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yeray
03-22-2005, 02:41 AM
Yeray Del Pino has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5717)

Latest Update: Final Image: FINAL IMAGE
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116384469_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116384469_large.jpg)

Final image

thanks to everybody, to read me, to answer me, THANK YOU and I hope we all are lucky :D

gracias de veras :D

yeray
03-22-2005, 02:44 AM
Hello and luck to everybody

arLutiK
03-22-2005, 02:45 AM
Good luck to you as well

yeray
03-27-2005, 02:27 AM
good, here my idea;

The topic: the master, the drugs and the human as servant, I still have to alter the idea, but this it is the root, I hope they like my idea, post an image, a hug and luck

yeray
03-27-2005, 12:18 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111929495_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111929495_large.jpg)

Concept Sketch

blakbird
03-27-2005, 12:32 PM
Yeray, your idea is strikingly good.

But you must choose this concept for only one of the stages 2d or 3d. They say (administrators) that we must choose different concepts if we attend to both of the challenges.

yeray
03-27-2005, 12:53 PM
are you right, like I can correct it? I go to that of 2D and I cannot erase it, ahhhhh

thank you to warn me

sonicstrawbery
03-27-2005, 01:01 PM
I like your idea even if it's a bit off the wall... Looking forward to see what you're gonna do:)

Matroskin
03-27-2005, 01:23 PM
Hi yeray,
Really well demonstrated graphic, espacially fingers.
Actually I see it better in 2d but in 3d it could also come out a good stuff.
wc walls can add an outstanding tragetic aspect of that fallen's soul...:)

Wait to c more material!

my MASTER/&/servant XXX

yeray
03-27-2005, 03:22 PM
Thank you Cipher and Thank you Deryk, the truth is that the wall will give soul to the scene, now post the outline of colors, thank you

yeray
03-27-2005, 04:35 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111944916_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111944916_large.jpg)

Update the concept

yeray
03-27-2005, 08:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111958258_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1111958258_large.jpg)

I am beginning to model the body

Ballo
03-28-2005, 05:18 PM
El dibujo y modelado que llevas me gusta, pero la idea es bastante obvia. Con la droga se puede jugar mucho y no solo hacer yonkis decrepitos.

In english, please.....mmmhhhhh very beatiful modelling!!.Good Luck!!

Shazam3D
03-28-2005, 05:43 PM
Que pasa tio :)

Like I told you in 3DP (http://www.3dpoder.com/foro3dpoder/showthread.php?t=24261), I like your idea and your sketch.

The final image must have a treatment very detailed and meticulous of textures and illumination to give the dramatic effect that you transmit with the sketch and that suggests your idea.
A approximate illumination I believe that it would be very useful when modeling.

I want to see more, good luck and keep on rockin' :buttrock:

wdcstudios
03-28-2005, 05:53 PM
nice, I had thought of doing something simular but glad i didn't because your s is looking good so far

Caronte
03-28-2005, 06:43 PM
Interesting sketch, prepare a good library of dirty textures for the 3D work ;)

Good Luck!

yeray
03-28-2005, 07:37 PM
Thank you guys ;)

Ballo---> Hola tio :D Realmente no se con que mas jugar con la droga, pues necesitaba algo impactancte y esto era lo mejor.
I really wanted it impactante and this it was the best idea.

Shazam--> Que tal Shazam. I hope to give him that final treatment of textures, I think that everything was based on the texture and in the illumination

wdcstudios-->because you don't do it? ;)

Caronte--->Thank you men, I will have to make a good library ;)

DaddyMack
03-28-2005, 08:04 PM
Whoah, hi yeray, great approach and treatment so far, I'd pay extra close attention to modelling wiry muscles and tendons, I think it would really add to the sense of urgency in this image.
Good luck!

yeray
03-28-2005, 08:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112043927_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112043927_large.jpg)

Update shirt and body

yeray
03-28-2005, 08:12 PM
DaddyMack--->thank you men, I will center myself in the muscles and tendons, to give force to the image (modeling)

lanedaughtry
03-29-2005, 12:06 AM
Very ballsy choice.

I thought about going this route as well but decided against it.

I think you've really captured the essence of this beast though. The fact that the users face and identity are kept out of view is an interesting touch to me. Makes the act itself the focus and not the user.

$0.02

-L

slime
03-29-2005, 02:04 AM
Looking nice so far.
Keep the updates coming :D

yeray
03-30-2005, 02:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112152333_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112152333_large.jpg)

Update anatomical body

yeray
03-30-2005, 02:19 AM
lane_daughtry-----> Thank you men ;)

Slime----> Thank you Slime, I hope to upgrade fast, I hope it like, gracias por contestar :D

Matroskin
03-30-2005, 03:31 AM
Wow, so fast you've got impressive progress:applause:
Here is little thing I find incorrect - the left hand. I think forearm is rotated incorrectly. Well, not this, another explanation: shoulder seems to be too still, it doesn't follow arm. Or both doubts connected together...
The thing I really liked in your scetch was that dramatic tention, mowement. I understand it is not finished, but I hope you'll keep that close to your cool drawing.
Keep on! Good work!

Ravendsg
03-30-2005, 11:31 AM
Really great modelling man! I like the way the muscles are clearly defined in your works and how you pose the model! Looking forward to more!!! :thumbsup:

sonicstrawbery
03-30-2005, 11:55 AM
Yearay it's a cool progress, nice to see the model in 3d, the only thing that bother me for the moment is the left arm, the musces deformation seems a bit strange... looking forward :wip:

yeray
03-30-2005, 10:15 PM
Deryk------->I agree with you, I have to change the left arm, tomorrow update. Thank you Deryk for the comments, is very good comments.

