woman wip (nudity)

[Baldasseroni]

Really nice start so far Mathieu, i really want to see it finished with a nice face.
Overally the proportions are elegant, i would just point the attention on some areas which need to be more smooth, like the rear part of the legs which seem to be rather "blocky", while the anatomy in the knees areas/lower area of the quadricepts seems to be a bit off.
Keep it up my friend!

Ale

[Coaster]

Oops, I think I just bumped the older version of this thread, then noticed this. Sorry! :blush:

It could be you were caught out by the date cutoff on the forum, it happened to me before. If so, you can change the cuttoff in the user CP...

Looks even better now, and the ankle looks incredible!

Good work and, sorry that I screwed up your posts. :sad:

[mikkamakka]

nice start! i think her knees are a bit wierd and too low. The back of lower leg needs some rounding. gonna be great! :thumbsup:

[pgland]

Really good dragonkiss. Superb proportions and just feels really realistic already!!
There are a few bits that could be improved though. I think the shoulders are a bit blocky as are the calves.
But they are small things. I think this is one to watch for sure!

[Cleveland]

one too watch, i think. looks great.
would love to see wires, especially for the knees. i'm trying to work my knees right now and can't get anything right short of using lots more geometry. would love to see if it can be achieved with less.

keep it up,

cleveland.

[Chanchito]

Looking superb but I would give the arms a bit more flesh, and maybe smooth out the crease around the front armpit.


Very nice model though! good luck on the face

[dragonkiss]

thanks guys for reply

A.Baldasseroni:thanks my friend, i corrected the area you find too boxy, i tryied to smooth them, i'll show it in the next update c ya

Coaster: thanks man, and don't worry about the old post, is was just a try, i gave up on it, and decided to start this new one, with a better topology...

Haraldus:thanks, like i said, i made her the back of her leg rounder smoother, now i think it's better, you'll see that soon...about her knee, i think they are at the right high, according to my ref, after i think it's a matter of taste, but thanks anyway


pgland:i corrected this area too, i think her shoulder are better now, try to show a little update today or in the next days thank


Cleveland:thank man, here is a shot of her knee, hope it help you..c ya


Chanchito: you are right about this crease i'm gonna make it not so deep, i forgot this area lol too many little detail to correct.. but it take so much time, sometimes i feel like i'm gonna freak out...lol abou ther face, i'm still looking for some good ref, for a beautiful face, that pretty hard, i'm looking for that for a long time now...:(

if anybody have some good ref for a nice face, it welcome..


here a little wire of her legs!

http://img222.exs.cx/img222/1269/wire2ri.jpg

[K_Digital]

really good

[J.K.Makowka]

Her belly seems to be really flat, but the rest looks quite nice so far :)

[INFINITE]

hey that a great start, will the knee deform well when animated? looks like there might be too much detail.

[dragonkiss]

hello there, here is a small update....still some few thing to correct but you'll have an idea of what i want to do....c&c are welcome c ya


http://img155.exs.cx/img155/8564/frontfullbody0ig.jpg

[Cleveland]

thanks for the knee shot, dragonkiss. seeing that i think that i could do with some more geometry in my knees.

keep up the great work,

cleveland.

[pgland]

Hey Dragonkiss,
really nice, looks like its coming along really well! I`m finding it difficult to crit. The only thing I can see was mentioned already by J.K.Makowka, perhaps the belly is a bit flat? It is hard to tell from this angle, but there dosen`t seem to be alot of shading around that area. I think the curve of the stomach is one of the sexiest areas, a bit of fat just under the belly button, and a dip just above would really help I think. Maybe take a liitle look at the side of the knee as well, there is a line there that could do with being smoothed out a bit.
Really superb model though - especially those legs and ankle.
What are you going to do with her. Are you going to rig her? Because if you are, i`d clean up the triangles a bit.
How about some more angles? Lokking forward to more updates!

