Beast Boy

[dmonk]

Good job. Great translation from the model sheet. I like it!

[XAQT]

Model looks good!

If you're trying to model from reference than there are quite a few things a bit off tho...
- the back of the hair
- the lines of the body including the strips on the side of his jumpsuit
- overal lines of the arms and legs

[onelung]

looks pretty good, few crits,
the shoes don't seem to be as exagerated in the model, also, the yes don't seem to have the right feel. And i think his jaw could be a bit more angular..... also might trying playing with the colors a tad more to get em just right.

so close to being spot on.

[AdamAtomic]

agreed - its very close, but needs some tweaking:

1 - calves on your model are slightly too low
2 - hips are a tad small (not much)
3 - eyebrows could probably come in just a tiny bit

[pic2230]

Thanks everyone for the quick reply's! The textures are just something I smacked on there quickly, I'm gonna tweak them a bit more, and maybe give him a good toon render. Keep em coming...

[wmdhodge]

Dude,

Where did you get the turnaround? Was there one of Mammoth? Do you have a link.

Oh and by the way, good modelling job. It's tight.

[pic2230]

wmdhodge, Got the model sheets straight off of there site and no they didn't have a complete turnaround of Mammoth, this was the only pic that they had: http://heroicimages.net/toons/Resources/Images/TeenTitans/tt_mammoth.jpg

[Beastie]

Looks good but I agree with a few face changes, mostly a more straighter edge jaw. Right now hes looking a little more animal than the show would imply. tweak a few verts to give him more of a human jaw and eyeline and you got it!

[wmdhodge]

Thanks pic2230.

[AdamAtomic]

ooo good eye beastie, you are exactly right - i think the head on the model is a little too round in general actually. that's what was bugging me!

[Dyrn]

it looks to me like he's a touch too stocky all over. The limbs, the torso- the neck could all do to be narrowed some. Even the head could do to be shrunk some, I think.

on a minor note, the hands look slightly pudgy, or puffy- like mickey mouse hands.

[pic2230]

Thanks again everyone. I see what everyone is saying. I think things look a little wierd is because in the model sheet he is standing with one foot slightly behind the other and at a little twist. Also I didn't adjust the boots to match the sheet, so that it would make it easier to rig in the future. I'm including my wire on top of the model sheet to show how I modeled it. If I end up rigging and posing him i'll try matching the sheet better. Thanks again!

http://digitalarts.bgsu.edu/portfolios/beekman/b3

[Kassar]

Looks great! Nice model

Nuff said

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