Ravendsg--->thank you, I hope to advance rapid and I have to define the muscles better

Cipher------>thank you, I will improve the arm :D

Thank you for the comments :D

yeray
04-02-2005, 12:33 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112405626_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112405626_large.jpg)

Update legs and background

arLutiK
04-02-2005, 07:14 AM
Nice work :thumbsup:

yeray
04-02-2005, 11:04 AM
thank you Arlutik ;) now I want to make the left arm well

yeray
04-02-2005, 05:40 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112467204_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112467204_large.jpg)

Update arms, hands, shirt and trousers

yeray
04-03-2005, 01:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112496047_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112496047_large.jpg)

Update Hand

arayma
04-03-2005, 03:30 AM
hi. I like your idea. genial, no te olvides, de las fotitos. besitos y good luck.

yeray
04-04-2005, 05:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112634514_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112634514_large.jpg)

some illumination, update hands, shirt and muscles

A78
04-04-2005, 05:57 PM
:D Hey man! looks awesome!! :applause:, so beatiful as strong , i love specially the anatomy on this , i cant waith to see this piece finished!,Good Luck! :thumbsup:

yeray
04-04-2005, 07:24 PM
Arayma----> thank you my love, you have surprised me

A78-------> Hey men¡¡ thank you for the comments, I thought that you would present yourself to the section 2D, I will advance quickly :D

sonicstrawbery
04-04-2005, 07:49 PM
Hey Yeray, nice modeling updates, anatomy of the character is really cool and credible...this beginning of mood work is good also....Keep it up that good work :)

DaddyMack
04-04-2005, 08:58 PM
Hi again yeray, awesome, awesome work so far, Keep it up man:thumbsup::thumbsup:

I really like the lean on the wall and the assymetry of his shoulders

Maybe a tight strap on his right arm, just above the injection site, to really accentuate that area...

Cygnus-X
04-04-2005, 09:18 PM
WOW great idea that gonna be a really interesting piece to fallow keep it up

Maxko
04-04-2005, 09:29 PM
I Like this Thread... GO GO GO..

yeray
04-05-2005, 12:08 AM
Cipher------>Thank you, I worry about the anatomy a lot and I want that this good

DaddyMack->Thank you for the comments, now I will begin with the belt, many friends say it to me

Cygnus_X and Maxko--->Thank you for the comments, they help a lot

melkao
04-05-2005, 01:26 AM
hey nice concept. i lkie the way that you show that the drugs control too many people, making them slaves.
good work and good look

kirouac
04-05-2005, 01:35 AM
I love ur modelisation ! nice work keep it in this way dude :thumbsup: brazil use r? that blue GI ? remember me something !

jmBoekestein
04-05-2005, 02:18 AM
Wow!

Very cool modelling! Very powerrful idea leaving the face out!:thumbsup:

So I guess you're going overdrive on the texturing here. Seems like you're almost done with the modelling!!!

mmoir
04-05-2005, 02:26 AM
Yeray,
Nice modeling and a good idea you have, like the lighting too. Good luck.

Matroskin
04-05-2005, 03:40 AM
yeray, awesome sad strong scene. Blue lightning adds good atmosphere. Yeah - cold, surreal...
Very close to scetch! High level modellinghttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif

tharrell
04-05-2005, 04:09 AM
Love the work so far. Evokes the emaciated junkie out of a Burroughs novel perfectly.

You've captured the emotion in the pose and model without needing the face at all so far.

My concept started out very similar to yours. It still is to a degree, but far less serious and subtle.

Best of luck!

Juha
04-05-2005, 04:43 AM
thats one nasty looking picture you have there.. allmost makes me feel sick...
really top class stuff...like the drawing and the model looks really good.. keep going..

azaghot
04-05-2005, 10:09 AM
very strong scene i love it

shotta
04-05-2005, 05:33 PM
Eres Yeray de 3dpoder ?.Soy essmigo, me gusta mucho tu modelo,mucha suerte tio :thumbsup:

alex.h.
04-05-2005, 05:38 PM
great and realy in to real life(scary) but exelent work. see you and :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

manjang
04-05-2005, 06:57 PM
nic idea man,hope you good luck;-)

yeray
04-06-2005, 01:10 AM
wowww thank you guys :D

melkao-------->thank you for the comments, I hope you like the next update :)

dominikmk----->I use Vray, Brazil and I don't take ourselves well, thank you ;)

jmBoekestein-->:D thank you for the comment, now I will begin with the textures

mmoir--------->Thank you men, the lighting are not the definitive

Deryk--------->heyy men Thank you, you support me a lot, the light will have blue and brown to give him dramatismo ;)

tharrell------->thank you for the comments, their work is good: D good luck

Juha--------->thank you men

azaghot------>thank you

shotta------->Hola Essmigol, si soy ese yeray, o mejor dicho -YeraY- un abrazooo ;)

alex.h.------>Thank you for the comment

manjang----> very thank you ;)

yeray
04-06-2005, 01:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112749962_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112749962_large.jpg)

test the Zbrush for the first time, only test

pigwater
04-06-2005, 01:37 AM
wonderful stuff ... the z is really make the most of it

powerful image :thumbsup:

Matroskin
04-06-2005, 02:54 PM
Wow, some day have to try Z-brush. For sure!!
Has cool look with surface details! I can become mad doing that stuff in traditional (subdivs)way!

yeray
04-06-2005, 08:34 PM
pigwater---->Thank you men ;)

Deryk------->Hey men thank you, test it, it is very good and easy :D

yeray
04-07-2005, 06:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112899854_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1112899854_large.jpg)

beginning the background :D

IkerCLoN
04-08-2005, 02:02 AM
Hey, Yeray, keep it up! You're doing a superb work. But try to follow the concept you sketched some posts ago: I think the "bendy" look, with asymmetrical pose, will make the model earning some points (o sea, que le dobles las piernas, carajo ;)). And break that WC, dude! :D

JensDenker
04-08-2005, 02:19 AM
Cool moddeling, love it!