[dragonkiss]

Cleveland: you r welcome..:)

pgland:well, u r right from this angle, it quite hard to see, but i 've change her belly a little, now it suppose to be not so flat, about her knee, i've corrected that too, but that you can't see that on this shot, you'll see it on the next one..., to answer to your question, about what i want to do with her, my concept is, to make a hitman, a kind of lethal weapon, that the mafia would hire for some very hard contract, so beside her body, i m gonna model some weapon, (9mm +silencer or something like this..) with a holster, and i will try to animate her as well, with as many skin morpg as i can handle, for her tight, her arms etc...to keep her as realistic as i can...still a lot a work to do...but as soon as i'm satisfied with the overall of her body, i m gonna start texturing....another long task..:(
thank you
and c ya

[tinitus]

NICE BODY!
real good work!but keep on working on the face...in my opinion you should move the mouth a bit up!

[StephD]

good start
it looks a bit sharp and boxy overally, Ithink you shold try to smooth it

[dragonkiss]

tinitus: thanks man, i've corrected her face a little since the last update, i'll try to post an update soon, actually, i'm working on the texture now... thank you man,
oh by the way, i liked very much, you model you are working on..:)


Dezz:
thank man..:) merci de me faire remarquer ça, mais j'avais voulu faire une nana plutot athletic sans pour autant etre skinny, donc j'heiste a la smoother trop, pour qu'elle garde ce concept, et ce niveau de detail...enfin voilà..:) merci quand meme..:)
c ya

[Leshiy3d]

much similars as Peter Syomka wip :eek:

[dragonkiss]

Leshiy3d: yes you are right, the syomka's rule....:) he's a great source of inspiration, and one of the best topology i have seen...

[Wolfmonster]

I don't mean to sound like a pervert, but it's nice to see someone model a character, paying attention even to the "smallest details". I never see that on a CG website. Props to you my friend, great work!

- Karl

[dragonkiss]

hi everybody, soory for the lack of update, but i was quite busy, anyway...i started the texture, there are still few thing to correct, but you get an idea of what i would like to have..

Wolfmonster: thank you:)


http://img54.echo.cx/img54/7408/fbt33ld.jpg

[-CCFly-]

really nice, i especially like you skin shader.
can't wait to see her with some hair ...

[dragonkiss]

-CCFly-: thanks man, the texture and her hair are in progress, i'll try to post something soon...:)
c ya

http://img131.echo.cx/img131/3562/fbtb48ux.jpg

[Cleveland]

she keeps getting better.

it was strange thoug. when i first looked at her i was struck by auestion: is there such a thing as a knee to neck ratio? i think maybe her neck is a little too thick for her head. then i think that maybe her head is too small for her body. other than that, you know what i think...


cleveland.

[tinitus]

hey...looks better now!I would love to see her with hair!
the hands are perfect!
really good work!...keep it on!

and thx.I try my best with her!

[dragonkiss]

Cleveland: thanks dude, well i think her proportion are ok, after maybe it's a matter of taste, and i think i'm done with the modeling part..:p i already spent too much time on her, i have to finish her..:D

tinitus: thank you!

So here is my last update with some texture correction, the two body part welded and few clothes:) and a hair test c ya guys

http://img257.echo.cx/img257/1253/sample8qy.jpg

[logotomie]

I am really jealouse for some of the details of your girl. I like hands, feet (ankle area is sweet!) armpits/elbow. I think you should continue improving the head.( The mouth area still looks kind of strange) and the neck

[pgland]

Hey Dragonkiss,
Great!
I know you`ve just weilded the two parts of the body, but I still thik the calves maybe are a touch too boxy? There is quite a sharp highlight down one side of them. And the line between the sholulder and breast is still there a bit. They are ony small things though, so don`t know if you want to fix them or not. I was just slightly worried about the line across the shoulder as it might mean the mesh is a bit strange around there? Might make it difficult to deform correctly?
Anyway, the rest is still really great. The ankle and foot are so good! And the knickers are looking really well done - apart from the zip shader, maybe it is just a place holder.
I like the hair test too, is that the style you`re going for? Hair is a nightmare for me!

