheMachine
PaulDavidson
Andy_H

Thankyou sooo much folks! Time is running out now, and I've realised I've still go loads to do... gulp, aargh, eek, etc...

SavageCreature and Blackdidthis - good call on the cabinet door. I knew it was out, but kind of hoped no one would notice or it'd just... go away! :) I have since corrected it... Thankyou! :)

AndrewRaZ
05-10-2005, 01:55 AM
if you were to ask me, i would say leave Kitty's expression as it is. i love it. the "I <3 KY" is a nice touch lol.

will you make prints available for purchase? i know i will definitely be interested. this is a really amazing piece. keep it up, and i hope you win.

AndyH
05-10-2005, 06:10 AM
Lookin great!
I kinda prefer the bright, morning lighting myself - makes the whole affair look more 'ordinary' and domesticated - like its just a bit of everyday, innocent fun, the darker lighting makes it more sinister and seedy.... Is that what youre going for?
Also, i think kitty could use a little more work on her mouth - i dunno how to explain it, but it kinda looks pasted on.... Sorry to be so picky, but im trying to say something useful rather than shower it with praise!

Glad you changed the i love NY fridge magnet - what does the KY mean though? Short for kitty, or KY jelly? :surprised

Fantastic stuff - glad to see the updates are rolling again

MLena
05-10-2005, 07:52 AM
I love that style. that's loking very good. :)

ogar555
05-10-2005, 08:19 AM
You monster... being able to paint so well... *grrrrr* :D

element5
05-10-2005, 12:42 PM
Love your work and the attention to detail....:thumbsup:

Mythmaker
05-10-2005, 02:32 PM
The rendering on this is so damn good... hmm... what is this strange feeling I'm experiencing?... could it be ENVY?!! :P

xric7
05-10-2005, 02:56 PM
very beautiful detail.:bounce: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: love the girl prtrait much.i think she's so cute.:love:
good luck to u.
cheers. :buttrock:

GhostInTheMachine
05-10-2005, 04:10 PM
very good work lady, this is going to look hot! :D

cha0t1c1
05-10-2005, 04:13 PM
so sexy...:love:

ogar555
05-10-2005, 09:18 PM
sooo cute! :blush: Purrrrdy, give her to me! :P
love all those details, like the post-it on the fridge and the pixie liquid on the bench... it gives of a more believable feel! :scream:

abourabe
05-10-2005, 09:44 PM
wow I like it . the lighting is very cool !

Miyagu
05-11-2005, 12:30 AM
iīm curious about the new expression you are planning for kitty :D what a bad life she has! hehe.. one idea that just popped up in my head: you could make her cheeks more "blushy" (<-- donīt know the right word) like :blush: you know? that could make an interesting effect :)

so maybe she is fed up with the situation but thatīs only her "mental/rational" part.. poor kitty :D

but hurry up! this is looking sooo good it has to find a place in the challenge book! :bounce:

TheFirstAngel
05-11-2005, 02:12 AM
hey Aly... love your aly-cat so much kitty is so sexy and so cute! Benita made a good point. could imagine her being sorry to have made that mess... uhm uhm. just keep on going! go aly go!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

ace4016
05-11-2005, 02:29 AM
......
Glad you changed the i love NY fridge magnet - what does the KY mean though? Short for kitty, or KY jelly? :surprised
....

Kentucky:wise: .

agios
05-11-2005, 10:19 AM
you ve done beautifull job my friend, love the background and the main caracter also...and a very nice concept coming from true life...good luck

TheMagnetic
05-11-2005, 10:26 AM
this is by far one of my favorites. the amount of detail put into this pic. is monumental. Very beautiful. Im starting to feel sorry for her. at first I just wanted to know her name, what she drinks..you know, that kinda stuff. well this is simply fantastic. i love it!!

Velinov
05-11-2005, 11:07 AM
Hi Aly

I love your way of painting.:) Nice catch on the detail. It looks great...I wish you good luck in the final stage of this challange! :thumbsup:



Cheers

ms@zx
05-11-2005, 03:24 PM
its been awhile since my last visit and this turn out superb.my goodness! ,the details on the background~..the cat lady is shaping out perfectly!i'm very keen to see this to the final:)best of luck:thumbsup:

cOrbeau
05-11-2005, 04:02 PM
I like it , this is very funny ! :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
05-12-2005, 03:39 AM
Meow.. purrr purrr.. sweet kitty looks cuter and cuter! hehe, great job on soiling her out of your canvas mate! Just came to see if you already updated...keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Arctis
05-12-2005, 08:20 AM
Great piece comin' here !
I really like the way you darken the pict, it add more variation in the lighting. Clean render.
Another award winning piece, I'm sure !

mack72
05-12-2005, 08:25 AM
Loved the rendering of the kitchen you posted the other day, was just waiting to see one of the lovely ladies before I made a comment! I love the styling on this piece, it's one of my favourites! Must see the final image!

Cheers
Mack

Goro
05-12-2005, 12:15 PM
looks really awesome! But I still don't like the yellow gloves...the color doesn't fit with
the rest of the image imo...

Can't wait to see this one finished! Hurry uuuuuuup :scream:
:applause: :applause: :applause:

camtheman
05-12-2005, 05:01 PM
Aly, this is quite the work, I love it! One of my favs for sure. I'm sure you'll be a finalist. You've my vote. Good luck! :applause: :applause:

My M&S:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?p=2272378#post2272378

AlyFell
05-12-2005, 05:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115920471_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1115920471_large.jpg)

A close up of Kittys face. I'm still working on the hair at the moment. The contrast has been upped a bit here... I'm not decided on the final ambience of the kitchen yet either. Thanks for the crits and encouragement. I can't work on it this weekend, so it's going to be close to the line for me! Better get on with it then... :)

Rook
05-12-2005, 06:02 PM
I like seeing the hint of her bra, a nice touch of detail.

Jezzarts
05-12-2005, 06:03 PM
She's pretty, love those lips...mmmm. the attention to detail as amazing.. but I'm sure you've heard that before. A few stray hairs always help for realism... great work

JoseHerb
05-12-2005, 06:07 PM
This is a very nice picture. The detail incredible, a level a mastery that I wish I had.

marcheen
05-12-2005, 06:14 PM
wow, beautiful face:D and i guess the left side of the lips need small adjustments. i'm waiting for more.