Marcus_B
04-08-2005, 03:08 AM
great idea man ...I like how u can't see the character's face.

yeray
04-08-2005, 06:43 PM
IkerClon----> HEYYYYY :D thank you men :D I try to copy the sketch, and now I will begin with the textures, I will break the WC¡¡¡

Jed D------>thank you :D

Marcus_B-->Thank you for the comments ;)

Mobra
04-08-2005, 08:00 PM
Hey Yeray,

I really like the character modeling and the scene mood is just amazing!!

Terrific Job!!

See u!!

melkao
04-09-2005, 12:31 AM
that's going to look very good:)

yeray
04-10-2005, 12:57 PM
Mobra, Melkao--->thank you for the comments ;)

WimH
04-10-2005, 01:02 PM
I like the model so far. I think you can make it a really expressive image. Watch the movie Requiem for a Dream. Greets


http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=224025&page=4&pp=15

yeray
04-10-2005, 04:14 PM
crapple----->:D I will watch the movie, thank you for the reference

smaddl
04-10-2005, 08:28 PM
great and strong image :thumbsup:

Mordalles
04-10-2005, 08:36 PM
yeah, this is starting to look really great, and its really portraying youre idea excellently. great work!

slime
04-11-2005, 12:39 AM
Come on, Yeray, work harder; we are waiting for updates! :D

stefan
04-11-2005, 10:53 AM
That is good. But be carefull with using blue light in Enviroment /heard that it is inpossible to hit vein in blue light./ And good luck.

icedeyes
04-11-2005, 11:07 AM
Amazing yeray... The lighting setup works amazingly well and i also love the idea... Good luck with the challenge...

yeray
04-11-2005, 11:42 PM
smaddl----> thank you men :D

Mordalles--> thank you for the comments

stefan---->the lights are not still definitive, I hope to finish the textures first ;)

icedeyes-->thank you for the comments ;)


slime----->heyy men¡¡I am working hard, I hope to put tomorrow update¡¡¡ thank you :D thank you :D

alex.h.
04-11-2005, 11:59 PM
its a realy powerful and scary picture you have and its great :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

yeray
04-12-2005, 09:44 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113299088_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113299088_large.jpg)

lighting setup

yeray
04-12-2005, 09:46 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113299169_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113299169_large.jpg)

lighting setup

yeray
04-12-2005, 12:03 PM
alex.h---> thank you for the comments, i like your work ;) vbmenu_register("postmenu_2156071", true);

pissaro
04-12-2005, 12:28 PM
Great man, great

eddieellis
04-12-2005, 12:37 PM
great lighting dude.. got the lonelyness and desperation pinned

blackdragoncg
04-12-2005, 12:42 PM
Hi Yeray, Looking good mate looks like a winner to me :thumbsup: Can't wait to see this finished...good luck eh.. catch ya l8r...

safe05
04-12-2005, 06:40 PM
Very nice work! Excellent posing of the hands. The toilet rim looks a little odd to me, but overall this is truly an excellent piece. :thumbsup:

ihamid
04-12-2005, 08:16 PM
hi yeray....thats a cool concept and a beatiful dark moody composition!....nice work...like the model too:)!

melkao
04-12-2005, 08:26 PM
Man i really like the way that your image is going. Is a very deep concept, keep working.:scream:

HillbillyKing
04-12-2005, 09:57 PM
this scene is really looking great. I feel sorry for the character. The lighting is great. I see you toned it down from the first test to the second. I liked the highlights from the first scene. Wonder what something in the middle (between light test 1 and two) would look like.

Nice image

bealobo
04-12-2005, 10:09 PM
Hola!

this is going REALLY good, the concept is very strong, readable and the image just tells everything. :thumbsup:

Are you putting the light in blue? my suggestion would be a greenish as for sickness.

I can´t wait to see this completed.

:)

oh, I almost forgot: just one thing, it´s not to change it but to keep an eye on it. There´s a wrinkle on the t-shirt that goes right below the wrist and it makes a strange visual effect like if he would have two wrists one below the other. I suppose that this won´t be noticeable when textured, but who knows...

Matroskin
04-13-2005, 01:04 AM
Yeah, agree with others - great picture!
Special attention to a broken tile - gives a good taste of naturalism!

yeray
04-13-2005, 02:55 PM
Wow very thank you :D

pissaro,eddieellis---> thank you guys :D

blackdragoncg----->thank you for the comments men ;D ;)

safe05, yunisirees, melkao--->thank you too guys :D

HillbillyKing------->I will test the light between the 1 and the 2, thank you

bealobo---------> Hola ;) I had not noticed the wrinkle :D i will correct it, and I will make a test with the green light, thank you to answer

Deryk----------->hey men¡ right now I am breaking a little but the WC, thank you again for the comments

yeray
04-17-2005, 01:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113745977_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113745977_large.jpg)

test texture

Maxko
04-17-2005, 02:06 PM
GREAT modeling skills yeray.. really like it :) continue
and texture is good :)

CuneytGuclu
04-17-2005, 03:22 PM
I like your concept, for world big dangerous this matter! Congratulations...

And your technical details (model, light) is very good...Keep it up!