Anyway, keep it up Dragonkiss! I like very much!

[Pony]

great work on the body. Lots of detail. Love it. The zipper though, there would be a bit of fabric on both sides of the teath of it.

[Freefall]

Looks incredibly good, stunning amount of details. Keep it comin :applause:

[-CCFly-]

please be so kind and give that lady a hair cut ;)

like this she looks a bit like Samara Morgan from "the Ring" ;)

[dragonkiss]

hello,

well, i'm back on that model after a long time of....nothing, lol, so now i have time to finish her, i hope this time it will for good! so i corrected some little detail and i'm gonna fix some more soon, i wont rig her, i will just let her in that position i think, and next step, some hair, i just have to find out the best when for that, if i will use a plugin, or some poly with a map, i don't knwo yet!
C&C r welcome!

[madskillz18]

I really love the details that you added to the character. And that pants/underwear she's wearing is real nice.

[Borro]

WOW looks really cool. One thing bugs me thou... The knees look a bit weird, it might be just me i don't know, but thats what I think. And thats my only crit otherwise the model is looking great. Nice body...

BTW i just love the pants :) nice texture.
Keep it up!

[dragonkiss]

madskillz18: thanks dude, but i still have to work an her shorty a little!

Borro:thanks, i understand you about her knees, but i like them that way even if it might look weird for some people :)

another little render

[dees]

hi,

I'm not commenting on proportion or shape cause to me it's way fine :thumbsup:.

But can you share the shader tricks you are using ? and maybe the lighting....
It's awesome.................:eek:

You have a 5 stars work there !!!

:beer:

dees

[Shonner]

I'm keeping my eyes on this one. Her leg/knees are killer. Great texturing, too.

[dragonkiss]

hello ,

i've been doing some hair test those last days, so i'd like some feedback..:)
but you'll see on the picture something weird, which i don't understand so if someone knows why, it would more than welcome!, so here's my problem so i use the scanline render for those test, wnd when i do a whole body view render she have some kind of black mask on her face, which is not suppose to be here and when i make a close up render no black mask anymore, so how this stuff happen?????


http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/7218/weirdhairinhead1xx.jpg


http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5359/closeuphair4cf.jpg

[dragonkiss]

ooooh i forgot to say that i use hair and fur!!!

[Pionier]

great work, nothing to crit on the modeling for me, from time to time post some wire if you can, I hope that will be helpful for us. Skin shader is great too.

good luck !

[Odd-Job]

Wow,very nice model and very clean geometry as well

My compliments!!!

[dragonkiss]

hello,
so i triyed to correct my hair problem, so i'm still making some hair test...
c&c are welcome..c ya

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/8092/hairtest31yh.jpg

[Tommassino]

really nice . Could you kindly post there a few wires (especially head and body) , because i am starting with characters and your perferct mesh with certainly right topoly would be perfect to learnig:).
I repeat, Your work is really perfect:thumbsup:
PS: How do you do the hair ?

[logotomie]

her hair looks a bit straw like. maybe let it "clump" a bit on the ends. for long smooth hair it might have a bit to much randomness too.

[Pionier]

I really don't know what plugin are you use to create your hair but check this making-of:

http://67.15.36.49/team/Tutorials/ataturk/ataturk_p5.asp

imo, nice effect and maybe help you ;)

god luck

[dragonkiss]

Odd _Job: thanks :)

Tommassino: thanks, i'm gonna post some wire soon, i did her hair with hair and fur, which is with the updgrade of 3D max 7.5

logotomie: you are completly right, i should add some more clump !, i'll try that later when i will manage to render the way i want!

Pionier: thank you, i 've already seen that tutorial, but my problem is because of a bug maybe, cause a friend of mine had the same problem with ornatrix 1.3 and both of those plugin use atmospheric so maybe that's why, but i'm really not sure..i'm still looking for the answer!

c ya folks!

