Concept Game Phone

[The Funimator]

hi ... care to give some comment? i would appreciate that very much... i need comment to improve in the long run. thanks man. :)

[Neeno]

Hey duded.. kewl model and textures you got there ... the only thingi think is abit off is the actual phone (ear piece) maybe you could texture the actual speaker rather then the blue part...Overall its pretty good dude... keep it up !! :thumbsup: (wouldnt be a bad idea either play and call ya girl friend makes things much easier)

[The Funimator]

thanks man... ur comment is appreciated.. i will do more refined job n try to come out a better one. :)
anyone has more comment for a beginner here? i'm thirsty for comments.... please help me to improve. thanks in advanced. :)

[The Funimator]

anybody feel free to comment my unfinished work up there.. i'm really thirsty of comment to improve.... thanks... :)

[GradiusCancer]

The design needs a lot of work. It looks like one of those mid-90s PC joypads or a xbox controller and a jaguar controller got married. A more streamline design would be much more affective. Ear piece is very 80's and old school spiraling cord seems a bit out of date too. BTW, all buttons and ear piece, how does the game play, imagination? I strongly suggest you study today's cutting edge technology designs and take another go at this.

Your materials lack any real depth. This isn't the best example, found it real quick in the finished 3d section:
http://cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=216906
Noticed how, even though the alan key is black, it's not totally absorbing the light, and has a light, noisey depth. Though that is meant to be metal, any plastic cell phone, game controller, etc, has that very small, noisey depth. The text reads very well.

[The Funimator]

thanks guys... i'll work more on it to make look real. thanks for the comments and advices. :)
appreciate that.

[mannya]

Hey funtimer !! I think the model is coming up good, you gotta work on speculers and difuse. If u want to show it highly shiny then offcorse there ll b some reflection also / or if u wanna show it bit matte finish then u can more work on mid level lights ...

:thumbsup: cya

[The Funimator]

thanks Mannya... i'll take note of that.... :)
i'm busy working on my other animation film now... i will compile all the advices you guys gave me and do a final touch up soon, i hope. :)
pls check out my first character modelling -- Moogle from Final Fantasy VIII at the WIP section. and hope you guys can give as much comment n critiques as possible. So tat i can take note in my final animation short film...

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