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lynch
03-22-2005, 06:37 AM
jason lynch has entered the Master and Servant 2D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5765)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: adding enviroment
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1116048167_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1116048167_large.jpg)

heres is another update i am totally using all the wrong clors for what i intended but i got to do something may be i will revisit this topic at a later date. Any suggestions.

ace4016
03-22-2005, 07:09 AM
Good luck.

ms@zx
03-25-2005, 04:27 AM
aniticipating for urs lynch~good luck:)

MDN67
03-25-2005, 06:20 AM
hi jason i'm glad to see you, good luck:thumbsup:

Rhenia
03-25-2005, 11:18 PM
Just want to say good luck :)

lynch
04-01-2005, 04:09 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1112328548_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1112328548_large.jpg)

heres the first few sketches i think i might go with ,i was going to go with a futuristic type of concetration camp but i think i'll go with this dark wizard or sorcerer riding a chariot being pulled by some demons. I have to work on the layout alot im not sure exactly how I'll do it and i got to come up with some cooler designs .The story and title will come later but i would appreciate some guidance and hardcore crits.

CoreyArtE
04-01-2005, 04:31 AM
I love the sketch on the right side. But I love the whole concept period! I'm a sucker for action scenes! Hey, you should experiment and try this same concept with the master and his servants facing towards the viewer from a worm's eyes view. Would be cool to see how that looks.Cant wait to see this colored! I'm a fan of your work goodluck!:thumbsup:

SideAche
04-01-2005, 04:46 AM
Nice sketches! I agree with Corey however if you decide to stay with the side view, you may consider flipping it horizontal so that the action moves left to right. keep the good stuff comin"

Reapse
04-01-2005, 04:50 AM
I agree with Corey a wormseye vie might have a nice effect. I can already tell your final will be awesome, your sketches are lookin real good. The only thing I can say is the view could be more dramatic.

Groady
04-01-2005, 06:11 AM
I 3rd the worms-eye-view idea. May be worth a quick sketch. I like the sketch on the right the best. Might be interesting to differenciate the look of each demon slightly, give them each a unique personality. Great sketches! :thumbsup:

kornel
04-01-2005, 06:18 AM
I love your dinamic composition!
Keep posting... i will interested the colour versions

cheers: KornÚl

lynch
04-01-2005, 04:02 PM
thank you for the response guys ,a much lower persective might definately make it more dynamic I'll try harder at that , its not one of my strong suits but i'll try

please keep the crits coming, hold nothing back theres a lot to learn ,but for now i'm out cause im at work ,'can't let the boss see me not working.

paulwdavidson
04-01-2005, 04:09 PM
Very cool potential


Good luck with it

Paul

mack72
04-01-2005, 04:15 PM
Very nice sketches! Looking forward to watching this grow!


Good luck
Mack

maozao
04-01-2005, 05:55 PM
wow, that is some awesome sketchs
post more :)
good luck

MechaHateChimp
04-03-2005, 07:11 AM
Holy hell Jason! Thats one awesome sketch... Im loving the movement as well as the way the skeleton angels are looking... fierce man! Thank you for your comment by the way!

tilite
04-03-2005, 10:58 AM
deffinetly the sketch on the right... no question.
and when u get home from work.. lol... have u got an update for us.

thsi is going to be great:wise:
:thumbsup:

BaronImpossible
04-03-2005, 11:53 AM
The sketch on the left isn't working; the one on the right is looking much better. Still, IMO you have a composition problem. You have the chariot swerving straight out of the picture, which frankly makes the viewer say, so what? What would really get this going is if you had the chariot swerving right at the viewer, and one of the demons much more in the fore-front, screaming upwards into the viewer's face. The guy would be looking more towards us, but not at us. The other chariot would be angled slightly towards us rather than appear in profile, as if it was making the same manoever seconds afterwards, following the first. The designs of the guys and the demons are wonderful, I don't think you need to change them, just the composition. Great start.

