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03-01-2005, 01:19 PM

Title: Angel
Name: Song Yuefeng
Country: China
Software: 3ds max, Brazil r/s, Photoshop

hi~~ welcome my posts.
This is the first time I Submit here.
The girl in my work is one of my students,her chinese name is Anqi,from angel's transliteration..
...Sorry for my poor english.
I'll be very glad to your comments.

>> Hi resolution image << (http://www.chinadv.com/forum/Web/UpFiles/2005/3/1/73676205.jpg)

03-01-2005, 04:57 PM
Nice work!~ great modeling and texturing~
But the the shape of clothe is a little unnatural, especially the part next to the statue's ear.

03-01-2005, 05:00 PM
wow ! exellent work ! :thumbsup:
The rock is very nice

03-01-2005, 05:11 PM
amazing work! I agree about th cloth though it looks like it's been glued there. But everything else is so good. Top marks from me.

Pete B

03-01-2005, 05:36 PM
hope this won't be your last post! ;)

let me give you your first 4 stars!

03-01-2005, 06:23 PM
Fantastic stuff - very original too!
I love the pose of the girl - especially her arms and hands, and the statue makes for an intresting composition and a pleasing image overall. Excellent cloth modeling as well. Is her hair 3d?? It looks so damn good!
My only crit is that her head seems a little large - like shes very young or something, and i cant quite see what she is sitting on - it almost looks like shes floating and the backdrop isnt physically there.

Great work overall though!

Any chance of some more views, wireframes or detail shots?

03-01-2005, 07:19 PM
Excellent work! You have a good sense of composition too!

03-01-2005, 07:22 PM
beautiful scene, congratulation...

03-01-2005, 08:10 PM
Very nice Pic. I like the pose of her and the Scene with the statue in the Back.:thumbsup:

03-01-2005, 10:08 PM
Excellent work :thumbsup:

03-01-2005, 10:15 PM
interesting work!!!
- but i think she is a bit smooth...

03-01-2005, 10:22 PM
0very nice would of love to see the wip (more so wires of this)

The Challenger
03-01-2005, 10:37 PM
Good job on the modeling and texturing! Great render and mood as well.

03-01-2005, 10:38 PM
Nice work, I like the hair, clothes and pose,

A couple of things appear a bit wierd to me, her elbow (dunno what it is about it) and the cloth over the statues ear (seems to be an odd position and some of the folds don't make sense to me, though the other side of the figure it looks good).

03-01-2005, 10:51 PM
i love the pose dude!

outstanding work, nice BG
keep it comming

cheers from argentina

03-01-2005, 11:28 PM
love it !! Great modeling and posing, especialy love the detail on the hands and feet.

03-01-2005, 11:53 PM
Beautiful composition. The girl's emotions are so well seen. But I feel that the elbows are a little strange. It looks too flat near the bend of the elbow.

Would love to see some wires.

03-02-2005, 12:04 AM
Awsome composition. Love the way the girl is posing. The cloth does look too stiff near the ear. Her elbow too looks strange.

Would love to see the wires.

03-02-2005, 12:53 AM
I second the oddity of the elbow. I think it would bulbe out more with the muscle (toward the camera) and dimple slightly closer to the bone at the point.

the cloth looks silky and blowing in a breeze, but maybe the hair would be more offset if the breeze were strong enough to paste the cloth against the statue like it is.

Definitely a great image though!

03-02-2005, 01:58 AM
this is an amazing work it... It has a really good mood and fealling to it. I love the pose and the lighting is very excelent :) I have no advice to add, that others have not said already. very excelent job hope to see more soon. FIVE SMILEYS :) :) :) :) :)

03-02-2005, 02:06 AM
Hmm , Orginal idea , I like ur modeling , texturing and rendering and anothers ...
5 stars from me ...
Goodluck ...

