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pencil-head
03-22-2005, 12:12 AM
Tristan Lock has entered the Master and Servant 3D.

Challenge Page (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/masterandservant/view_entries.php?challenger=5661)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: I am a f*cking idiot
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114931126_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114931126_large.jpg)

Well I quit. I overwrote the latest version of the beast model whith on older version that was on my laptop. oh well. I wasn't really happy with it anyway. But before I did that I drew this sketch yesterday while i was watching a movie. And it's more what I was originaly going for. Minus the freaky dislocated ankle I have in the sketch.

mjm
03-22-2005, 12:19 AM
Hey, nice to see you've joined, Tristan. Good luck; looking forward to seeing what you do. :)

pencil-head
03-22-2005, 12:32 AM
Thanks Marc. I'm determined to finish this time. I always start these challenges and never finish.

Kid-Mesh
03-22-2005, 12:40 AM
Have Fun and Good Luck :thumbsup:

KolbyJukes
03-22-2005, 01:15 AM
looking forward to your entry man :)

ace4016
03-22-2005, 01:16 AM
Good luck.

spirogyro
03-22-2005, 04:46 AM
Hello friend, I believe you have critiqued some work of mine in the past, thank you and good luck to you in this one.

pencil-head
03-22-2005, 05:35 AM
Thanks for your support guys.

Ok main objective here is to finish, no to win, so i'm going to go with something slightly humourous. I'm thinking of having a little boy taking his pet for a walk. The twist is that this kid is a potential dictator, and his pet is a massive ugly beast. I have an image in my head of the boy screaming at the beast to obay his comands. And the beast is screaming back at him, the beasts breath and spit almost blowing the kid away.

I'm not sure if the kid will be a boy or girl. A girl might be more funny. And i'll probably dress them in some sort of military uniform. I'm not sure yet. I'll probably change my mind about the whole thing.

erilaz
03-22-2005, 05:56 AM
Hey Tristan! Love the concept already, and there aren't even sketches yet! The idea of an upstart kid yelling at a far more powerful creature makes me giggle.:D

arLutiK
03-22-2005, 06:02 AM
Like the philosophy of finishing and not win (I never finished the last two), I think I'll try to follow it

I personaly think a little girl would have more impact

Good luck to you

KingMob
03-22-2005, 06:17 AM
cant wait to see this one, good luck!

gjpetch
03-22-2005, 09:54 PM
Holy crap, your at Animal now, what department are you in? Say hi to the max guy for me.

And best of luck!

pencil-head
03-22-2005, 10:03 PM
Yeah i think i came on just as you left. 1st of November. I'm downstairs working on happy feet.

Virtuoso
03-22-2005, 10:21 PM
Hi Tristan..........really cool concept.......I like the potential.....The creativity in this can be wild.....the little dictator boy kind of reminds me of Stuey.....from the family guy series.......How great is he.......

Sounds like a real nice and interesting plan.......Hope to see it come full circle.......I'll park myself in the front row here..........:arteest:

pencil-head
03-25-2005, 01:43 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111718623_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111718623_large.jpg)

These are the best of a whole bunch of crappy drawings. I'm pretty happy with the beasts head. The body may need some tweeking. I think I'm going to go for a gorilla type body.

I've decided to go with a goth looking girl. I'm trying to find a ballance between being cute and intimidating at the same time. I'm also trying to get her to look around the 5-7 year age. Which it obviously isn't at the moment, so i'm still working on it.

pencil-head
03-25-2005, 01:46 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111718760_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111718760_large.jpg)

And i may as well post these aswell. I'm still playing with ideas

Kid-Mesh
03-25-2005, 02:44 AM
Keep fleshing those ideas out, it will come :)

pencil-head
03-26-2005, 06:37 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111822645_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1111822645_large.jpg)

The goth chick wan't working for me so i went back to my original idea. I think it will work better with the beast. As well as being a bit more convincing that the kid is the master.

grafi
03-26-2005, 07:01 AM
I like your concept, Now I've gotta start doign this good of work :argh:

good job so far :thumbsup:

ace4016
03-26-2005, 07:05 AM
Nice character concept, can't wait to see it in 3d. One suggestion: maybe you could have a patch over the right eye instead of the freaky scarred eye. Just a suggestion.

Lebroba
03-26-2005, 07:25 AM
I like your idea. it's pretty cute. You should incorporate a "Curb your dog" sign. I think that would be pretty funny!

Best of luck to ya!

L.

Matroskin
03-26-2005, 04:51 PM
Oh, really scary one :D
Fascinating concept

don't hesitate visiting my M&S page (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=224116)

jmBoekestein
03-26-2005, 05:20 PM
This kid looks really funny!!!

