my 1st proper CG work

[Sir_jet]

very nice. good color scheme, and the expression lends a dramatic flair to what i assume is some kind of fantasy samurai...uh....type.....thing.......:surprised so yeah

HUSSAH!!!!


keep up the good work

:thumbsup:

[bjotto]

Nice, try to use levels on it to remove the greyishs look(in ps image>adjustments>levels)
the rest is fine I think

[jeroentje]

He, this is very nice :thumbsup:
I agree on the greyish look, maybe adjust your monitor for the next, or are you perhaps working in CMYK?

Welcome to the board and post some more :)
jeroentje

[wildsheepchase]

I think the hair looks really flat compared to the rest of your rendering, to the point where it creates an optic effect where it's competing with his red collar. I think overall, this is a really good start/mid point to the painting. More dramatic lighting could make the image really pop! Good work:buttrock:

[earthworm]

yo Man!

cool job man... hey dude.... but i have to say ur work when we were in yr 1 was much more impressive..wad happen to u man.... anyway i think this image would be better if the color dun look so much like fading kinda thing..u get wad i mean... anyway.. cool job... by the way i like ur drawings in tt game critical escape... really nice drawings of the run down building u gonna post it here any time soon???:D :scream:

[fireman]

Hello people!

I can't beleive this site! It's filled with very talented people with jaw-dropping works! :eek: Guess I still got a loooonnngg way to go!

Sir_jet: Thanks 4 the comments! I dont think I deserve such a grand prize but thanks anyway! The guy suppose to be a samurai demon but I accidentaly removed his katana away..

bjotto: Great suggestion! I will try to do some adjudsments to it. Thanks!

jeroentje: Thanks 4 the comments! My monitor been acting crazy so adjustment might be a problem.. Will try to post some works btw, seen some of your portfolio, I must say they are mighty impressive!

wildsheepchase: Great suggestion regarding the hair. I agree wif your point on the flatness of hair. Any idea on how to make it more 3d? Thanks!

earthworm: hey liz! thanks 4 saying that my past works are better than my recent ones.. Haha!! Well, as you can see, my colouring has a looonnggg way to go so I will try my best to improve! Will post the drawings soon.

Thanks people 4 all the great comments! :thumbsup:

[bjotto]

Try to treat the hair more like a solid object, it looks flat couse there's no shadows

[PsychedelicMind]

ohhhaaaayo fireman-san!!!! itz alien-chan! ^___^ I'm finally here! hehe... and i see you posted THAT pic up! cool! :applause:

[mattregnier]

Cool, reminds me of the designs of Talpa from Ronin Warriors, great anime!

http://icdweb.cc.purdue.edu/~mdregnie/talpa.jpg

Keep it up, Rock :buttrock:

[say-g]

sweet, but yer i agree the hair looks flat, and the edges of the hair too hard

[Burkmat]

It's goooooood :buttrock:
BUT, loose the hair on his left side (our right), it lookes like its glued to the wall or something.. :thumbsdow

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