03-02-2005, 02:07 AM
Congrats in being here at cgTalk. Great composition. Only three crits:

1) What is she really sitting on? I don't feel she has enough balance to lean forward.
2) That piece of cloth close to the statue's ear is a bit off. Is it because of the wind?
3) The shininess of the cloth is way too shiny. Is that Photoshop?

Other than that, great work!
I give u 4 stars!:buttrock::buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

03-02-2005, 02:25 AM
Very striking; awesome piece.

03-02-2005, 03:39 AM
Amazing work, i really like the lighting and atmosphere because it created the the best mood of this project.
well done !!! it's awesome:thumbsup:

03-02-2005, 03:48 AM

03-02-2005, 04:09 AM
:thumbsup: Very Nice work.Looks real.

03-02-2005, 04:10 AM
This is absolutely beautiful. It kinda reminds me of the Festival films that comes out of China every now and then.

Keep it up!!

03-02-2005, 04:16 AM
I like it. great job on the dress. Ouch! :thumbsup:

03-02-2005, 04:45 AM
She is very pretty but her elbows look funny.

03-02-2005, 04:46 AM
Yeah... Wow...

Incredible work.

03-02-2005, 05:31 AM
wonderfull job...

03-02-2005, 06:42 AM
hey, nice work. just one problem other than the supposedly windblown cloth:D, her upper legs look quite skinny than the lower legs, the ankle looks especially thick. kinda makes her look like a hobbit.:scream: other than that i think that is a very nice image.

03-02-2005, 06:42 AM
...wonderful work !

03-02-2005, 07:22 AM
Cooooooool. 4 stars :buttrock:

03-02-2005, 07:22 AM
Wow man!
Amazing work, I like light, color, modeling...well ALL! her face is very nice....congratulations!


03-02-2005, 07:44 AM
Great IDEA!!! The girl posed on the stone figure!!!GReat!I like it a lot!

03-02-2005, 07:46 AM
This is very nice. You might want to check the form of her elbow though--it's a bit strange.

03-02-2005, 07:47 AM
Awesome modeling and texturing.
Only crit is that the knees look a bit squarish to me, there's also something wrong with the elbows, they look to flat from this side.
Good work!:buttrock:

03-02-2005, 08:43 AM
Wonderfull, wow

03-02-2005, 09:32 AM
I like it so much, it's a great job ! :wip:

03-02-2005, 10:35 AM
great work, original! i love the feel too this piece. is this a student in cg you are modeling, or are you teaching another subject? :)

03-02-2005, 10:42 AM
looking good, great work.
also nice invented scene you got there.

but dont like the elbow and the cloth to the right that much.

03-02-2005, 10:48 AM
very nice work!

03-02-2005, 11:04 AM
wonderful pose of this girl. excellent piece of work! keep it up!

03-02-2005, 12:05 PM
wow she good..is cloth model to pose or simulated??

03-02-2005, 12:15 PM
the pose is really intressting aswell as the facial pose, that's what's made it all intressting to me, excellent work! :)

03-02-2005, 01:08 PM
Thank for all suggestions!!!

About some problem of configuration,I've tried my best.
It's always difference between people and people ,I want make it individuality,not conceptually.

The antetype of character:my student, is 13 years old.(i teach painting weekend,my interest)she is also a sideline player,her arm and leg is very long...very charming girl.
Maybe I let her looks elder...hahahahttp://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon10.gif

Some regret at the cloth in wind,it should be nature than now...

03-02-2005, 01:37 PM
First post here? May i ask were you were posting till now? I like to see more. :thumbsup:

03-02-2005, 01:56 PM
Beautiful image, the pose is excellent. The rock texture id good as well.

Got any idea around how long it took you to create it all? Just curious

03-02-2005, 02:04 PM
I really like the contrast between the subtility of this angel and the solid feeling from the statue, the instabillity of her pose contrasted with this heavy piece of rock, very nice impression !

03-02-2005, 03:23 PM
Awesome work:)

03-02-2005, 03:35 PM
Beautiful work!
I love the backstory
that I have to imagine about this piece.