Good luck!...

arLutiK
04-18-2005, 01:42 AM
This is looking great, the background is really taking shape, and it suits your concept, love it.

Great Work !!!

:applause:

gra7
04-18-2005, 01:45 AM
wow man.. this is amazing !!

waiting to see more ! c ya !

yeray
04-18-2005, 01:48 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113788900_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113788900_large.jpg)

possible changes

Maxko
04-18-2005, 02:16 AM
Yes, it will be butter. I LIKE IT!! :) good work man, really good

arLutiK
04-18-2005, 07:17 AM
The details will b awesome, but the poor guy will get an infection with all that dirt and that needle (I hate needles)


Great Work !!!

melkao
04-18-2005, 02:19 PM
I like the futures details. Is very sad, a man using drugs in a dirty bathroom.
Looking great.:scream:

bealobo
04-18-2005, 02:26 PM
yeah, it´s a sad topic but a strong concept, so keep it up!

This dirt will look fine, but I just find the mouse a little distracting.

:thumbsup:

banzato
04-18-2005, 11:25 PM
Yeah, you are on the right way. Make that changes. Good work :thumbsup:

pixelkeg
04-18-2005, 11:35 PM
Really coming together, good work!

safe05
04-19-2005, 04:49 AM
I really like the changes you're proposing. However, I second bealobo's comment about the mouse. With the drawn pose it seems a little much. Perhaps you could just have the tail sticking out of the wall or the beady red eyes showing in the dark mouse hole...just to lower its presence a bit. Regardless, this is turning into an excellent piece! Really looking forward to your updates. :)

yeray
04-19-2005, 12:25 PM
Maxko, mmaxx-----> Thank you guys :D

arlutik, gra7-> thank you to answer me

Maxko-----> Thank you again ;)

arlutik----->hehehehe, because you hate the needles?? thank you for the comments again

melkao, banzato, pixelkeg--> thank you thank you :D

bealobo---> good observation, I believe that I will remove that detail :D


safe05---->I find a brilliant idea that of the malicious eyes :D will make some tests

yeray
04-19-2005, 03:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113925320_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1113925320_large.jpg)

texture test

Maxko
04-19-2005, 03:47 PM
INCREDIBLE WORK!! :) i like so much :thumbsup: great work man ..

yeray
04-19-2005, 08:42 PM
Thank you Maxko :D

DaddyMack
04-19-2005, 09:23 PM
Hi again yeray, sorry I aint been here in a while man.. Your piece is looking awesome man.

Looking at it I love his left forearm, wrist and hand, great tension! His neck kinda lends to the rudeness of his head..well done...

I can see many ways you could improve on little details and I really like this image man...so here goes...Feel free to completely ignore me 'course..

Tile grout thinner because it's kinda overpowering the main character at the moment composition wise, and I'm not sure but I think that square, or wider rectangular tiles will make him look thinner and taller..might be worth a look

Unless he's a really flexible guy, the way he's sittin would actually be kinda uncomfortable...I'd suggest bringing his left foot closer to his right and bending his knee inward so that it makes a bit more of an 'L' shape.. I'd also pull his bum away from the side wall a bit and lean him into it a bit more...both to break up the 'straight up and downness' of the image and to personify the discomfort he's in a bit more...I'd say the belted arm should have some more tweekin to really sorta bring out it's tension...More of a fist, tighter belt, more bulge around the belt and pull up a few tendons...The fold on his shorts (left) looks a little wierd, maybe they could be frayed at the bottom...

Your Image looks great man, just as it is so none of these things are needed they're just stuff that I thought would improve it if you get the time..

Keep the great work coming yeray:thumbsup:

melkao
04-20-2005, 03:29 PM
oh man, i really like your thread, the shirt is very cool.
will you gonna detail more the venis?

Schun
04-20-2005, 03:37 PM
Very nice idea !
& very nice junkie body modeling too ... just the legs have perhaps
too much muscles regarding the torso (but it can be the shoot beginning :D )

I like too your 1st Zbrush trying

PS
please forgive my poor english :shrug:
lol

yeray
04-20-2005, 11:09 PM
DaddyMack----> WOW hello again men¡¡¡, I have liked what you have said, I will make what says with the leg in "L", the tiles I will make them narrow and I will also change the pressure of the belt. It has impressed me their it criticizes, I hope not to disappoint, thank you for what has said :D ;)

melkao-------> hello again melkao, inside little I will begin with the detail, thank you for the comments

Schun------->thank you, inside little will put what I am making with Zbrush, don't worry about English, mine is also bad "ne vous inquiétez pas ;)"

arayma
04-20-2005, 11:19 PM
hi love! its realy good, I like the changes!!

arayma
04-20-2005, 11:48 PM
hi love!:love: i like the changes.!!:bounce: already it is left less. luck

Quel
04-21-2005, 07:10 AM
Ahy tienes mi apoyo moral Yeray !!, ¡¡¡ Espanitx Pawa !! ;)

Quel XX's (... :couto: ...)

ilusiondigital
04-21-2005, 08:19 AM
Muy buena imagen Yerai, te deseo mucha suerte, y espero ver los progresos


My master and servant http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=229417 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=229417)

DaddyMack
04-21-2005, 10:38 AM
I hope not to disappoint

Your image is mental, and I really love the realisation already...You couldn't disappoint me here if you tried...