Miyagu
05-12-2005, 06:17 PM
GREAT WORK!!!

her eyes are sooo beautyful... and the lips and the look... :applause:

camtheman
05-12-2005, 06:24 PM
Hey Aly, nice close up! Hey do you use models to work from? If so, can i get her #?

AndyH
05-12-2005, 06:26 PM
Worming tablets? ewww! What are you thinking??? With cream, too???!!

Looking bloody ace - looks better with more blusher on her chops. I kinda prefered the lighter hair though - it was a good contrast to have kitty with white/blond hair - it makes her look more erm... innocent!

Keep at it - i really really hope you can finish this one in time!

THECLYKE
05-12-2005, 07:26 PM
GOOD JOB...


MAYBEE YOU CAN HELP ME OUT WITH MY CONTRIBUTION
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=2273191#post2273191

nebezial
05-12-2005, 07:30 PM
darken the edges of her eyes, they r poppin out a bit otherwise. awesome:thumbsup:

flyingP
05-12-2005, 08:59 PM
don't really have much to add, just waiting for you to finish it :D

abourabe
05-12-2005, 09:02 PM
excellent man . you have a great style and I like it a lot .
thanks for support Aly and good luck .

beelow
05-13-2005, 12:52 AM
Haven't been here for a while, because of midterms, but looking great. Can't wait to you finish it.:thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
05-13-2005, 06:47 AM
just came to admire your kitty, and to cheer ya up, joinin' the cg talker choir singin' GO ALY GO! Keep on rocking!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
@andy h: lol! thought the same :p

HoangNguyen
05-13-2005, 06:49 AM
Beautiful painting, love the lighting. Can't wait to see the final.

My challenge
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=233276&page=1&pp=15

ozhaver
05-13-2005, 06:59 AM
I'm loving the detail and the stick-it-note is GRAND. I guess you're still working on the hair; I would make the bangs a bit (just a bit, nothing too notorious) darker on her left side (our right). :thumbsup: Can't wait to see this one finished! I love this mood.

nebezial
05-13-2005, 09:35 AM
oy, overdose urself with coffeine and finish this allready:D

kerembeyit
05-13-2005, 04:04 PM
Keep it coming Ally! Looking great:) I am waiting for the final piece.

BlacKeri
05-13-2005, 04:09 PM
I will gladly have yer babieeezzzz <3
It's so wonderful ;_;

calisto-lynn
05-13-2005, 04:33 PM
she looks great!:love:

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Enayla
05-13-2005, 07:25 PM
Aly, this is flawless. Watching your progress has been a real learning experience for me. The background really knocked me over - the detailing on it is excellent... down to the calendar and the little magnets on the fridge: awesome.

I love the kitty's eyes, I love her ears and I adore the expression on her face. Her mistress so kick-arse it's not even funny :D Good luck, I think it's your best painting ever!

Tranchefeux
05-13-2005, 07:40 PM
Hi Poshspice, Thank you for the details, the face is really super, go, go for the end.

:thumbsup:

AndyH
05-13-2005, 08:44 PM
Aly, this is flawless. Watching your progress has been a real learning experience for me. The background really knocked me over - the detailing on it is excellent... down to the calendar and the little magnets on the fridge: awesome.

I love the kitty's eyes, I love her ears and I adore the expression on her face. Her mistress so kick-arse it's not even funny :D Good luck, I think it's your best painting ever!

Whoa! Personal praise from linda herself!

If that doesnt inspire you to finish this sharpish, nothing will!

:applause:

JasonChan
05-13-2005, 09:16 PM
Looks great! I look forward to seeing the finished image soon! :)

Metrini
05-14-2005, 10:34 PM
I've completely missed this thread until tonight. One thing is that I will know all my favourite artists' real names by the end of this contest!!

Nothin I can say that hasnt been said already. One of my favourites!! Cant wait to see the finished render!

nailuj
05-15-2005, 04:35 AM
watching your work in progress has been inspiring. My final comment. Excelent! :thumbsup:

ErwinM
05-15-2005, 05:03 AM
Aly, beautiful drawings and paintings. All of your drawings have great character and rhythm, and they all look hot. Your painting keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see the final submission.

Cheers

Tariq12
05-15-2005, 09:36 AM
This is looking great mate. Love kitty's expression. The detail on the background is awesome. :thumbsup:
Cheers,
T.

Belhaven
05-15-2005, 09:39 AM
hahaha, very sexy! i like what i see very much. its a shame that the backrgound you work so hard on will be substantially covered up. its a shame i say.

NinjaA55N
05-15-2005, 10:15 AM
One more of mine favorites. This pic is everything about the theme and so very well executed that Im cheering for it! and yea.. sorry that I dont give a constructive critic or any usefull suggestion, but its in higher level that I am, so just one more loud applause for u :)

THECLYKE
05-15-2005, 04:47 PM
SHOW THE REST...SHOW THE REST....SHOW THE REST...SHOW THE REST




MAYBEE YOU CAN HELP ME OUT WITH MY CONTRIBUTION
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=239415&page=1&pp=15
(http://showthread.php?postid=2273191#post2273191)

tilite
05-15-2005, 06:38 PM
well well well


i have nothign to say... lol
this is great and i need to be finnished :D

its great work

Miyagu
05-16-2005, 10:20 PM
hi aly!

good luck with the final brushstrokes!
you must finish this gem!!!:bounce::bounce::bounce:

:)

MDN67
05-16-2005, 10:21 PM
i like your style and this pic i hope you can finnish before the end, i wait an update

arkinet
05-16-2005, 10:33 PM
GO ALY! GO ALY! GO ALY!... Im your fan... love your work, pls finish it:sad: ...:bounce: :bounce:

AlyFell
05-16-2005, 11:01 PM
Can you believe it! I had to go away this weekend, so I've not been able to update the piccy! Aaargh! Luckily I've got all of Tuesday to finish this off, so I'll be updating quite a bit tomorrow. Then it's a quick run around to Jonny Duddlebugs to get ftp access! Jonny... are you there? Fingers crossed!!