In addition to other suggestions,
please consider putting some goose bumps on her,
since she looks chilly.


03-02-2005, 03:50 PM
Just stopped by to drool some and give you lots of stars!
(and to agree that the fabric on the ground is too shiny)

03-02-2005, 04:07 PM
wow..amazing work..

03-02-2005, 04:43 PM
Nothing much to say, great character with beautiful face and hair. The best part is the wonderful pose.
Also great modeling on the bg statue, especially the way the upper lip is defined.
Great image altogether full of atmosphere.

People can always argue about everything and anything, make the dress like this, do the elbow like that but at least for me, leave it as it is. It’s just beautiful.

Hope to see more of your work

03-02-2005, 05:40 PM
I really love this picture. The girl's pose and face are so expressive. Also like the halfclosed
eyes, gives her some kind of spiritual aura.


03-02-2005, 05:40 PM
very good work :)

03-02-2005, 05:46 PM
Great imagery. As far as the cloth goes I think it shows environmental effects of wind blowing it against the statue. I see things in motion alot of times even when looking at still art.

03-02-2005, 05:47 PM
love the work and the concept... the contrast between a little girl and cold stone statue is awsome... however... I feel like if the little girl have her eyes open up, it would definitely make the piece look alot stronger... http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon11.gif... i just feel like the little girl is lacking of personality, so making her stare right into the audience or look up would give her alot more attitude

hope this help



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03-02-2005, 06:29 PM
amazing outstanding job

03-02-2005, 10:07 PM
Grat work! I liked the texture and lighting.

5 stars :)

03-02-2005, 11:36 PM
Amazing. The whole image as that sort of mood i can't get my finger on. I love it.
Just on remark, the end part of the cloth near the statue's ear looks kind of flat. Shouldn't it be reacting to the breeze?
Keep them pics coming. Can't wait for you next one.

Top Notch!:thumbsup:

03-03-2005, 07:30 AM
:bounce: it's nice and i'm in shanghai too

03-03-2005, 07:52 AM
Hi there I just wanted to say Nice job there....she´s pretty : D
Btw can you put up a wire on the moddle?

03-03-2005, 10:13 AM
Beautiful work with the statue. The girl of course is stunning as well. Very nice piece of art.

03-03-2005, 11:29 AM
great modeling and texturing~
maybe the the shape of clothe is a little unnatural,?????

Michael Hovan
03-03-2005, 04:10 PM
I like the gaze the girl has in her eyes.

03-03-2005, 04:24 PM
I love the textures and the models, but her elbow is deforming strangely....

It is a great composition too! ;)

03-03-2005, 05:00 PM
Great work!

Nice textures and nice girl :)

I love it the lights!

03-03-2005, 06:44 PM
its grrrrreeeeeaaaatttttttt. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

03-03-2005, 07:13 PM
Loulu79:thanks for the stars.I let her sitting on a part of destroied hair.It's can't seen with this sight probably.
Good sugestion of the piece of cloth close to the statue's ear.
"The shininess of the cloth is way too shiny"is because of matiral,not photoshop.

max lover :the cloth is modeled to pose ,simulate is too unstraight to me to control the shape of models.

dan0891:I posting my work at chinadv till now,the biggest forum in china,because of my bad english and too busy work(I have my own company with my cobber)

darcru: Very long time,I can't calculate ,sorry.I always be disconnected because
other projects.

thanks a lot to all!!

03-03-2005, 08:09 PM
nice work
well done!!

03-03-2005, 10:10 PM
i think u r korean like me
nice meet u and ur work.
i like ur mood. i envy u~

03-03-2005, 10:39 PM
Very convincing rock. As the clothing has an unnatural feel, I enjoy it more because of it! Dreamy ambiance to the piece - please do more! :)

03-04-2005, 12:16 AM
Outstanding work! I love the size of the person to the statue. There is something over powering about this image. I feel desolation, and yet there is amazing beauty even in the deepest darkness. Keep it up!

