Some Objects, Pawel Chwedczuk (3D)

[zooyorkbmxer]

i like the caustics alot theyre really good
what renderer did you use?]

[Kev3D]

The renders look really nice. The caustics look cool. With the mp3 player, though, I reckon there should be a screen over the lcd display. It looks too much like a sticker stuck on there now.

[NemPhas]

Hi I feel the renders are too crisp,
the diamonds dof is toooo much put less in.
and the mp3 player needs a screen on top of it, maybe ad a glow to the screen too it will give it a level of realizm. Tha black plastic also needs to reflect a little.
Or ad speckular hi light.
Hmmm I think thats all i can see.
But other wise good start, i did about the same the first time I played with it.
You just need to start looking at real life shots and start maching them up.
Well good start and enjoy your work

[chveti]

i like the caustics alot theyre really good
what renderer did you use?]

VRAY

thx for comments

[Adam Gur]

I love the metal end on the player, it's dead on... but I would have liked to see the black less pronounced overall......

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