You got me hooked!

pencil-head
03-28-2005, 12:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1112014825_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1112014825_large.jpg)

It looks nothing like the concept, but i'm happy with it. It still needs some tweeking and facial expression.

eddieellis
03-28-2005, 12:06 PM
Hey man thats looking great !, love the idea

DaddyMack
04-05-2005, 01:43 AM
Heya pencil_head, mental start on the kid character's head, cool concept too mate:thumbsup:

Keep it coming

ace4016
04-05-2005, 07:27 AM
Nice start on the head. Hoepfully we will be seeing more soon.

pencil-head
04-10-2005, 02:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1113099707_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1113099707_large.jpg)

Here's a wip of the beast. It still needs eyes and teeth. I still might need to shring the torso down more so he can walk on his hands and feet like a gorilla.

TheFirstAngel
04-10-2005, 02:51 AM
Great work in progress. Just came to subscribe and wish you best luck and loadsa fun!
The beast is exceptional freaky and cool, kid looks fine yet but feel like it could use a bit of inflation here and there. i know what wip means, so no crits this early... Keep it up, looking forward to your progress :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Troof
04-10-2005, 03:04 AM
Great modeling so far mate!
Love your designs monster designs

AJ
04-10-2005, 08:49 AM
Hi Tristan!

Everything you've done so far is superb! I love your concept for the little kid & the modeling of the beast is flawless. The only comment I have so far is that from the scale of the model it looks as though the monster's going to have very small shoulders/arms - is that your plan?

Now waiting eagerly for more updates!

:D

arLutiK
04-10-2005, 07:37 PM
Very nice modeling, very original creature, I like. Good luck with your challenge.

kmest
04-10-2005, 07:49 PM
nice modeling,,nice design,..thats realy cool...keep it up:thumbsup::thumbsup:

DaddyMack
04-10-2005, 08:51 PM
Hi Tristan, this Monster looks mad mate! I think his neck looks a bit weak tho...kidding... Great, great stuff as always pencil_head...Keep it coming:thumbsup:

pencil-head
04-10-2005, 11:39 PM
Thanks for your comments guys.

AJ_23: I agree with you about the shoulders. But they looks smaller than they actually are because of were i cut them off in the image. Buy yeah, they could do with some beafing up.

Rook
04-11-2005, 05:19 PM
Looking good. I would suggest maybe looking at reference of canine teeth, or sharks teeth. I also wondering if it might help to exaggerate the front neck muscles a little more.
That's going to be one cool creature when you finish.

Matroskin
04-12-2005, 11:02 PM
Hey, impressive modelling :eek: :thumbsup:
Fascinating details you've made, man!
Don't you want to make ears less human-like, I mean closer to beast's style (something like more angular shape, sharp edges etc.) ?
Anyway, cool stuff!!

creativer
04-13-2005, 12:34 AM
Hey man great to see your work in this challenge. All the best mate!

Marcus_B
04-13-2005, 12:36 AM
good modelling :thumbsup:

pencil-head
04-13-2005, 01:59 AM
Rook: Yeah a mixture of shark and canine is what i'm going for. I love the way sharks lips sort of pull back and reveail the teeth and gums. And the diferent shape and size of the canine teeth interst me too. And he neck will strat pop out once i reshape his traps a little more.

Deryk: Good point about the ears. I'm going to fix that.

creativer: Thanks Richard. You know i'm going to mock you if i get mine finished and you don't:D

Marcus_B: Thanks mate.

Mr.Waka
04-13-2005, 03:53 AM
Great design ! Very good modeling ! :bounce: like that ! Keep it up ! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

teapoter
04-13-2005, 06:52 AM
great concept, I'll keep my eyes on you

LouisBrowne
04-14-2005, 06:08 AM
Liking the model++ the style of the lil' girlie girl

Hooch
04-14-2005, 10:54 AM
That's a Great Beast model man! :thumbsup:

Can't wait to see more on this one! :bounce:

Versiden
04-14-2005, 11:50 AM
great modelling dude! the pectorals and neck are so well done..
:thumbsup:

goktugg
04-14-2005, 12:01 PM
nice 3d model*good pose* fast starting...good luck mate.:)

pencil-head
04-25-2005, 05:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114406945_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114406945_large.jpg)

I'm so unmotivated with this right now.

pencil-head
04-25-2005, 05:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114407649_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114407649_large.jpg)

I almost forgot about these. I modeled these a week ago.

Neeno
04-27-2005, 11:55 PM
i mean wow!! you creature is fantastic.. so clean i cant see an inch of it wrong !! damn tristan.. good work... hopefully seeing you soon with more updates!

creativer
04-29-2005, 12:18 PM
Looking good mate keep it up!

pencil-head
05-01-2005, 07:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114931126_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/9/5661/5661_1114931126_large.jpg)

Well I quit. I overwrote the latest version of the beast model whith on older version that was on my laptop. oh well. I wasn't really happy with it anyway. But before I did that I drew this sketch yesterday while i was watching a movie. And it's more what I was originaly going for. Minus the freaky dislocated ankle I have in the sketch.

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