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Torhn
03-16-2005, 07:23 PM
Hi everybody, :wavey: (http://www.cgtalk.com/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#)
Here's my demo reel for 2005. I firstly posted it in finished work, but the poor amount of c&c leave me without any idea of what i have to do to improve myself in futur work. So i've decided to post it here in hope to have more replies & constructive comments.

I hope you'll enjoy it :)

Quicktime streaming (28,6 Mo): http://users.skynet.be/torhn/demowebhigh.mov
Quicktime streaming (5,1 Mo): http://users.belgacom.net/torhn/videos/Laborne2005.mov




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SkyePhelps
03-16-2005, 09:06 PM
Torhn

I really enjoyed watching your Demo Reel, the work in there is great, and I wish that you had more in there. It would be nice if you could add a bit more to the reel, showing off some of the details that you have in those scenes. For instance the first scene with the house in the woods, I would have liked to have seen it closer up showing off the work that you put into it, the foliage is nice, but I would be more interested in the house.

It would also be cool to see some of the details you put in the third scene with the head sculpturs, I know you're trying to show off your lightying, but it would be nice to see the amount of detail that you have put into some of these scenes and works, having the camera wrap around some of these objects so the viewer can be even more impressed.

Also I not trying to say anything bad about your work, but just as a personal opinion your volcano scene is the weakest work in your demo reel, in all your other pieces there is much more detail shown, and the volcano scene just does not have the quality of detail you are showing in these other shots. I would consider taking that scene out, and possibly the planet scene out to, the planet scene is beautiful and done very well... but it is still very plain and does not show off the ammount of work that you are fully capable of doing.

Another thing is the text colors you have at the beggining and end blend in to much with the background you have, I like the style, but the text could stand out more so that the viewer can read your information. Well that's about it, I hope you are able to show off more of your work, and make this reel abit longer, 2 minutes would most likely be about the right length for showing all the details necessary... hope this helps, and keep up the awesome work :thumbsup:
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