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LorenzOO
09-23-2002, 02:27 PM
hello artists! here is my first post, this image was carried out in less than 6 hours for last challenge FMR of http://www.3dstation.net (http://www.3dstation.net/) .


http://www.lorenzoo.3d-station.com/images/3d/fmr7.jpg

Software used: 3dsmax5 and photoshop for textures. Your opinions are welcomes

thank you

bilka
09-23-2002, 02:28 PM
:buttrock:

:)))))) idon't know... but i love that !!!




cool de te voir ici lolo !: )

Ber
09-23-2002, 02:37 PM
Great Work !

I wish I could have the same girlfriend as yours :beer:

ehoba
09-23-2002, 02:42 PM
Nice job mhmm. !!

toce
09-23-2002, 02:49 PM
juicy! :eek:

maruku
09-23-2002, 05:17 PM
good.
very impressive.
what a beautyfull shader of skin.
i love that. miam :love:
and the tatoo. :applause: :thumbsup:

nicocrea
09-23-2002, 07:39 PM
huhu !

sympa les tetons à l'air !

keep in the mouv ;)

slaughters
09-23-2002, 08:31 PM
Pretty sexually gratuitous image. The breasts models could use more natural contours, but the lighting and texturing are OK.

dmonk
09-23-2002, 08:55 PM
they're boobs alright but you'd have to zoom out so we can see how they look on the body for us to give you a better judging.

LorenzOO
09-23-2002, 09:42 PM
thank you for your comments!

I did not build the body, only the tits, it's the topic of the challenge and short time!

maybe the body for later!

thanks again

c u

robot9000
09-24-2002, 12:58 AM
Hmmmm. I dig the composition but I think the nipples need a little bit of work.
More bump! And the skin (if u want a realistic look) needs some layering action.
Trust me though...robot9000 would not say no to those tata's!
peace
robot9000

ps. I wanna make a chick now!
:airguitar :airguitar :airguitar

brandon3d
09-25-2002, 01:40 PM
trop vulgaire!!!!!
et en plus ils sont moches :(

TIO_MATT
09-25-2002, 01:48 PM
what the **** is that?....I like

LorenzOO
09-25-2002, 02:08 PM
Originally posted by brandon3d
trop vulgaire!!!!!
et en plus ils sont moches :(


quand je vois la gueule de ton avatar...hum...ca ma rassure de voir qu'on n'a pas du tout les mêmes gouts artistiques...

:thumbsdow


thx JAIMEF@DODEMAST :)

@+

brandon3d
09-25-2002, 02:23 PM
prend pas la mouche !!!!
Il ne s'agit pas de gout artistique !!!Qd une femme a les
seins poitus et qu'ils tombent c'est pas tres joli ...
Et puis la touche piercing est de tres mauvais gout....c'est tout !!

LorenzOO
09-25-2002, 02:28 PM
l'interet de poster sur ce forum, c'est d'avoir des critiques constructives sur un travail graphique. Que tu n'aimes pas les seins qui tombent ou le percing du téton, on s'en fou, c'est pas ça qui va m'aider à progresser et à corriger mes erreurs.

...

HapZungLam
09-25-2002, 03:06 PM
it gives me a feeling about the breast is very hard. hard as rock. I don't know is it because of the textures or the lighting.

it just gives me this feeling.

xbs
09-25-2002, 03:22 PM
moi je les trouve super !!!
j'ai juste 2 choses a dire...
1/ y'a pas (ou on voit pas a cause de l'ombre) de plis sous le sein... observe ta copine, tu verra que normalement les seins font un plis assez marqué...
2/ la texture aux auréoles est trop régulière... on dirait des petit boutons en plastique... et la séparation en tres les auréoles et le reste de la peau est plus floue... pas réguliere...
a part ca c nickel, le tattoo est bien sur la peau... la forme tien la route... comme tu le disais si on te dis que j'aime ou pas le piercing ou les seins pointus, t'es pas pret d'arriver :)
pour la lumiere tu devrais peut etre "deboucher" un peu le dessous des seins... c peut etre trop sombre...:thumbsup:

LorenzOO
09-25-2002, 03:49 PM
merci pour tes commentaires!
c vrai qu'il manque le pli sous les seins, mais, comme ct un challenge de courte duree (fait en 6 heures), g aplati mon mesh (en oubliant de sauvegarder, quel con...) et donc, pas pu rajouter le pli une fois smoother, c un peu long...c pour ca d'ailleurs, que l'ombre est assez prononce pour tricher un peu!

thx for the comment HapZungLam, let's rock!
;)

slaughters
09-25-2002, 03:50 PM
Ellway, Iway ancay eakspay inway away ifferentday anguagelay
alsoway. Anyoneway elseway erehay eakspay Igpay Atinlay ?

Translation:

Well, I can speak in a different language also. Anyone else here speak Pig Latin ?

jone
09-25-2002, 04:00 PM
they should rename CgChannel to CGporn.
that is one of 1000s xxx pic what i have seen here.
what that mean? -> 3d artists are Damn horny!

but good work! lovely boobs.:drool:

xbs
09-25-2002, 04:40 PM
lol... je savais pas que c'etait pour un challenge en 6h... alors c bien :) :thumbsup:

unexit
09-25-2002, 06:04 PM
whateva

Apostle
09-25-2002, 10:29 PM
Those are the smalles nipples that I have ever seen...i know there are a thousand differnt types but I think that perhaps they should be a bit bigger.. If you decide to keep them that size.. The one that is pierced should be hanging down. The weight of the nipple ring would most certainly pull it down.

piajartist
09-26-2002, 05:02 AM
i would go good where that dragon is

Lorenzo
09-28-2002, 06:56 PM
coool des tétons
pour une fois sa change ya un piercing,:beer:

:drool:
oups désolé
bon boulot de texture, mais peut être le rendus parait un peu plastique, essai un Gi rendering

yeeeet
09-28-2002, 11:31 PM
Boobs sag. Those are too pointy and too supported by nothing, or is there invisible braw on? You also got problems where the boob meets the ribcage and how its modeld around the figure. The texture is real nice, and it almost looks like skin.

Spankenstein
09-29-2002, 07:03 PM
They look like you could chip a tooth on them. Too hard, the lighting is not diffusing across the skin right. Your bump map is cranked up WAY too high. When you feel skin, it feels smooooth , even though there are variations in the surface. Those breasts look like they would feel like stone.

Additionally, the tattoo is way too sharp edged. It's practically impossible to get edges that fine if the tattoo is more than a few months old. Maybe a little erode action in Photoshop would fix it.

Lastly, I think there is something wrong with the modeling itself, because on the left(ours) breast, rather than a smooth shading gradient, there are three distinct shades, which makes them look funny...

Just more proof that we need subsurface scattering action!

LorenzOO
09-30-2002, 10:05 PM
thanks all for your comments and suggestions

:)

PotatoHead
12-19-2002, 03:28 PM
i cant see the pic!!:annoyed:

LorenzOO
12-19-2002, 03:36 PM
sorry i changed my website!!!

http://www.3d-station.com/ephemere/ephemere_7/lorenzoo.jpg

cy

Carl
12-19-2002, 06:31 PM
Ok, I think this piece is all about masturbation, right? Like, I'm supposed to be seduced by this imagery to the point of orgasm. I'm just not getting that yet. I think you need to push it. Larger breasts.

loganx3d
12-19-2002, 06:46 PM
I think the nipple ring needs a huge lens flare. Also, try putting a rimlight around the (image-left) breast.

If possible, try making the background outer space.

If all else fails, just use global illumination.

Joril
12-19-2002, 07:26 PM
Breasts "hang" more.
Also make the nippels less pointy and a little thicker.

minyusf
12-19-2002, 07:38 PM
wow..... I can't keep my eyes off the pic..... they r so..... hmmm..... I mean NICE WORK!!!

LorenzOO
12-20-2002, 10:43 AM
carl... hum... you are serious??? One is not to be on same planet I think! :airguitar

loganx3d & Joril : I do not think of working over again this image, it was a one day challenge for the fun, and I detest the lens flare... sorry :hmm:

thank minyulf :)

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