Character: Zoe (nudity), Boris Jahn (3D)

[apocalypseneon]

Great work, but in my opinion skin is too bumped
I like it anyway! :thumbsup:

[Rennie]

Looks pretty good
- I agree with the skin being too bumped
- The image could use some anti aliasing, you can see a few jaggies on her halter top (or whatever it is)
- Her expression is maybe a little bit "doll" looking dunno exactly how to describe it.

- I think the hair looks good

[RW152]

Hi,

That is amazing. As I'm still a complete beginner with animation, I'm in awe of this piece of work. I'm particularly impressed by the hair. How do you manage to create such beautiful looking hair on a model??

[polygun]

Its very nice, it kind of looks a little like a poser model to me though

[opus13]

drop the shininess of the skin and lower that bump. also lose the shininess on the bricks in the background, bricks arent shiny :D, and its way too distracting.

edit;/ oh yeah, close her eyes just a touch. right now she looks like she's about to eat the spider!

[luzak1]

figure, and model are great, but this all is too plastic-skin and wall. Too much bump!

[Joss]

I don't know if it's a bump problem. It looks like you went in with the Photoshop Sharpen tool and tried to sharpen in some areas.

That or it's rendering artifacts, but it's a good model and good character work!

[jayashton]

No i have to agree also the skin does look a little on the bumpy side so it doesn't really go with the reflectivness, try turning down the reflection a little or just turn down the bump.

But other than that it looks pretty good.

[Boris]

A big thanks for your comments! Yes you are right ... the bump is too strong. It apears partially because I only had this high bumpsetting for the body part by accident. It's a pitty I didn't noticed for this final render I posted. I'll change this!

@RW152: I use Realsoft 3D Version 5 which had lots new hairrelated tools in the latest update. This hair is done with about 600 nurbs curves which I painted with an airbrush on the surface of the head. The 600 curves get interpolated to over 10,000 curves while rendertime.

[spliney]

Well done Boris! This model is done using Realsoft3D, so Poser is *not* used ;)
Maybe you can add a screenshot, showing some wire (and some new icons ;) )?

Robert

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