Keep up the great work Yeray :thumbsup:

yeray
04-21-2005, 10:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114122585_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114122585_large.jpg)

Test tile texture

yeray
04-21-2005, 10:38 PM
Arayma-----> Thank you my love :D MUAAAAKA

Quel--------> Gracias por el apoyo tio ;) ¡¡¡ Espanitx Pawa !! ;)


ilusiondigital-> ummm un competidor ;) suerte y gracias


DaddyMack--> Thank you men :D I hope you correct me ;) and that you like

gremil
04-22-2005, 07:51 AM
Excelente, ahora si que si :)
Lo que más me gusta es que no hayas elegido el tema tan repetido de monstruos infernales y cosas similares, sino algo real al 100% :applause:
Muy bien por las correcciones a los azulejos, con esas pintadas (que sé que ibas a poner antes de que yo lo mencionara en 3dpoder :D ) bien situadas para que no desvíen la atención.
No habia visto la composición completa, que buena ambientación. Te deseo suerte, pues con muy poquita podrías quedar en buen lugar :shrug:
Saludos :thumbsup:

yeray
04-22-2005, 06:23 PM
gremil-----> gracias tio :D espero que te guste las actualizaciones ;)

yeray
04-23-2005, 01:42 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114220522_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114220522_large.jpg)

test Zbrush, texture and lighting

yeray
04-23-2005, 05:32 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114277547_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114277547_large.jpg)
cambio el texto a la imagen final, change the text to final image

arLutiK
04-23-2005, 08:04 PM
Yeray nice ambience you're giving your scene it really suits your concept, great work

ilusiondigital
04-23-2005, 08:13 PM
Yesssssss, aupa Yerai, good luck friend

yeray
04-23-2005, 09:17 PM
Arlutik----->thank you again men :D ;)

ilusiondigital-> good luck for you too ;) thank you thank you

yeray
04-24-2005, 08:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114376018_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114376018_large.jpg)

unwrap

Maxko
04-24-2005, 09:10 PM
Nice work man :)
I have just done same think like you :)

Micro26
04-24-2005, 10:35 PM
hey man nice texturing and modeling:thumbsup:
the whole concept is very good and true.
Keep it up man

yeray
04-25-2005, 03:31 PM
Maxko-------> thank you for the comments men :D ;)

Mr Micro26--> thank you ;)

tomorrow I update :D

sonicstrawbery
04-25-2005, 08:38 PM
Nice updates, cool to see you're working ard on your model man, the unwrapping looks good to me, looking forward for your texturig updates :thumbsup:

okiko
04-25-2005, 08:58 PM
A big idea
And a very beautiful work
Thank you

yeray
04-26-2005, 12:43 PM
cipher---> hey men¡¡ thank you for the comments again ;)

Da°----->thank you :D

yeray
04-26-2005, 09:17 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114550260_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114550260_large.jpg)

texture test step1

DaddyMack
04-26-2005, 09:24 PM
Looking good Yeray! Keep it coming..are you gonna 'dirty' him up a bit more?

yeray
04-27-2005, 01:45 PM
thank you again DaddyMack ! inside little to see those maps of dirt and details :D

Dizzy Boy
04-27-2005, 03:01 PM
Hi yeray,
I'm new around here! I realy like your concept: very straight forward. Plus the shape of the body is realy cool, it feels very real and comics like at the same time...

Can't wait to see more of it.

Dizzy Boy

melkao
04-27-2005, 03:34 PM
hey yeray....Very reallistic the textures. But the skin texture still need work, but i know that this is not a problem for you:scream:

yeray
04-28-2005, 03:42 PM
Dizzy Boy----> thank you for the comments

melkao------> thank you again men :D

today post a new updates

yeray
04-28-2005, 05:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114708321_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1114708321_large.jpg)

update texture body, bump and difuse sss

sonicstrawbery
04-28-2005, 05:39 PM
It's a really cool beginning !

Just 2 things bother me on thsi one, the nipple that we see should be lower...and why not making the plaster in modeling, it could look more real...

anyway i can't wait to see more !

Schun
04-29-2005, 06:21 AM
Yes, I better understand now : he is a cyclist ! :D

textures looks good (perhaps a little too wet for the torso, especialy arms)
Hands unwrap will be difficult, you don't have rigged it ?

bealobo
04-29-2005, 09:17 AM
hey, I like a lot this new update, the tan is a good idea.

But the "tirita" (thing on his left shoulder) disturbs me, I don´t see the point, I mean this man is highly dependent so... why would he care about ohter thing but drugs? I don´t know, just a thought.

:thumbsup:

Versiden
04-29-2005, 01:42 PM
wow, excellent modelling on the arms.. so close to the concept sketch.

keep it up.. !

melkao
04-29-2005, 01:44 PM
Yeah...that's what i'm talking about, now the skin looks perfect. Good work man:thumbsup:

PD:there is in the left hand, in the side where the glove begins, an error...The vertex are under the skin.:D

Paszczak
04-29-2005, 02:24 PM
Hi
I very like your idea (maybe not idea but mood of this pic :) ). Like cipher said- nipple is in bad position and legs muscle are to exegerated. Maybe shirt should have more fallen folds?

parinya pattarajumnong
05-02-2005, 05:28 PM
great model and cool concept
good luck

www.bbde-sign.com (http://www.bbde-sign.com)

yeray
05-05-2005, 11:52 PM
hello to everybody, I have had problems with my computer, the Motherboard melted hehehehe I will already begin with the update, thank you to answer me and to continue seeing me :D :D

cipher----> Hi men!!!good observation, the nipple has to change it, and the "and why not making the plaster in modeling, it could look more real..." I don't understand what you mean

Schun---> He was a cyclist ;) thank you, yes I have it rigged

bealobo--> Hola!!! thank you again for the comments, not you that to make with the ribbon or "tirita" ummmm