Thanks for the responses folks since my last update... and Enayla; Linda! I don't know how any of this mess can be a learning experience for you! :) But thankyou so much!! It has been quite one for me too. The main think I've learnt is don't put in too many details... Belhaven - you're right! I'm cutting a few things out because it's looking too busy at the moment. It seems like the spider plant might be getting a spot of weedkiller at the moment... :eek:

AlyFell
05-17-2005, 10:17 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116325033_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116325033_large.jpg)

I've come back to working on mistress, and will post a complete view later. I'm still not happy with her face yet, so might make a few changes to the expression... she just looks a bit impassive and needs some more energy! From this I think you can see why I'm thinking of getting rid of the spider plant... I'm still trying to keep it quite cartoony.

Thanks for the comments! I'll take a bit of time out from pixel pushing later and try and respond! Good luck to everyone... :)

Tariq12
05-17-2005, 10:32 AM
Looking very ,very COOL mate. Can't wait for the full update. Best of luck for the final.
Cheers,
T. :thumbsup: :applause:

Velinov
05-17-2005, 10:32 AM
It looks great Aly. Every level of detail in your entry is awesome. Great job on colors and
composition. The emanation of the character is so strong and powerful. No doubt who is the
master. The enviroment is great and the whole loking of the picture is really strong and funny
at the same time. Nice idea with wonderful realization.

All the best at the final stage of the challange. Good luck! :thumbsup:

paulwdavidson
05-17-2005, 10:34 AM
Lovely stuff, Posh.


Going to be great!

Paul

franckkobolt
05-17-2005, 10:41 AM
This illustration is great, love the expression of the characters and the way you have done the slave lips, the kitchen ambience is very interesting too. Good luck !

Franck Kobolt.

NOOB!
05-17-2005, 10:52 AM
goddamn i wish i spent more time in this thread,looks excellent,u'll definatly finish!!

AndyH
05-17-2005, 10:58 AM
Glad youre still at it - I really hope you can make the deadline!

Excellent stuff. The details are coming on very nicely now. I dunno if its intentional, but i especially like the way the eye is drawn to the pixie liquid bottle, which is also tantalisingly close to her thigh and arse area.... :drool:

My only suggestions right now would be to make her skin look less grey. Maybe redden it up a little. Or perhaps try and put a little bounce lighting on her face to make her a bit more evil! Try and paint a little translucent redness around the sihlouette - its not really giving me an impression of bright natural light at the mo.

Sorry to be so picky, but im trying to be helpful to yer! If you submitted it right now, it would still be frickin ace, so hurry!

paperclip
05-17-2005, 11:04 AM
I agree with Andy about her skin- also, I think you should try upping the contrast a little. Also, make the highlights sharper on the rubber .
I've had a lot of fun watching you develop and you've certainly improved since you began-- congrats!
Just a few minor wiggles and you're there.....keep going...
theresa

calisto-lynn
05-17-2005, 02:37 PM
what more to say than... ROAR! :D

AlyFell
05-17-2005, 02:45 PM
Phew... I feel like there's someone with a stopwatch standing at my shoulder... which there kind of is I guess. :)

I've really gone off this face on the Mistress, and have decided to completely re-do it this afternoon! I post up the WIP in a bit. Talk about making life harder for yourself...

Andy_H and Paperclip Spot on as usual!

Tariq / Paul / franck kobolt / Calisto / Velinov / NOOB Thanks guys!

ilusiondigital
05-17-2005, 02:58 PM
A very erotic girl, good job friend

camtheman
05-17-2005, 03:30 PM
Aly, I can't wait to see the final! Keep going, this we be one of the best out there! Good luck!

my M&S:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=227140&goto=newpost

xric7
05-17-2005, 03:38 PM
wow...
nice update.
ur detail is great.
can't wait for final piece.
keep going.
cheers.:bounce: :buttrock: :thumbsup:

DrFx
05-17-2005, 04:02 PM
Damn, Aly, making changes this late on in the challenge?
Now, I don't want you to panic...
...ok, PANIC!!! :scream:


.
.
.
J/k!!!
Your entry is fabulous, and though I've mostly been quiet, I've been following this along since the beginning! Best of luck, and please do finish so we can vote, ok?

walrus
05-17-2005, 04:06 PM
Ah, good, I was beginning to worry having not seen any new update from you all weekend. Glad to see you're still going to make it... Um, you ARE, aren't you!
I like the text on the clock face. Incredibly appropriate, too. :)
Good luck with the last bits!

-mike

crowley
05-17-2005, 06:57 PM
One of my favorites. I already liked your previous pictures (I'm secretly in love with Lady Frances Drake), but this one is astonishing. I especially like the characters and the overall mood. And the lighting. And the background too. And the little details. And the way it's utterly funny (yet sick).
Did I mention I loved the characters?
Good luck finishing it!

TheFirstAngel
05-17-2005, 07:08 PM
Brilliant, delicious, ubersexy! Am excited you went back to the elegant lady version of her! Keep on rocking mate, your Girls simply kick ass, go go go Aly!!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

goktugg
05-17-2005, 08:00 PM
still *Wonderful!!...
going much better!! *with pretty brush strokes
be fast!:)

AlyFell
05-17-2005, 08:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116360042_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116360042_large.jpg)

A new face for Missy! Perhaps a bit too like Kitty, but a darker version. The expression is a bit more cynical, but perhaps not as much fun... More like my usual style really... does it work? still need to fiddle with the hair a bit...

Perhaps it'd be better to see it in context I suppose... I've been drinking too much coffee today... burble wibble...

NOOB!
05-17-2005, 08:04 PM
WOW! great work,works for me...lets see this finalized already!

OliveBeard
05-17-2005, 08:05 PM
The new face is definitely less "comical"...could be good or bad, depending on where you want to go with it. Frankly, given the background, I think the comical face would suit better. This takes it into "dark" territory...in a suburban kitchen! :)

Fantastic work, BTW.

