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richard2812
03-19-2005, 12:56 AM
Hi for evrybody!
I've made this littel presentation for a tv show and i need some comment for that animation!

Thank's a lot for everybody!

Go to this link:
http://www.geocities.com/richard281283/ (http://www.geocities.com/richard281283/)anim.jpg.avi

droidoz
03-19-2005, 02:23 PM
Hey, its pretty cool, just make it a little slower, I know some people get sick if tunnel animations are to fast.
Keep it up!

hiphopcr
03-19-2005, 11:25 PM
I like colors and textures and everything. I don't know how smooth you were looking to make the tunnell animation but it seems like there are three obvious keyframes before taking the dip down the tunnell. I think slowing it down and smoothing it out is something to consider.

Also, I don't know how important readablity but I couldn't tell what it said at the end.. although, logo design is way off the concept here. I also expected something to happen once it finally reached the logo, instead of the camera simply pulling back.

Anyhow, good job. It's always easier to crit than to point out the things I liked, but I think it's good man.

richard2812
03-20-2005, 12:30 PM
Thank's a lot for everybody... I keep your crit like a treasure!

Shayder
03-21-2005, 06:37 PM
I agree, It should be a bit slower. Can you smooth out the camera keyframes, the turns are a bit sharp. The logo seems to rotate very abrupty I would slow it down as well.

I really like the style of the tunnel, nice color scheme. The tunnel has a nice flow to the structure. Very nice work!

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