Versiden--> thank youu

melkao---> hey men :D thank you again :D I will look at what you say

Axisman--> if the shirt has to correct it, thank you :D

parinya pattarajumnong--> thank you thank you

THANK YOU TO EVERYBODY for see me and to write me

sorry for my bad english

sonicstrawbery
05-06-2005, 06:43 PM
the plaster = the thing you put on his shoulder, it looks a bit flat actually, you can try also to bumpmap it...

not sure if it's called a plaster though :)

DaddyMack
05-06-2005, 09:16 PM
Ummm ... WOW!!
Looking really urgent in his new skin Yeray...Great great job:thumbsup:

yeray
05-08-2005, 02:46 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115520397_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115520397_large.jpg)

cut in arm and hand, hand texture, inside little the legs and hair

Klasz
05-08-2005, 02:40 PM
Great :thumbsup:

JanSan
05-08-2005, 10:33 PM
Hey excellent Yeray very good work and the phenomenal idea, very cooool
Jansan

Buenissssssimo!!!
Te deseo que seas bien Juzgado, pa'que ganes

Mallku
05-09-2005, 06:08 PM
amazing work and concept.... guy... drugs are a good topic of inspirations for the contest... the inpact of the images is good... i think that you can add some scares into the arms some painfull scars to symbolize more than a just physic pain...

safe05
05-09-2005, 06:42 PM
Absolutely wonderful texture work! Gritty and realistic. Excellent job! :bounce:

yeray
05-10-2005, 05:19 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115745576_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115745576_large.jpg)

texture legs and bump

yeray
05-10-2005, 05:28 PM
cipher-----> AHHH okk¡¡ thank you Cipher now understands you, this bumpmap, I will try to make it modeling;) thank you :) :thumbsup:

DaddyMack--> hey thank you men ;)

Klasz-------->thank you :D

JanSan------> Thank you men¡¡¡ :D gracias JanSan yo tambien espero ser bien juzgado ;)

Mallku-------> thank you for the comments Malku, I will try to make what you say :D

safe05------> thank you thank you


:wavey:

gremil
05-10-2005, 05:38 PM
WOW :scream: :eek: :applause: Bravo Yeray, cada vez está mejor :thumbsup:

melkao
05-10-2005, 05:50 PM
Yeah...thats what i'm talking about...now the skin looks perfect:eek:

monsitj
05-10-2005, 05:56 PM
nice and unique concept ! and production work you done so far is great too! keep going! yeray!

anandpg
05-10-2005, 06:55 PM
great work, yeray! good luck!:beer:

arLutiK
05-11-2005, 06:03 AM
Yeray, amazing work on your texturing, this image is gonna be amazing, great work.

yeray
05-11-2005, 03:47 PM
Thank you to all, I won't get tired of saying thank you :D


gremil-----> Gracias apañero :D

melkao----> Hi men ;D thank you for the comments :D

monsitj----> good work yours men :D very thank you for the comments :D ;)

PGA-------> thank you :D


arlutik----> thank you again arlutik :D ;)

dmonk
05-11-2005, 06:13 PM
Nice work! It was nice watching this one come along.


I only noticed on the leg hair the bump seems a little high, making it look more like scars than hair. This only my small little nit pick.

The lighting really works and everything else is on point. Can't wait to see this one done!:applause:

yeray
05-11-2005, 10:22 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115850175_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1115850175_large.jpg)

update details

authentic
05-12-2005, 08:08 AM
Even the theme is not my prefered one it is so well executed. really impressive picture. Well done

yeray
05-12-2005, 03:27 PM
dmonk----- >I have corrected the hair of the leg :D thank you for the comments :D


authentic---> Thank you men, the theme looks for it real ;)

sonicstrawbery
05-12-2005, 03:51 PM
looks good, bad mood of the toilet is there, we can smell it and everything ! :)

i'd suggest on this to make the character more lighten, making more contrast between the environnement and the guy, but maybe you putted a wip lighting here...

so good luck ! nice job on this entry :thumbsup:

melkao
05-12-2005, 04:19 PM
eeeeeeeeeehhhhh.........:bowdown::buttrock::eek::applause::drool:..i can't say anymore

yeray
05-12-2005, 09:01 PM
cipher------ >you always say good advice men :D thank you for the comments I will test what you say of the light :D thank you again friend :D

melkao----> very very very thank you friend :D :D

manikantkujur
05-12-2005, 10:15 PM
cool concept .........
gud texturing ...........
waitin for more wip


http://www.cgtalk.com/search.php?searchid=1611160





http://www.cgtalk.com/search.php?searchid=1611160

nekro
05-13-2005, 12:56 PM
buenisima idea y mejor akabado, impresionante! mucha suerte!:)
amazing work!

bealobo
05-13-2005, 01:07 PM
this is great!

congratulations! and keep it up!