Squibbit
05-17-2005, 08:07 PM
oo yea keep this one !

marcheen
05-17-2005, 08:08 PM
wow i like the new face. i think she is beggining to look better then Kitty hehe

TheFirstAngel
05-17-2005, 08:11 PM
Supersexy! just a decent crit :blush: face middle mainaxis seen from the eyes falls a bit stron back, starting from the nose wich makes her nosetip and mouth look slightly off axis. bout kitty syle: diggin it, looks ubercute! tweak her and she rox! lovin your gurlies! go aly GO!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

Tariq12
05-17-2005, 08:19 PM
I love this face ,but i think the first one suited the painting better. Now both kitty and missy look serious. Before kitty was like " this s..it isn't funny anymore" and missy was " clean it up you little scamp."...... i think I need some sleep too.
T.

crowley
05-17-2005, 08:20 PM
She's really cute, but to be honest, I kinda miss her smile.
In any case, love the hair before her left eye. And also love those mid-closed eyelids.

MDN67
05-17-2005, 08:24 PM
i prefer the fist face, The atmosphere with becomes too much bad, I prefer the first one but the one as are the other one very realized well

AlyFell
05-17-2005, 08:24 PM
Cheers folks! :D Yeah you're right Sacha... right, 'ere we go...

BlueCougar
05-17-2005, 09:22 PM
eh, the face has gone bland IMO, I like the mischievious sauciness of the first expression....

xric7
05-17-2005, 09:30 PM
wow..awesome!!
nice up date again and again.
can't wait for final image.

AndyH
05-17-2005, 09:44 PM
I agree with Tariq exactly
I like it a lot artistically, but as far as the overall piece goes, i prefer the old one - it showed that the whole thing is silly, innocent roleplay, a comedic piece, a bit of kinky fun in a mundane, everyday surrounding - you get the idea.
This new face makes it all seem a lot sexier, but also more serious and dark. It fits in with the style of your other pieces, but i thought it was a nice touch having a more light hearted approach to the M&S theme. To be honest, i liked the very first sketch you did where kitty and missy were smiling - twas all just a bit of cheeky fun!

Whichever one you decide on will look great! But make sure its the last 'rework' on your painting before the deadline!

Time be runnin oot!

Best o luck

Goro
05-18-2005, 12:27 AM
Hi Aly!
I like the first expression much better. Would keep the old one. It fits perfectly with the pose and she looks more dominant. The new face...hmm I feel like...."what is her motivation?" if you know what I mean...

Anyways this is coming up really great. Close to finishline! Keep it up!

Nathellion
05-18-2005, 12:30 AM
Loving this piece. I think the old expression worked better though.

AlyFell
05-18-2005, 12:37 AM
Blue Cougar, Andy_H and Tariq. I completely agree with you. I guess I'm not happy with the original face technically... though emotionally I am. I have since made further changes... and am trying to incorporate the best of both, hoping it doesn't end up as a 'curates egg', if you know what I mean. Apart from the lighting and overall colour balance, the pic is almost done, so I'll try to get some opinions on both together tomorrow, but even coffee isn't working now, and it's time to pick up my copy of Dr Seuss's Sleep Book and hit the hay! :) Night night...

SteveV
05-18-2005, 01:50 AM
If we had a vote you'd get mine Aly, either face will work. I've loved watching the whole process.

You're the artist I wish I was!

TheMagnetic
05-18-2005, 07:04 AM
wow. your faces...are very....well, good work. I love it.

Speaky
05-18-2005, 07:32 AM
Hi Aly, I've enjoyed watching this develop, but I've gotta say go with the original smiling face, this new one is as accomplished, but lacks the 'sauce' of the original. The new one moves the feel of the pic into a new area, but not a better one, perhaps simply a bit harder to read and understand quite what their relationship is. The original smile was a beauty, and the pic was made a lot more lighthearted because of it. Anyway, best of luck to you, it's a stunning pic whichever you stick with! :thumbsup:

AlyFell
05-18-2005, 08:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116404375_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116404375_large.jpg)

This'll be my last post before I put up the final colouring milestone ( and then 'final image' ...erk). I'm still undecided on which one to use. So here they are next to each other. A bit unfair, because the only version of the previous face I have at work isn't as complete as the new one, but you get the idea.

Speaky - I know what you mean. I've slightly changed the expression on the new one and corrected the facial dynamics pointed out by the1st_angel too.

Thankyou!

flyingP
05-18-2005, 08:22 AM
both good, but I honestly prefer the first :)

Nightwing
05-18-2005, 08:24 AM
Aly, i'd say go with the first (original) one. I understand the reasoning behind the rework, and you know better than anyone else what sort of dynamic, tone and mood you want to establish, but I prefer the playful overtones of the first one.

This has been one of my fave entries and I'm really looking forward to the final piece, good luck!!

lutzw
05-18-2005, 08:29 AM
Aly, I agree with Speaky and the other ones: stick with the old version. It seems to have more character and punch. The new one seems to be too "cute" for the scenery and it lacks some kind of strong expression, dunno...

Cheers and good luck...
:) <- Lutz

ace4016
05-18-2005, 08:43 AM
I also prefer the first one. Hope you finish this soon.

Juji
05-18-2005, 08:51 AM
May I be bold and make small suggestion? I think the eyebrows on the second face would look great on the first face. :) They're sexier and a little harsher in my opinion

AndyH
05-18-2005, 09:00 AM
Left one! LEFT ONE!

Its loads clearer, seems to fit on the head better, has more 'oomph' and portrays a much more effective message than the one on the right.

Nice to hear youre gearing up for the final push - its gonna be hella ace when complete.

xric7
05-18-2005, 09:00 AM
both is excellent!it's hard to choice.
personally i prefer the 2nd.but i love the lip color of the 1st version.hehe..
keep going and best luck 2 u.
cheers.:thumbsup: :buttrock: :bounce: :applause:

TheFirstAngel
05-18-2005, 09:06 AM
the now one looks almost too realistic for your classical pinup style here, so i'd go cor the original one and hope you make a new sexy pice with the new girl! she's soooo sexy, but i'd choos the left girl, cuz style and expression are meant to be in this piece :)
keep it up Aly, keep on rocking!!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

authentic
05-18-2005, 09:14 AM
I personnaly prefer the second one. I find it more natural and snob at the same time. The 1st one has left strength. She seems more lost.