03-04-2005, 01:17 AM
A Fantastic composition and illustration!

Constructive feedback - I would agree with other comments regarding dress on the viewer's right. It seems that there is possibly a breeze pushing it against the statue, which agrees with the flow of the hair in the same direction. The dress on the viewer's left appears very still.

I have to say that you've got some fantastic skills!!

03-04-2005, 02:49 AM
Great job, definiteley Choice material. I too agree with what others have said about the dress on the lower right. The texutres are very solid as well. Awesome Job.

P.S. - My 100th post goes out to you!

03-04-2005, 11:40 AM
The light is very nice,and the clothes.:thumbsup: ★★★★

03-04-2005, 01:08 PM
wow this is an awsome work i lve it toooo much hope see better thing soon

03-04-2005, 03:01 PM
Nice work..Nice & clean wire.
Great lighting..There is something with the cloth...but it's ok..Very HQ work..

03-04-2005, 03:56 PM
good very nice ,,i like it ,,

GraNd Pa ##
03-04-2005, 05:21 PM
Wow !... Now thats one hell of modelling, the cloth looks excellent.. gr8 wrk dude.. !!

03-04-2005, 11:01 PM
Awsome work...


03-05-2005, 02:05 PM
i really like it

Squidge Monkey
03-05-2005, 02:48 PM
As a novice Beginner (who also cant spell by the looks of it) I can leave no bad comments about the picture. But just to say it is really nice.

03-05-2005, 11:37 PM
Very amazing great sense of depth and perfect texture/lighting.:thumbsup:
You know your good.:D

03-06-2005, 08:25 AM
Heyhey......she looks like a girl friend of mine! :love: I like her hair and leg!! It's beautiful...

03-06-2005, 02:10 PM
in one word: WOW

03-06-2005, 04:46 PM
well done!
especially the clothes and the girl's expression...

03-06-2005, 11:16 PM
love ur 3D but the clothe part next to the statue's ear is a bit off, i think if u remove it and show the entire ear of the statue will be better, great work i say!

03-07-2005, 04:27 AM
:thumbsup: good! It's beautiful...

03-07-2005, 02:30 PM
wow , very amazing , for the hair strands , you use shag hair ??

03-07-2005, 02:56 PM

03-07-2005, 03:19 PM
amazin work !!!
i will get you later !

03-07-2005, 04:14 PM
The cloth may have this bright cause it seems a good cloth, remember me the bed clothes of the haunting when the child ghost swon through the bed, it may seems so in the real life with some texture of clothes.

03-07-2005, 04:53 PM
I truly love this image...it camptures a sence of mood i like the way she is position on the statue it's beautiful :bowdown: :beer:

03-08-2005, 05:30 AM
congratulation for your work. Love the lightning and the mood. I also think that the clothes next to the statue are a litlle bit strange. Modelisation and textures are also very good ! :thumbsup:

03-09-2005, 01:35 AM
real nice... i like it. especially her dress... real nice effect. nice job. but i do hace a suggestion.... i think the models shadow should be reflected agains the the statue face... considering the angle of the lighting.

only a suggestion.

by the real nice work man... thumb up.

03-10-2005, 12:17 AM
Wow!!! that silk is awesome! congratulations!

03-10-2005, 01:11 PM
Amazing, so amazing. I can't find any words. :surprised

03-11-2005, 04:54 AM
It'll be excellent if the cloth don't stick to the stone

03-12-2005, 07:11 AM
haha,i'm a chinese too! a student in nanjing
today is my first time here,second reply for your work
infact,the girl is very pretty,isn't she
ps:are you a teacher?
(the reply is english or chglish?^_^)

03-13-2005, 09:09 PM
Really great.:thumbsup:

03-15-2005, 03:50 AM
Beautifull! I like it!

it doesn't have to be real to be art!