DaddyMack
05-13-2005, 01:22 PM
Wow Yeray, a great job all round... He looks sweaty and gross and the scene has come up really smelly looking... :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: The toilet paper looks a bit new still...

yeray
05-13-2005, 05:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116006924_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116006924_large.jpg)

test lighting and reflect

yeray
05-13-2005, 06:01 PM
which he likes it? that they prefer? better the superior image or the inferior image???


manikantkujur-----> thank you men

ei-en-------------> muchas gracias por responderme :D espero que me ayudes a decidir sobre que imagen escoger, thank you men


bealobo----------> gracias Bea :D tu tampoco lo llevas mal :D

DaddyMack------> thank you again friend. if, I still have to improve the hygienic paper ;)

yeray
05-14-2005, 04:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116088074_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116088074_large.jpg)

reflection and details

arLutiK
05-14-2005, 06:00 PM
Yeray, really nice, I can't wait to see the final one

yeray
05-16-2005, 10:09 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116238192_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116238192_large.jpg)

add noise and details

yeray
05-16-2005, 10:11 AM
thank you arlutik :D now I am with the detail, inside little I finish the image

yeray
05-17-2005, 02:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116339960_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116339960_large.jpg)

noise, effect bloom, smoke, and new detail

ilusiondigital
05-17-2005, 02:29 PM
great image yerai, dark atmosphere, you are doing a dramatic image and what can i say...... very well done my friend

si señor, muy buena, e incluso has hecho una elegante imagen de un tema tan duro como este, felicidades

arkinet
05-17-2005, 11:41 PM
i like it, maybe some wet spot on the floor? its crunch time so dont mind me:) ... Good luck bro!! & hurry up!

yeray
05-18-2005, 02:47 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116384469_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5717/5717_1116384469_large.jpg)

Final image

thanks to everybody, to read me, to answer me, THANK YOU and I hope we all are lucky :D

gracias de veras :D

---DRUGS---

I don’t know who I am. Long time ago, I sold myself to buy a little bit
of synthetic happiness. Since then, I only live to get more. I can only
walk, speak, dream and (sometimes) eat thinking about drugs.
People may think I’m more an animal than a human being. But that’s because they can’t see that an animal lurks to survive, while I crawl around to kill myself.
But it’s all different from here... In fact I believe that I’m already dead.
Only the warm, chemical rush rampaging through my veins brings me the
illusion of life for a few moments. And then, back to this cold, grey
nightmare, the obsessive and endless search I call life.
Do you think I’m pathetic? Try my point of view. Dare to feel the lust, the hunger reaping your soul from inside.
Parents, friends... They’ve all become strangers. The whole world keeps on moving pretty much faster than I. But I don’t mind, because I only live for my true love, my good mate, my only and beloved mother... that’s killing me... DRUGS.


No se quién soy. Hace mucho tiempo, me vendí por un poco de felicidad
sintética. Desde entonces, sólo vivo para conseguir más. Sólo puedo andar, hablar, soñar y (a veces) comer pensando en las drogas. La gente puede pensar que soy más un animal que un ser humano. Pero eso es porque no pueden ver que un animal merodea para sobrevivir, mientras que yo sólo me arrastro para matarme.
Pero es todo tan diferente desde aquí... En realidad, creo que ya estoy muerto. Sólo el cálido, químico subidón arrasando por mis venas me trae algo de la ilusión [en sentido de falso, imaginario] de la vida por unos breves momentos. Y entonces, vuelta a la fria, gris pesadilla, la obsesiva búsqueda sin fin que llamo vida.
¿Crees que soy patético? Prueba mi punto de vista. Atrévete a sentir el ansia, el hambre rasgando tu alma desde dentro.
Padres, amigos... Todos se han convertido en extraños. El mundo entero
sigue moviéndose bastante mas rápido que yo. Pero no me importa, porque sólo
vivo para mi verdadero amor, mi buen compañero, mi única y amada madre...Lo que me está matando... LAS DROGAS.

yeray
05-18-2005, 02:53 AM
ilusiondigital----- gracias tio, mucha mierda para ti tambien :D y tambien mucha suerte :D un placer. good luck friend :D


arkinet-------->thank you for the comments

Matt-Bortolino
05-18-2005, 03:07 AM
Great work, a really iconic & atmospheric image :thumbsup:

arLutiK
05-18-2005, 03:08 AM
Yeray, great image, feels good to have finish doesn't it?

sonicstrawbery
05-18-2005, 12:42 PM
Yay it's finished, the lighting touch gives a special thing...

it looks good man, good luck for this one ! hope to see you in the next challenge ! :thumbsup: :bounce:

DaddyMack
05-18-2005, 01:47 PM
STUNNING!

Congratulations Yeray!

Your final is awesome;)

I really enjoyed the Yeray show here mate:thumbsup::thumbsup:Thanks

melkao
05-18-2005, 02:26 PM
Oye eso es bastante profundo..cuidado te ahogas...:cool:
me hizo recordar a gollum del señor de los anillos, que solo vivia para el anillo, una diccion que mantenia su vida perturbada y es bastante miserable y patetica, la vida de la gente que se hunde en estas practicas...lo arruinan todo, por eso es mejor hacer caso a un consejo que incluso aparece en la Biblia que dice mas o menos: "no contaminen su cuerpo" y "anden con juicio sano".:scream:
es realmente un gran rtabajo que haz hecho, tu ides es de las que mas me gustan y te deseo la mejor de las suertes, y espero que almenos quedes en segundo lugar, porque el primero me lo llevo yo...ajajajaja:beer:

yeray
05-18-2005, 06:37 PM
`mb------> thank you :D

arlutik----> yeahh men :D I feel very well :D thank you friend


cipher----> I also hope to see you in the next challenge :D thank you friend


DaddyMack-> veeeery thank you friend :D


melkao----> gracias amigo, espero ganar y que ganes algo, thank you :D

theuni
05-19-2005, 09:09 AM
Hi,

original idea of interpreting this M&S theme. I love the story behind... :thumbsup:

jolyrojr2
05-19-2005, 09:11 AM
smooth dude. it came out really well. best of luck!