Vectorius
05-18-2005, 09:25 AM
I love the first and i love the second:scream: ..sorry..lol.Hard choice..hhuuummm...maybe just put first lips color to second ..like xric7 told you...so ..tic tac tic tac..quick quick!!

Very good job mademoiselle!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

GOOD LUCK!!

DrFx
05-18-2005, 12:06 PM
The second one's mouth looks much more natural than the first, but I would put on a little smile. The lips colour is a bit too weak, a darker tone would give it more expression. Good luck!

OrO
05-18-2005, 12:23 PM
the second one for sure! :thumbsup:

ErwinM
05-18-2005, 12:28 PM
Hi Aly, I would go with the first one to contrast the other girl's expression.

Erwin

PeterPuppet
05-18-2005, 12:42 PM
I agree with Erwin. I like the first one better, too. She just looks more beautiful to me.
Hurry up man, itīs your decision, not ours and you donīt have much time left!



peace, pete

logotomie
05-18-2005, 01:12 PM
i find the second one more "masterly" :-)

AlyFell
05-18-2005, 01:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116423122_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116423122_large.jpg)

Right, I'm putting this in as my final colouring! Even though strictly speaking it isn't. I STILL haven't decided on on a final head for Missy, but it's on a separate layer so can make an arbitrary decision later...!

I've still to alter Missy's leg, as the perspective is cockeyed, do reflections and shadows on the floor, and put light beams and shadows in; as I intend to have the characters striped from the blind on the window. Might work! :) So still lots of tweaks...

The spider plant has gone, and I think the composition works better for it.

I'm a bit confused about the end time for this. I thought it was 12 midnight GMT, but the timer on my submission page says over 22 hours yet and it's now half past 2, so I'm in a quandary, baffled and downright bamboozled....

Thank's for your help guys! :)

paulwdavidson
05-18-2005, 01:36 PM
Gorgeous.....great sense of humour.....I laughed out loud just there, it was the first time i noticed the 'I love KY'


Excellent.

Good luck

Paul

JasonChan
05-18-2005, 01:48 PM
Looks great, but you're cutting it close! I hope you have no prior engagements today :) I'm eager to see this finished up!

duddlebug
05-18-2005, 01:59 PM
It's looking GReAT Aly!!

Love all the details... one of my favourite pieces in the competition... you've gotta be well up there in the judging!! Good luck!!

I'm not gonna add to your confusion over Missy's head... it's your decision... ;)

MattDixon
05-18-2005, 02:30 PM
That head looks perfect in situ, Aly. That's the one! Loe the sneaky pot of Marmite, too!

AndyH
05-18-2005, 02:43 PM
Looks perfect now.

Her new head has got the alluring tiltyness of the 2nd head, with the cheeky grin of the old one - its spot on! missy has a much more dominant look, but the smile stops her from appearing too dark and sinister.

The sunlight seems alot more intense and the whole thing looks much more contrasty, and i think the removal of the spider plant has helped give the composition some breathing space. I like the cheeky wee pot o' marmite peeking out the cupboard in a voyeuristic manner (what??)

Im really really having a hard time finding crits now!
If i have to say summat, its that i think the kitty bowl looks a little too luxurious and designed - maybe you could relate more to a bog standard reddish plastic one?
Also, the milk spill doesnt look quite right - its solid blobs of white at the mo - no washed out, thinned whites where it has spread. Spill some milk for reference - ahem....

Lookin frickin spiffing though - make sure you post a hella-big version when youre done - id love this as a wallpaper and to explore all the detail!

TheFirstAngel
05-18-2005, 03:46 PM
Loving it Aly! Awaiting that calender! keep on rocking and see ya in 6 hours! go go go!!!

flyingP
05-18-2005, 04:28 PM
looking damn good :bounce:

W-I-L
05-18-2005, 04:41 PM
excellent stuff..... just one last update bro and your done!...

AlyFell
05-18-2005, 05:37 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116437874_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116437874_large.jpg)

Shadow stuff.... highlights... shiny bits and smiles!

Only a few tweaks till the final image now! If anyone has any last minute flashes of inspiration, I'd love to hear them! :)

Maybe Kitty's face is a bit grey... hmmm!

tAstyBITs
05-18-2005, 05:38 PM
I really like this one, it looks great, and it funny to. Can't wait to see the final version.

I took your picture into photohop and added more saturation to bring out the colors, and added more contrast to it, my only suggestion is to play with contrast/saturation in photoshop and see what you think.

I added a Hue/Saturation Layer, upped Saturation by 57
Added a Brightness/Contrast Layer, Upped Brightness by 47, and contrast by +42
Added another Hue/Saturation Layer Selected Yellow in the Edit drop down, and -38 on the Saturation.

It was a quick adjustment and it's not perfect, but that's my only critique would be to push the colors and contrast more.

NinjaA55N
05-18-2005, 05:41 PM
yay! final coloring and whole composition is here again! Simply love it! Another finalist ;) good luck!

eliza
05-18-2005, 05:44 PM
oh mamma, this is too good:D light effects, color scheme, overall impression - simply fantastic! i wish you all the best in the challenge, i mean it!

AndyH
05-18-2005, 05:51 PM
Frickin ACE!

I wanna big-ass poster of that thing!

Congratulations on getting it done in time - how did you manage it? Surely you had work today....?


Ive never used this emoticon before, but i think you deserve them:

:applause::applause: :applause: !

SavageCreature
05-18-2005, 05:55 PM
*chanting*

Go Aly Go! Go Aly Go! Go Aly Go!

I'm glad you got it done. I was a little worried, and it's my favorite piece. I still think you should have gone with the hat instead of the feathers, but I still love it.
Now what I'd really like is to see a larger image of the woman on the calendar on the cabinet :D
great work!
c.

JRBRAZ
05-18-2005, 08:35 PM
Great Work, Aly!!! :applause:

Good luck on voting :thumbsup:

AlyFell
05-18-2005, 08:53 PM
Phew... Just got home and looked at it on my monitor here and the values are a bit dark, so it's still 'final colouring' at the moment! Post a re-balanced one later... Gee, why can't all monitors be the same?