I love it!

03-15-2005, 10:10 AM
hey nice!
where can I see a wire?

03-16-2005, 05:38 AM

03-16-2005, 10:26 PM
Wonderful image, really wonderful. Love the look on her face.

03-17-2005, 04:23 PM
Nice work. It's beautiful!
Just work couse you have great talent.

03-17-2005, 08:00 PM
i love it. i disagree about the cloth against the statue looking weird - it just looks like the wind is blowing it flat. anyways, great work.

03-17-2005, 10:52 PM
I love it !:love:

03-19-2005, 04:07 AM
I find this to be powerful - both vulnerable and stalwart. I'm very attracted to the combination of textures and colors, which enhance the emotions eminating from this complex and thought provoking image.

03-19-2005, 02:08 PM
very good,she's stomach pain?why her two hand cover the bingy :rolleyes: ,haha,a fun,开个玩笑,表情很不错 :thumbsup:

03-20-2005, 08:42 AM
Excellent work - the faces are particularly beautiful.

I think the cloth is fine

03-21-2005, 07:38 PM
Very good job. I like your color sense and texture work as well as composition.

lizhi ji
03-23-2005, 01:48 AM
wow !!!

03-23-2005, 02:10 AM
The colors is comfortable!

03-23-2005, 04:41 AM
love the statue ! nice shader :applause:

03-23-2005, 08:04 AM
I like style and composition.very good work.

03-24-2005, 06:53 AM
Thank you for an inspiring picture. I don't have anything new to say for critique, but I have to express my love for the form of the cloth, the flow in the hair, the texture on the stoneface and the angel-girls' characteristic pose. I love it. Keep on inspiring!!

03-24-2005, 01:48 PM
Amazing picture. What I really love is the sense of scale of the statue. It's pretty aweinspiring!

03-24-2005, 06:06 PM
Like the modeling. Don't like the composition. It seems like you've used the same model twice out of lack of background. Sorry. She is so delicate and well catched into a state of mind while the background lacks in "story".

03-26-2005, 03:08 PM
Very nice, excellent work :applause:

03-27-2005, 11:51 PM
mannn AMAZINGGG work !!

03-30-2005, 04:20 AM
Great works! I like it!

04-01-2005, 06:38 PM
so damn good...i have no words, especialy cos you're from Brasil dude !!! (i'm from São Paulo)

04-03-2005, 06:54 PM
:thumbsup: its really cool man :bounce: :applause: :applause:

04-05-2005, 11:34 AM
amazing work!!(zhen de hen bang!!)

04-05-2005, 02:54 PM
Love the whole composition of the picture. And esp. the cloth pushed by wind.. great work, hope to see more of it!

04-08-2005, 03:22 PM
Wow that looks like very neat work, almost Final Fantasy in a kind of way, love her pose very seductive.

04-09-2005, 02:56 PM
it is good
very nice and good work

04-13-2005, 06:23 AM
good work ,the arm was the only thing out of the ordinary for me,it was a little skeletonish, compared to the rest of her body,although she is slim,she is not skeletal looking,but her arm is.

04-14-2005, 11:30 AM
great! :thumbsup: really great work.:)

04-14-2005, 06:03 PM
Great Pose.

Statue material is fantastic.


04-15-2005, 01:00 AM
非常的棒 我喜欢
I like it very much
I should learning from the world

04-15-2005, 01:49 AM
the stone texture looks really realistic, I love how the girl sits on the side of the stone, very calm and nice composition too! Looking forward to more work from you!!

04-15-2005, 10:54 PM
I love your creation.
The string on her finger is blowing in the wind as well as her dress on her left side.
Some people will not notice that.
Thanks, again and keep up the good work.

04-25-2005, 03:42 PM
Wow. very powerful image. The comp is nice and the character looks realllly good. The statue texture is awesome! :applause:

04-25-2005, 10:58 PM
WoW its a mazing .... good luck :thumbsup:

04-26-2005, 12:00 PM
very nice indeed. WOW!, there are alot of talented people on this forum for sure.