Caronte
05-19-2005, 02:55 PM
Impressive scene!
Good luck, YeraY! ;)

IkerCLoN
05-19-2005, 03:10 PM
Good luck, dude! Your final image looks awesome :)

p.s.: by the way, am I seeing a lemon? :o

alex.h.
05-19-2005, 03:38 PM
impressive work and i love the moody theme, colors great, see you later mate and :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

yeray
05-19-2005, 10:05 PM
theuni-----------> thank you for the comments :D

jolyrojr2---------> thank you too men :D

Caronte---------> Wow in red :D thank you friend :D

IkerCLoN-------> hehehe do you like lemons? thank you friend for the comment :D ;)

alex.h.----------> hey thank you :D I hope to see him in the next challenge :D good work yours

yeray
05-19-2005, 10:12 PM
i like this detail :D

http://www.3dpoder.com/foro3dpoder/attachment.php?attachmentid=13100 (http://www.3dpoder.com/foro3dpoder/attachment.php?attachmentid=13100)

overcontrast
05-19-2005, 11:05 PM
congratulations on ur finish... i like this image.....not that emotive, but different people's interpretetion is different... i like ur textureing and lighting... well done.. and good luck

AIR
05-20-2005, 12:16 AM
U created really strong image.Only problem I have with it is that U didnt show us his facial expression.I think that would complete the image in whole new way.
anyway good luck,well done. :thumbsup:

tiburonsita
05-20-2005, 03:52 AM
Finally got a chance to get back and see your final image. Very nice job. I like how the image progressed from the last time I saw it.

I think you've done a great job of convieging the emotion other than through the facial expression.

Trinnity
05-20-2005, 09:09 AM
Hooooolaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!


Mucha suerte majete...esta muy bien tu imagen...muy currada..ahí se ve el trabajo y el esfuerzo...ANIMO!! espero, de corazon, que ganes!!:bounce:



Besitos!!

yeray
05-20-2005, 06:41 PM
overcontrast------> your work is very good men¡¡¡ thank you for the comments :D

A I R-------------> thak you AIR it didn't search for facial expression, I want people to imagine that expression :D

tiburonsita--------> very thank you Tiburonsita :D thx for the comments

Trinnity-----------> HOLAAA GUAPAAAAAAA :D gracias gracias, sinceramente me encantaria ganar algo, como todos :D un abrazooo

bealobo
05-21-2005, 01:04 PM
great composition!

te ha quedado muy bien , creo que has captado el "mood" perfectamente. Y como ya te he dicho en algún sitio, has arriesgado con el tema y eso está muy bien.
Mucha suerte! y felicidades!

yeray
05-21-2005, 08:00 PM
bealobo-----> gracias guapa :D pero creo que no soy el unico que arriesgo con el tema ;) el tuyo tampoco es un tema "normal" tambien se sale de lo común.

alguien sabe cuando son las votaciones o algo?

does somebody know when they are the voting or something?

smaddl
05-21-2005, 08:14 PM
very sad and from real life. well execution. good luck !

yeray
05-22-2005, 05:31 PM
smaddl----- thank you men :D

shotta
05-23-2005, 11:38 AM
Mucha suerte, te ha quedado de lujo espero q ganes.
Saludos

gremil
05-24-2005, 04:51 PM
Estaba yo mirando los trabajos de este concurso y comentando brevemente los que más me gustan, cuando veo tu imagen y por supuesto es de las que abro y comento :thumbsup:

Excelente trabajo con un perfecto acabado :eek:

melkao
05-24-2005, 04:54 PM
Estaba yo mirando los trabajos de este concurso y comentando brevemente los que más me gustan, cuando veo tu imagen y por supuesto es de las que abro y comento :thumbsup:

Excelente trabajo con un perfecto acabado :eek:


aja...estoy de acuerdo:thumbsup:

Basie
05-24-2005, 11:32 PM
Congratulations for finish your work and for make it so good! I like it so much!
Good luck!

Enhorabuena por haber acabado el trabajo y haberlo hecho además tan bien!! Lástima que no se aprecien bien todos los detalles con la imagen tan pequeña.
Muy buena suerte y un abrazo!

yeray
05-25-2005, 04:10 PM
shotta-----> muchas gracias :D

gremil-----> gracias que me vienes apoyando desde el principio :D


melkao----> a ti tambien gracias tio :D


Basie-----> thank you for the comments, la verdad es que tengo la imagen grande y con demasiados detalles jajaja prefiero la pequeña que no se ven tantos errores jajajaja gracias :D

and post the wireframe :D

http://img10.echo.cx/img10/6582/wire12bx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

Shazam3D
05-27-2005, 09:41 AM
Congratulations, Yeray!

Very good job, I like the progress of the complete work and the final image, you are ready for more complex projects.

Keep on rockin'!

Chacho, que en nuestra lengua te puedo expresar mejor la idea; has demostrado una gran capacidad de trabajo y talento, sigue así que llegarás muy lejos.

Suerte y mucho ánimo,
Shazam.

ilusiondigital
05-27-2005, 09:58 AM
Eso si que es 3dpoder shazam. :scream:

Yerai: you make really an impressive work with this image, a hard but elegant pic. Congratulations for a great entry and hope to see more of you work in the next challenge. Greeting mate.

Y mucha mierda!! :thumbsup:

yeray
05-31-2005, 02:17 PM
Shazam3D---------> Thank you my friend :D gracias por el apoyo que me das maestro Obi-Shaz ;)


Ilusiondigital------> Thank you men :D gracias por apoyarme tambien tio :D


:D I am happy

THECLYKE
06-05-2005, 03:12 PM
Great Idea... I Think Your Texturing Is Awsome.
And The Way You Set The Camera Up Really Brings Out The Sense
Of The Drugs Being The Master.

Awsome

yeray
06-10-2005, 01:22 PM
THE CLYKE thank you men ;)

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