Tasty bits - you are completely correct! I'll follow your advice here... THANKYOU LOADS!

calisto-lynn
05-18-2005, 09:01 PM
great work, aly!looks wonderfull! good luck!:bounce: :bounce:

Goro
05-18-2005, 10:53 PM
damn it aly! that just kicks a**

wow....I'm amazed....

andreasrocha
05-18-2005, 11:27 PM
Great work, Aly. You're on my top 5 list! Best of luck!

Spin99
05-19-2005, 01:08 AM
Wow looks stunning! :bounce:
It's only a TAD dark here..
Nothing too serious.

Matt-Bortolino
05-19-2005, 02:16 AM
Cor! I want a Kitty too!

arkinet
05-19-2005, 04:19 AM
gorgeous!!! go go go aly!!!:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

wireFrame
05-19-2005, 04:47 AM
I've been watching the development of this entry for a while and I must say that this is one of those that interests me.

I like what happened eventually to the master's head. The modified version perfectly suites her dominant character. If you want some very minor suggestion here they are:

I find the upper body (especially the shoulder) of the master a bit straight. Unfortunately there is no warping tool in photoshop to make the upper body curve a bit (also the hips). These were the things I was waiting if you'd make adjustments as it progresses. A bit of tilt and curve will make a difference (imo). However, these is on the artistic execution which is just secondary to the concept in terms of weight in evaluating an entry.

Overall--great work and style! I'm a fan of artworks that try to tell something that uses human figures.

Congratulations on this wonderful piece!

ms@zx
05-19-2005, 06:37 AM
i'm speechless~astounding piece ally!http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/bouncy.gif

xric7
05-19-2005, 06:47 AM
wonderful piece!!:thumbsup: i do love it.
keep going.:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
cheers.

Riddick
05-19-2005, 06:55 AM
Hey hey your picture reminded mine!
Great work it is really cool, nice atmosphere and lighting effect.
Well done!!
The details in this kitchen are well thinked!

pejot
05-19-2005, 07:17 AM
Hi Aly,
I just wanted to say it's great. I like the aye in the closet :)
Previous lighting was better, in my opinion, this is too dark for me now.
And... where is the final version?

AlyFell
05-19-2005, 07:59 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116489575_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116489575_large.jpg)

I don't know what was going on with my work monitor last night! I decided to adjust the values at work before I went home and completely over darkened it. Thanks to some advice from Tasty Bits, I've re-adjusted it, and barring it looking completely screwed up after this update it's done and the next update is my final image! Talk about close to the line! Eeek!

NOOB!
05-19-2005, 08:08 AM
lol yeh,u got like 3 hrs,better hurry.it looks fantastic!!

AndyH
05-19-2005, 08:13 AM
Aceness - i was gonna say it looked a bit too dark before, but i dared not to give you another crit - ive been so picky with this cos i wanted to say useful things!

Anyway - it looks bostin now! No crits whatsoever.
Gerrit submitted!

Just a wee question - how many layers have you used on this thing?

nebezial
05-19-2005, 08:17 AM
man i bet u have a timer on ur computer counting down while u r tweaking lol good luck mate

:thumbsup: :bounce:

Kiko_68
05-19-2005, 08:27 AM
Good work Lady! Wish you all the best in the challenge

AlyFell
05-19-2005, 09:02 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116493336_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5790/5790_1116493336_large.jpg)

Well I think this is it! I could go on tweaking till the end of time, and I think my problem was I still hadn't decided what time of day it was in the kitchen so I was adjusting values that were changed next time I looked at it! Der...

But now it feels like the end of 'Indiana Jones and The Last Crusade', with Indiana Jones reaching out for the holy grail, and Sean Connery quietly saying... "Let it go Indiana, let it go..." So now is time to let it go, with all its faults.

Thankyou everyone for stopping by, giving me encouragement and very valuable crits. You don't know how much I appreciate it! :)

Right... now it's time to ftp!

Edit:Ooops! A story:

"Mistress came home really early from ‘Scratchies’ nightclub, to find Kitty had been playing with her clockwork mouse in the kitchen when she should have been tidying the house! Bad Kitty! After she had been told she could only play with it outside too... tut tut! And to make matters worse, she'd spilt the milk... all over the kitchen floor! Stopping short of rubbing her nose in it, mistress commanded Kitty to clean it up... NOW! And properly mind, or it'll be six of the best and a night in the backyard with Crispin, her Alsatian, who doesn't like cats! Mistress is secretly pleased, though, because she needed the floor cleaning anyway.... But Kitty, although fed up with having to scrub in yellow marigolds (her least favourite colour) is secretly pleased as well, because she knows she'll do a really bad job... and to be honest, she kind of likes the look of the crop in mistress’s hand... The thing is though, Mistress knows this..."

paulwdavidson
05-19-2005, 09:06 AM
Congratulations, mate, on a fantastic biy of cheeky art.


Very well done.

Good luck

Paul

Tariq12
05-19-2005, 09:11 AM
Congrats mate. :thumbsup: This is one of my top three favs.
Cheers,
T. :applause:

SEL
05-19-2005, 09:26 AM
Very nice final! I feel you will do good with the competion, great job!

SEL

digitalhadz
05-19-2005, 09:57 AM
nice story... poor girl. Congrats dude well done.

MDN67
05-19-2005, 10:17 AM
amazing piece of art, i :love:kitty and her mistress, great work and good luck for the end

Miyagu
05-19-2005, 11:22 AM
congrats aly!

itīs looking amazing! :applause::applause::applause:

good luck!!!

NOOB!
05-19-2005, 11:24 AM
great final! good luck!

Mythmaker
05-19-2005, 12:01 PM
Wow dude! :D

To be honest I initially thought the theme you'd chosen was a little uninspired. But you've handled it so well - Now it's definitely amongst my favs! Nice one! :thumbsup:

Good luck in the finals...

PeterPuppet
05-19-2005, 12:26 PM
I canīt say that it came out very nicely as it was very nice from the beginning. Itīs just even better now :thumbsup: Your pic is definately the hottest, congrats. I wish you luck in the judging. Looking forward to cya in the next challenge :)


peace, pete

BlackDidThis
05-19-2005, 12:30 PM
I WAS wondering what kind of a story you were going to attach to this one :)

A lot of changes came to this one.. and all to develop into this fantastic result.
Congratulations on your entry Aly.. And even though you don't need too much of it; I wish you the BEST of luck!

