Samurai-ish Chick

[Praetus]

For the most part I like it. There are a few things I can criticise on it though. (Constructively of course.) :thumbsup:

Her corset doesn't seem to fit her since it looks Oriental in motif. I was almost expecting her to have an Obi or something. (It's the big ribbon looking wasteband that is worn around a Kimono.) The corset doesn't look bad though. What strikes me as odd is that the texture looks like brushed metal. Maybe a cloth or pattern would do better? The boots textures look fine but havibng metal on the front and back of the boots seems out of place. I think the front would look fine with some details on the back of the boots or something like that. Your proportions are good and your textures are pretty ace though. I wouldn't mind seeing some alternate angles or some wires though.

Also, is she rigged yet?

[Neil]

does the sword attach the waist somehow?
Or does she walk around with the sword AND bow in hand?

I like the flower pattern on the shirt. It's hard to see though, I would bring that out more.

[AndyH]

Looks really excellent.
What style are you going for though? If shes meant to be realistic, id add detail to the textures and scale her head down a tad, but if shes meant to be stylised or a little bit anime-ish, then great job. Also, i think the boots need reworking. They look far too undetailed and contrasty compared to the rest of her right now. Its also hard to tell what theyre made of. Define some kind of material for them and texture seams, straps, sole, dirt etc on to it.
I love the head - nice shape and good expression, with nicely modeled hair too. Any chance of seeing some more angles or a closeup?

Good work!

[HntrLuc]

Thanks for the replys everyone ^ ^ It's always nice to get good feedback.

Praetus - The corset thing, is suposed to be metal (which might not make sense, but I liked the idea :P) but I guess I should work on that. No, she's not rigged, unfortunetly, I don't know how to rig.

Neil - The bow would be hung over her back somehow, either around the quiver, or her chest. The sword....she can carry that ;). Or Stick in between her hip and that armor somehow :P. The flower patern was hard, cause I didn't want it to overpower everything else, I'll try and bring it some more though.

Andy H - I'm going for a semi-realistic/anime-ish look. I'm definetly going to redo the boots when I get the time.

Here's some more angles:

http://www.mustangmods.com/data/3140/untextured.jpg

http://www.mustangmods.com/data/3140/wip3.jpg

http://www.mustangmods.com/data/3140/closeup.jpg

[Praetus]

I do like it. Although some of the other angles you've provided make her legs look a bit short. I don't know if I'm mistaken, but you may want to look them over.

[GoK]

Looks cool, very (older) FF! You might want to add more (much more) shading into the clothing tho cos it looks a little flat at the mo... i expect you were prob gonna do that anyway! Sweet work keep it up!

Jody

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