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DoInferno
03-01-2005, 08:14 PM
My idea is to make the reader experiment the experience of a backpacker traveling around the world. Hope you guys like it and iŽll love to have feedback from you!

I also hope you all subscribe to the thread, so you will be able to see the way the history goes!
DoInferno
03-01-2005, 09:09 PM
The Backpacker 001http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker01.jpg
coCoKNIght
03-01-2005, 09:22 PM
Hey, the backpacker idea is awesome! And I've nothing to crit on that first strip! :thumbsup:
RobertoOrtiz
03-01-2005, 10:33 PM
you have finished material, you can post it

HERE:
THE COMIC STRIP! 001:March 2005: "Sins of the Past" (NEW! TEMPLATES)
Loulu79
03-02-2005, 12:37 AM
DoInferno's is a great example of what I think R.O. is talking about. It's simple and to the point. Mine is simple...but when you view the story and the text...it can be complexed. Not to me.:D
DoInferno
03-04-2005, 04:21 AM
The Backpacker002:http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker02.jpg
Ilikesoup
03-04-2005, 03:25 PM
I like it so far, Carlos. The writing seems very sincere -- is your character fictional or mostly based on your own experience? Only crit I have on the art is that it's too white. Shading and blacking out some areas (hat, t-shirt) will make your character stand out from the background. You could also use heavier outlines for nearer figures and thinner outlines for mountains & details in the distance.


Looking forward to more updates! :thumbsup:
DoInferno
03-05-2005, 06:12 PM
Thanks for the tips Ilikesoup! The drawns were just fine at my sketchbook, but after scanning and resizing, i think they lost a little. IŽll try to make the forth strip better, since the third is already done.

The character is fictional, and i would love to do just like him, even tought i backpack a little every now and them...

Hope to see you here again!
DoInferno
03-08-2005, 01:46 AM
The Backpacker003:
http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker03.jpg
DoInferno
03-13-2005, 10:25 PM
Ok, the character has been introduced. Now iŽll take 5 strips to get to Sins of the Past.

The Backpacker04:
http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker04.jpg
DoInferno
03-22-2005, 05:11 AM
The Backpacker 05:

http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker05.jpg
DoInferno
03-29-2005, 03:40 PM
The Backpacker 06:

http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker06.jpg
DoInferno
03-30-2005, 04:56 AM
The Backpacker 07:

http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker07.jpg
DoInferno
03-30-2005, 09:44 PM
The Backpacker 08:

http://www.carlosranna.com.br/comics/backpacker08.jpg
RobertoOrtiz
04-11-2005, 10:54 PM
Hi Carlos, are we getting any more updates.

I am looking forward for more.

-R
DoInferno
05-09-2005, 06:35 AM
Hi folks! The backpacker is not dead, but his hands are hurt and he is not being able to post things here at CGTalk... Pretty soon heŽll be back!

See yall later!
RobertoOrtiz
07-14-2005, 04:26 PM
FYI

THE COMIC STRIP 2.0: New Rules...(NEED YOUR INPUT) (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=258630)

I would love to hear your ideas.

-R
DoInferno
07-26-2005, 10:54 PM
Hi yall. IŽm thinking to reactivate this one, now that my tablet and i are familiar to each other and we have new rules.

IŽll see what i can do to make this looks better. Roberto, should i start a new thread or should i keep working on this one?
RobertoOrtiz
07-26-2005, 10:57 PM
Welcome back!
Please keep the old thread.
Send me the stuff when you are ready.
-R
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