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JOFRA
03-02-2005, 12:33 PM
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Title: A-1h Skyraider
Name: Johan Franken
Country: Netherlands
Software: 3ds max

Below you can see a render of my A-1H Skyraider approaching the carrierdeck.

Mesh: by Johan Franken (3DS Max 4)
Textures: by Johan Franken (Paintshop)
Rendering: 3DS Max 4 (Scanline Render)
Backdrop photograph: by Johan Franken
Original size: 4096 x 2730 px.

Special thanks to Frank for making the Enterprise-adventure possible and to Mr. Skyraider (Ronnie) for all his usefull comments and hints

Johan Franken
www.tripled.tk
TheShaddix
03-03-2005, 03:18 AM
Cant believe nobody has replied yet, man. Great work. Maybe because people think it's not as interesting as cars or characters ? But i can say 100% that your render + model is very cool. Maybe you can add some stuff to it now and post it in a better place because this gallery system is shit: you post today and tomorrow ur work will be on the second page :/
There are of course pros and cons, but its not fair to those ppl who post good stuff.
Mystikos
03-03-2005, 06:56 AM
Love your work! Great stuff here, except the shadow of the plan is far too sharp. With such a bright ambience I would be expecting there to be barely a wisp of shadow.
primal_r
03-03-2005, 10:28 AM
Is the landingstrip in the photograph too? ...
The plane looks photorealistic so good work!

No much else to say about it =)
JOFRA
03-03-2005, 04:21 PM
Thanks for your replies!

Yes posts disappear very quickly at this site. So many talented people who post their images here!

About the shadows. Look at the shadow below the trucks in the right of the picture. They are very intense too. I got some crits about the shadow being to crip and edged compared to the motion blurred deck. But I think that even on a motionblurred deck (camera effect) the shadow should always be hard edged (light is traveling very fast).

However, please click here (http://members.lycos.nl/frankenjohan/forum/A-1H_Trap_blurredshadow.jpg) to see a blurred shadow. Tell me what you like more!

Johan
agasco
03-03-2005, 07:43 PM
amazing! very very nice, all, the model the lighting the render the blur, very impresive and realistic, congratulations:thumbsup:
Chems
03-05-2005, 11:38 AM
Looks great, I prefer it with the blurred shadow. Great work.
Ravix
03-05-2005, 12:36 PM
great job :) definetly the sharp shadow is too distracting,

I think the sun will be reflecting more on the cockpit and if u burn the reflection will add that little touch of realism
joshmachine
03-09-2005, 11:31 AM
i feel the roto shadow is not right u wont shadow so sharp instead u get blurred shadow in that area !


Ckeck out if i am wrong.
but work is sexy!
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