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RBancone
03-22-2005, 05:43 AM
Riccardo Bancone has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5768)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: First Coloring
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5768/5768_1111699001_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5768/5768_1111699001_large.jpg)

First coloring..I think the final image will have contours..but I'll remake it from the beginning.

RBancone
03-22-2005, 05:45 AM
This is my first challenge here..i hope i will be good enough..good luck to all!

RBancone
03-22-2005, 06:39 PM
Ok...let's start..i am sketching the first lines..my idea is an android with human aspect (servant)(that you can see in the image) and a woman (master) with a little remote control like the one used for open the car doors that hugs him and touch his face.
Her face is faced to his face..(face face face..i didn't say "face enough":) ) and her eyes aim wher his eyes do..she is giving him an order and he's going to execute it without doubts.
i want the android 's face without any expression,he's totally under her control..
In the dark zones of his face i'll probably add some blue lines that make understand that he's not totally human..

http://img174.exs.cx/img174/5027/masterandservant14tm.jpg

RBancone
03-24-2005, 08:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5768/5768_1111699001_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5768/5768_1111699001_large.jpg)

First coloring..I think the final image will have contours..but I'll remake it from the beginning.

TheFirstAngel
04-01-2005, 11:52 PM
Hi mate, good to see you here too.
the remotecontroll snt even required to controll a male, don't you remember, asmile or whatever can make them fall... lol
nice concept so far, i'd go for a bit more research indephtg of your concept, to nail out the aspects you want to illustrate in your story. like tthe remote controller for example.
the male's lips look a bit female for me at the moment. all in all looking nice. keep it up mate!
cheers:thumbsup:

RBancone
04-02-2005, 04:54 AM
Thanks!The little remote control is just what i wanted..I whish i could have one for girls..

Cheers.

Groady
04-02-2005, 06:19 AM
Looking good so far. Got a good sense of light. I agree with the1st_angel. Those lips are kinda girly.

redfrog
04-02-2005, 06:44 AM
Nice illustration so far. Only suggestion i'd make is to add a little expression to the faces, that way you have more of an insight to your characters. Will add depth.

Coreius
04-02-2005, 07:06 AM
Nice work on the concept shading, though you would need to be more expressive on the facial features, nice work overall :)

My Master and Servant Entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224109)

RBancone
04-02-2005, 05:21 PM
I think i'll redo the master..because i don't like her.The servant has no expression because i want that he seems without personality..and totally under his master's control..

Thanks guys!

maozao
04-02-2005, 05:27 PM
hi, nice coloring
i guess i feel somthing wrong with that nose
cant tell what exactly

and yes add some expression
cya good luck :)

AlyFell
04-18-2005, 04:59 PM
The lighting on the face so far is gorgeous! Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

TheFirstAngel
04-20-2005, 01:58 AM
hmmmmmm. WAKE UP :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: !!!

lol, update update!

RBancone
04-20-2005, 12:05 PM
uh!??no pease mama..just another minute...:)

I am locked...can't find the skin tones on the master..sigh!

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 04:50 PM
Ric! there's gonna be a next episode and you did a great job, so keep on it and rock em all the next time! you started so great and it looked so promissing, just trust your skills and go for it! there's always a possebilety at the end of the way to tweak some parts, you have it in you so let it flow! keep it up my friend!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

RBancone
05-21-2005, 06:41 PM
Sigh:sad: ..thanks..I was very buisy in this period so I didn't have aby time to continue it..study..school trip ecc..I hope the next time i will have more time:sad:

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