05-02-2005, 07:34 AM
xcellent work..specially the girls xpression s so cute..unable to open ur high res image..

05-03-2005, 12:35 AM
very beatiful ..can you say more about the processe?

05-03-2005, 04:46 PM
everything in the scene are awesome!!
love the comp and character.
great work.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

05-10-2005, 10:14 AM
Good job on the modeling and texturing! Great render I like the stone texture !

Janaina Lucena
05-16-2005, 02:52 AM
I loved your work! It's really very good. I would never imagine that this is your first work with computer graphics. The girl is very bautiful, and, for me, the image is perfect. I still don't understand a lot of computer graphics, but I didn't find any wrong in your work!
I hope you and the orther members can help me to get better in my works!
Sorry my little English, I hope you and everybody understand me!

05-17-2005, 03:54 AM
but the cloths not well.try modify it!

05-23-2005, 04:45 PM
i really love your image!! is really really good!! especially the girl:scream: , really hope can see the girl's photos. "jia you"!!

05-29-2005, 09:06 PM
Wow you did some very intriguing facial posing, and her nody is well done. Shaders goos and lighting nice. Top notch man!:thumbsup:

05-30-2005, 01:57 PM
your work is really beautiful an the expresion of angel so realistic
an igive u 5star :buttrock:

05-30-2005, 08:05 PM
fantastic !

06-04-2005, 11:09 AM
:bounce: WOW! Mindblowing...its stupendous work ...just saw it..AWESOMEEEEEE:bounce:

06-16-2005, 05:51 AM

nothing to say!!! rating: magnifico!


Title: Angel
Name: Song Yuefeng
Country: China
Software: 3ds max, Brazil r/s, Photoshop

hi~~ welcome my posts.
This is the first time I Submit here.
The girl in my work is one of my students,her chinese name is Anqi,from angel's transliteration..
...Sorry for my poor english.
I'll be very glad to your comments.

>> Hi resolution image << (http://www.chinadv.com/forum/Web/UpFiles/2005/3/1/73676205.jpg)

06-21-2005, 04:45 PM
nice texture and rendering. keep up the good work

06-24-2005, 12:30 PM
I love the colour and textures. The composition is great also.

06-27-2005, 08:44 AM
very good i'm a chinese too

12-03-2005, 01:05 PM
awe some work tough i agree wid d veterans on clothing

12-03-2005, 04:57 PM
This is a Really nice piece. The Render is beutiful and the textures are very nice.

There is one thing that I would take a look at and that is the character is really off balance. If you were to add a frame to this picture, the next place you would see the girl is on the ground. Try and sit how she is sitting and see if you can actually stay in your seat. Especially with the wind at her back.

This really doesnt take away the fact that this looks really good it is just something to think about

Keep up the good work

12-14-2005, 02:06 PM
really nice one.

I hope I can type chinese, but anyway I am at school...(gosh,cannot use chinese >_<)

well, really glad to find one artist from my country, and may I contect you about my research about computer graphic?


ps.if you don't like use english I will type chinese when I get back home ^^

04-09-2006, 04:56 PM
I just love it!

04-20-2006, 02:23 AM
Great work! I'm proud of you!

11-03-2006, 11:23 AM

01-25-2007, 12:17 AM
I love the statue's texture and detail.
The clothe physics is really a stand out.
Looking at the clothe's physics I can tell the wind direction
and also how light and then her gown is.

04-12-2007, 06:16 PM
Likes your work. I generally only give the 3D master to reply Information. Receives my information, you are certainly very happy.

Wishes you to be joyful

07-19-2007, 10:07 PM
Nice work! How did you make her look cold and how did you make it look as if her hair is blowing in the wind?

06-18-2008, 01:44 PM
great I especially like the statue in the back

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