conundrum
04-03-2005, 04:44 PM
only just found your thread, judging by your space opera this should be a definate contender. I like the sketch so far particularly the design of the demons. certainly the right though, a much more dynamic comp. looking forward to more progress. good luck

birdybear
04-09-2005, 04:49 PM
Like your idea. Agree with flipping your composition to a horizontal frame. If you give the first chariot a longer lead it will look like the demons are really pulling at the ropes. I love the right sketch of the driver. I like that his arm is up and his chest is expanded, you can see that lots of force it coming through his swing. He looks nice and tense, really into the ride. I'd love to see him looking at the other driver. It will bring a better flow through the composition and make him look like he's really getting mad about not being the one a little bit ahead in the race. I also love that he's holding a whip because I think it has fantastic potential to swoop in and over everyones heads (a great composition element). Maybe even having it land a tiny bit on one of the demons, causing him to look back with his eyes as if he's really mad at his master but would never ever dare to attack.
Keep posting! I think this will be really great. Can't wait to see more. Great expresions! Especially on the demons!

TheFirstAngel
04-10-2005, 05:03 PM
unexpected dark creation but way cool. bout the pov, maybe let the chariot move slightly more towards the camera, sort of ben-hur feeling, like overruning the watcher... keep on going, looking forward to your work here! wish you best luck and a lot of fun:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: !

tilite
04-13-2005, 08:56 AM
agreeing completely with angel here.

u are such a great artist i love ur work... cant wait for this to evolve

lynch
05-07-2005, 06:33 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115444022_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115444022_large.jpg)

hi guys i have not been on for a while only eleven days left and i'm changing my idea to something more magical i'll leave the demons for a personal project.Here are a couple sketches thrown together not quit how i invivsion it but i promise i'll be back in time with the rest of the snow queen ,i'm sure you guys know the original snow queen story but in this image i'll change it up . sorry to those who would rather see demons but as i said i'm still doing it ,just not for this challenge

SEL
05-07-2005, 07:07 AM
This is really going to be great if you finish, you so far have a great color sense and im sure the characters will be awesome when done! Good luck!

SEL

tilite
05-07-2005, 11:30 AM
this will be great (if u finnish:eek: )!!!

and still those demons would be better in a personal piece where ur got anything u want to work with.

just make the paint fly

O.Martin
05-07-2005, 03:02 PM
This has potential! :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
05-08-2005, 07:25 PM
i wonder what happend to your work. Just came to see how its going. the queen/kay sketch looks awesome. keep it up!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

lynch
05-10-2005, 06:24 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115702636_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115702636_large.jpg)

heres another late section i hope i finish .work and family stress, anyway ...line art ,kinda, i did most on the computer because i got tired of wasting paper,its not that easy for me and it does not look as cool but practice makes perfect. serious crits welcome as always.

lynch
05-13-2005, 06:28 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115962103_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115962103_large.jpg)

i'm trying really hard to go find time to finish this but this. comments please.

lynch
05-13-2005, 06:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115962810_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1115962810_large.jpg)

heres a closer look, i wish i could think of a way to have my finished image viewed like this.

AdrielaSakamoto
05-13-2005, 06:59 AM
This is just wonderful and beautiful and creepy all at the same time. When I first saw this I was reminded of the little boy in "The Red Violin" for some reason. The same haunted look in the eyes I think. This child is very goth/victorian, which is a creepy era to me anyway.

I am looking forward to seeing where this image takes you.

Best,

Adri

E.T
05-13-2005, 09:20 PM
oh this is beautiful, really intense. If you cant make the whole painting in time, finish the boy anyway, hes too good to waste.

Nox
05-13-2005, 11:06 PM
looking good lynch nice work.

lynch
05-14-2005, 06:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1116048167_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/8/5765/5765_1116048167_large.jpg)

heres is another update i am totally using all the wrong clors for what i intended but i got to do something may be i will revisit this topic at a later date. Any suggestions.

ms@zx
05-14-2005, 07:08 AM
nice color scheme,it got this cold chilling feel from the scenes.anticipating to see the final outcome!:)

TheFirstAngel
05-21-2005, 10:13 PM
Jason, i really love what you do. your avatar girl is so ubercute, went to search the thread of her. please, finnish your work here, its just wonderfull, and it would be a shame not to bring it to the end. keep on rocking and see you in the WIP section!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

ilusiondigital
05-23-2005, 03:51 PM
I say the same: please finish this beautiful image.

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