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newbie777
03-13-2005, 10:05 PM
Hi there

Do you know Digital Tutors "Female Android" named Alexia.
I am currently working on her boyfriend: me, as a semi-human cyborg.
I pretty much followed the workflow they are showing in the tutorial for Alexia, but then took my own head as reference.
Critique is welcome.

Greetings

Daniel
http://www.trash.net/%7Enewbie/cyborg_mentalray_render4.jpg
tdawg217
03-15-2005, 05:20 AM
there seem to be some modelling errors around the waist, it looks like you used the meshsmooth modifier and the result made a large gap where you wanted to have a tight seam.

try chamfering the edges to fix this

there is also some other errors where the reflections look a little weird, this could just be the environment, but if you could post a wire and some more views we could crit some more.

good luck:)
newbie777
03-15-2005, 06:58 PM
Ok, thanks so long. Here follow two wireframe on shaded views. The second one shows some details about the chest.
http://www.trash.net/%7Enewbie/cyborg_wireframe_persp.jpg
http://www.trash.net/%7Enewbie/cyborg_wireframe_persp1.jpg
tdawg217
03-16-2005, 02:47 AM
the mesh looks pretty clean.
however i dont think that the seams in his stomach area look very good.
look in the picture below and try using the same method as you did in the red box for the seams in the stomach

goodluck:thumbsup:
**try rendering in jpeg, the file size will be alot lower
http://www.askmercerisland.org/untitled.bmp
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