[dragonkiss]

hello guys!


here are my new hair style, so if you could tell me which one fit her better that would be nice..
c ya guy....oups i forgot to post some wire, i'm gonna post that soon promise!!!

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8069/difhairstyle6ag.jpg

[pgland]

Hey Dragonkiss, long time! Looks like we started up our WIPS again at the same time, but you are having more luck with hair I think!

The second style is the one to go for I reckon. The first is interesting with all the different lengths but really hard to tell what is going on. I love irregular hair, but the second is simpler and more effective I think.

Is there any rigging in there yet?

Keep going dude!!

[logotomie]

I would stick with hairstyle 1. I like both but i think you should stick with nr 1. short hair is imho easier to master.

[twistkill]

wow...awsome...
hairstyle 1 looks better than the 2nd...

can we please see the wires..preferably the lowpoly one???

[Freefall]

I personally think hairstyle 2 is better since it's much more feminine. I suppose the hairstyle 1 would be easier to master as logotomie mentioned but I don't think it looks very good. I think you pulled of a pretty decent job with the long hair, keep it coming :thumbsup:

[dragonkiss]

hello,
the wire view as requested...

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/2734/wireview8xu.jpg

[dragonkiss]

hello, i did some improvement to the hair cut, style 1 & 2 , i like both style but i think i'm gonna keep the second style with longer hair, or maybe i'll keep both, and when she will be finish, make to images one with shorter hair and one with longer...:)


style 2 (long hair)

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6725/haiestyle2closeup3tm.jpg


style 1 (short hair)

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9653/hairstyle1closeup0rz.jpg

[twistkill]

hello,
the wire view as requested...


AWSOME MAN...NICE WORK AND THANKS FOR THE MESH...ITS A NICE EXAMPLE TO FOLLOW

[dragonkiss]

hello, i've been off for some days, but i could work on her today, and i decided to change some detail over here and over there on her body, i changed her face as well.
C&C are welcome.
c ya :)

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3616/bodymod5tw.jpg

[[.Q.]]

ufff she's hot...


i like the body alot.. the face expressions looks a little weird (could use some work to get that more feminine look)

whats this proj for? just for fun.. will she be animated.. at least a walk as she shakes her booty :)

[dragonkiss]

hello there,

i was pretty busy lately, so i could n't update, but here is a texturing test, so Cand C are welcome.:)

[.Q.]: thx dude, i changed few thing on her face, but maybe it's because it wasn't texturized yet, is it better now?
about an animation i din't know yet, i will see about that cause i'm not a animation expert at all...


update:
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/5358/rendertesttexture6ia.jpg

[dragonkiss]

i was talking with some friend of mine that gave me pretty good advices to improve my work, so here is an other render with some hair as well:)


http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3823/quitegoodtest9mo.jpg

[Freefall]

Skin shader/texture is spot on, looks very realistic. I'm waiting for updates... :)

[66cool99]

Skin shader/texture is spot on, looks very realistic. I'm waiting for updates... :thumbsup: ....oh yah ass weell

[AndyH]

Looking good so far.
VERY nice body modeling (i especially like the knees!) and her face looks good, if a little generic.

Keep up the good work - ill be looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

[dragonkiss]

hello there,
it was a long time again, i was away,thank you guys for your comments, i couldn't go on with her cause i reached the limit of my computer, but now, i just add some extra memory, so i can work again, so here is my last update...C&C are welcome c ya


http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1967/r4fr5na.jpg

[casesensative]

The model looks really good, especially with the clothes and textures, but the wireframe could use alot of work on the flow.

[dragonkiss]

casesensative: thank you, i still have lot of thing to tweak and correct, but here is a little update C and C r welcome


http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/4811/rh4fgre2yb.jpg

[XTitan]

Nice job, I especially like the modelling on the lower half of the body. Her butt, her legs(front & back of her knees and heels) and the hands too. Keep it up! :)

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