It all looks just FANTASTIC!


Black

the-mighty-m
05-19-2005, 12:42 PM
Detail and lighting are awesome! Really well done!

element5
05-19-2005, 01:23 PM
Love your humor Aly and love this piece, greatly realized :applause: Goodluck

3dRaven
05-19-2005, 02:01 PM
Congrats on your final Aly :thumbsup: Great style.

Best of luck

CoreyArtE
05-19-2005, 02:03 PM
Hey posh! We made it man! its finaly over, but hey, there have been some amazing entries and alot of new stuff learned throughout the course of this challenge. One of the best pictures i've seen in the competition honestly, very good man! You deserve alot of respect! Good luck!:thumbsup:

beak
05-19-2005, 02:12 PM
Yep

cool
sexy
detailed

nice
:applause:

AlyFell
05-19-2005, 02:14 PM
Well the die is cast now! I must admit to being not completeley happy with the final pic. I was a bit silly in changing details like the Mistress character at the last minute when I should have been concentrating on the overall image. And considering I'd spent time getting my drawing how I wanted it at the start, there's not much of an excuse for that. And the last thing I did was tweak Kittys eyes cause I thought she was looking too far back and now she looks cross eyed to me... Oh well! Excuses... excuses... no use crying over spilt milk I spose! Doh... I made a joke. Why I laugh?

Good luck to everyone who helped me with this, and were just fantastic! I won't pick out anyone in particular 'cause everyone's brilliant. Duddlebug told me it was like a big community during the challenge and he was right. My first! And doubtfully my last! I have genuinely learnt a great deal from this experience; one thing being don't call yourself a girls name unless it's Linda! ;) Hehe! Oooh missus...

Posh!

Zephyri
05-19-2005, 02:23 PM
Great Moses Aly, that's amazing! Your technical skills are definitely some of the best I've seen on this website, your understanding of everything you paint is unbelievable, for someone like me, starting out for real in digital, watching your processes has been really great. And your sense of humour just rocks. All those little humane details spread a grin on my face... my absolute favourite is the Pixie washing up liquid. Phenomenal work. Best of luck in judging, though I seriously doubt you'll need it.

abourabe
05-19-2005, 03:21 PM
very excellent I really mean it Aly and I hope you win my friend .. thnx for check out my pic I really appreciate that !!

xric7
05-19-2005, 03:25 PM
amazing till final!!
congratulation.:applause: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :bounce: :buttrock:

crowley
05-19-2005, 06:09 PM
Well, you know how much I love you image Aly, so I'll just say I'm really happy you finished it. It was a thrill to follow the evolution of your work. Congratulations on this beautiful (and very funny) piece of art! :D

(and thanks a lot for all the kind comments on my thread :) )

tAstyBITs
05-19-2005, 06:36 PM
Looks great, glad I could help a bit. Good luck with the judgin. This is is really funny, "I (heart) KY, lol.

BlacKeri
05-19-2005, 07:17 PM
KINKY! Haha sorry, had to say this XDI love the humour, technically superb as well. I definitely see you among the winners <3

AndrewRaZ
05-19-2005, 08:45 PM
amazing, absolutely amazing. beautiful and hilarious. you definitely have my vote.

i still want to know if i can get a print somehow :love:

igorstshirts
05-19-2005, 09:01 PM
I've been watching this the whole time... The whole comp is just beautiful. Good luck.

SavageCreature
05-19-2005, 09:14 PM
Aly,
Thanks for sharing! It was a lot of fun to follow along and I love your finished product. I'll never look at the kitchen the same again. Good luck with the judging, though luck's got nothing to do with it!
c.

Ducklator
05-19-2005, 09:25 PM
without words...

you're AMAZING!!

It's incredible, it's beautiful, it's great, it's cool, it's sexy, it's amazing, it's... its... I don't know what to say...:eek:

you are T.H.E. B.E.S.T O.F. T.H.E. B.E.S.T.!!!:buttrock:

I love you!!!:love:

You are a Goddess!!!:rolleyes:

now, I can die happy... thanks Poshspice.:thumbsup:

kerembeyit
05-19-2005, 09:48 PM
Just wanted to say your final piece looks stunning Aly. I wish you good luck mate:)

Rudeone
05-19-2005, 09:54 PM
wonderfull piece this turned out to be, love all the small details and love your style, congratulations with a succesfull finish:thumbsup:

THECLYKE
05-19-2005, 10:53 PM
YOU DID IT YOU DID IT:applause::applause::buttrock:

GREAT JOB


GOOD LUCK

Nigel-Q
05-19-2005, 11:03 PM
nice one, aly!

this is beautifully rendered and has so much character. you sure do know how to paint the dirty birdies!
cheers!

cyberarts
05-19-2005, 11:07 PM
your work is simply gorgeous! I really like your style! the perspective is nice! i really feel the submission sensation with that angle view.

Congratulation, your are very talented!

i wish you good luck!

camtheman
05-19-2005, 11:38 PM
Looks like someone's going to give the competition a good spanking!! Great work, good luck in the voting...

beelow
05-20-2005, 12:04 AM
Really good,Image! I love it! Bad Kitty! See you in the Next challenge!:applause:

goktugg
05-20-2005, 12:17 AM
so much sweet artwork!:) "Great!"
Congratulation >Good luck*Aly

TheFirstAngel
05-20-2005, 12:35 AM
Aly, you really done pure eyecandy here! cant say how much i love your work! congrats on your final piece, loving it, your kitchen and everything in it. rightclick save as and with hope awaiting your wallpaper! i posted something in my thread already :D hope ya like it!
Best of luck my friend, you really did a bloody freakin bum kickin' awesome piece, lovin' it!!!:love: :love: :love:

ace4016
05-20-2005, 12:35 AM
Congrats! This was one of my most favorite. You must give us a big one so we could have a poster over our computers. Waiting for your site to be finished. Good luck and best wishes.

taz23
05-20-2005, 11:41 AM
Congratulations Aly, great characters, composition, lights, ambient, colors and idea...is there anything left? :) Great great job! :applause: Congratulations again and good luck! Hope to see you in the next challenge!:thumbsup:

Squibbit
05-20-2005, 12:29 PM
I can't find a thing wrong in the pic...umm.. unless it's that one playin a cat
or sumthin and that other one got some weird stuff goin on too, looks like ...
humans...

tuck
05-20-2005, 12:37 PM
I love the color and characters.
Good luck for the competition.
:thumbsup: :eek:

demonicoz
05-20-2005, 12:46 PM
Wow Ally this has really come out to be a stunning piece. Its simply delicious. I love the detail, the style, the characters, its the bizz! Its gotta be in the top pieces. Oh and nice girls (grrrrrrrr....heh heh).
I hope you can spare a few minutes and check mine out and tell me what you think of it.
Its on:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=234420

All feedback much appreciated; Thanks & Good Luck to us All!

ozhaver
05-20-2005, 09:49 PM
Oh WOW, this is one of my favorites in the Challenge! <3

on a side note. You would LOVE my sister...I can swear it...she looks like your girls...

artjunkie
05-21-2005, 11:59 AM
Congrats on such a playful and sexy piece of work. Amazing details and wonderful composition. A front runner in the competition for sure!

Good luck,

cheers

jeromoo
05-21-2005, 12:12 PM
Heh Heh! Really well-executed although the setting looks out of place with that kind of characters. Wish you all the best!

AlyFell
05-21-2005, 01:21 PM
Heh heh! Thanks for the continued feedback guys and gals! I've kind of come back to this pic a bit this weekend and looked at it with fresh eyes, so I'm making a few changes to it just for myself, as I don't think we can correct sumbitted images anyway. I'm slightly upping the contrast in certain areas and altering Kittys face a bit. There's something about her eyes which changed a bit on the last day of tweaking; and it keeps bugging me. Her right, our left, seems misplaced somehow. So I'll eventually post it in the finished 2D section with the changes which a lot of people seem to be doing anyway. And I'll put up a link to a high res one if anybodys interested...

Oz Haver - Haha! But you're in Puerto Rico!

:)

theuni
05-21-2005, 05:59 PM
Hi,

wow fantastic detailed painting you created here :thumbsup: Well done... I really like the strong lines in it!!!

yeray
05-21-2005, 08:06 PM
I like their work, very sexy and seductora, works very well the environment, good luck :D

TheMagnetic
05-21-2005, 08:21 PM
uh yah this is really really good. There is so much to look at in this image. very wonderful. i could go on for so long about all the little details but that wouldnt make sense because your the one who put them in in the first place. well great work. I am so impressed!!

Matze4d
05-21-2005, 08:25 PM
nearly can't stand the cuteness of kitty ... :eek:

amazing :applause:

patina
05-21-2005, 08:33 PM
Hi Poshspice

me owwwwwwwwwwwwwww! this image definately appeals to males, lots
of attitude, nice one, lovely drawing style

my m-s
The Hunchback
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=231985

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 11:45 PM
hahaha, Aly, just me again. just wnted to thank you for all the help, encouragements and your cheering. you simply rock! best wishes, all the best and hehe, more updates??? can't wait to see, well, so go go go! keep on rocking!

AIR
05-22-2005, 02:28 PM
Hi poshspice dude.Your imagery is reminding me of nebezials comic book.
i like the emount of detail you put in here.Overall impression is that you manage to create something worthy here.
good luck in judging thing. :thumbsup:

ebrowning
05-22-2005, 08:23 PM
This has got to be a favorite in the competition- great job!

mack72
05-23-2005, 08:44 AM
AMazing! This turned out purrrfect! ( I apologise for the hideous pun..!!) Seriously though, this is a beautiful piece. Love the subtle humour, and the normality (is that a word?) of the setting. Definately some kind of prize.

Congratulations
Mack

jugeras
05-23-2005, 12:36 PM
congrats on your piece n gud luck :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

eddieellis
05-23-2005, 02:54 PM
My Fav by far.... :thumbsup: .. i love it

walrus
05-23-2005, 05:03 PM
Hey, Aly, congrats for finishing! I'm just back from my trip and only now getting to look around and really take in everyones' finished pieces. Great work, I'm sure we'll see you in the winner's circle in the end! :)

-mike

AndyH
05-23-2005, 05:40 PM
Any update on the new and improved, super sized version?

Take your time though - youve worked enough - im just curious, is all....

Ducklator
05-23-2005, 08:25 PM
hey... Hi poshspice!again: I love your work and I love you! hahaha...

when you finish your work, please, give a link for a high resolution image, ok? I wondering if I can have this image:love:

thanks...:thumbsup:

adijin
05-24-2005, 04:48 AM
I LOVE the cat-girl character, sooo cute...

Calveccio
05-25-2005, 03:49 PM
Hey Aly, fantastic artwork as usual. A really nice concept :thumbsup: I hope you win :D

...but just out of interest, or maybe its me imagining things...I'm starting to think that 'Bad Kitty' is the same girl as 'Lady Frances Drake (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=194487&page=1&pp=15)', am I wrong?!?! So are you subconsciously painting self portraits, or is this a friend or a girlfriend?

Anywayz all the best with the comp, hurry up and get your website up!! I'd love to see some more of your work and maybe some tutorials in the future. :deal:

All the best, Cal.

-NG-
05-26-2005, 11:34 PM
OMG!:thumbsup: Linda has a rival. :) I really like this painting, excellent style. Good luck in the challenge!

BlackDidThis
05-26-2005, 11:51 PM
...but just out of interest, or maybe its me imagining things...I'm starting to think that 'Bad Kitty' is the same girl as 'Lady Frances Drake (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=194487&page=1&pp=15)', am I wrong?!?! So are you subconsciously painting self portraits, or is this a friend or a girlfriend?...Woow good catch there...
Really think it over Aly, if not too vivid, she may be of someone you are close to.
I notice that especially when I am doing a randome set of heads for crowds in my comic books... it ends up that while trying to do sketches of heads to fill the crowd, I have my whole past sketched out!

BTW your image Lady Frances Drake (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=194487&page=1&pp=15) is outstanding! :thumbsup:... As to be expected :)

Keep em up Aly!!


Black

gonchelas
05-27-2005, 03:49 PM
tHAT SALVE CHIC...SHES HOT!!!, gtreat work!!!