birthday

[eyetooth]

hiya,

I cannot see a picture of the card. I have been having similar problems showing a picture, and am not too sure how to rectify it.

goodluck

[egoego]

Hi,

Well I am trying it again, this time I am posting a link to my pic.

http://www.eo-art.com/pictures/birthday_card2.jpg

thanks
egio

[Swizzle]

Make sure that when you're trying to put an image in a post, you put the URL between the [img] tags. That way you'll make sure it's displayed. If you're working with the full "What You See Is What You Get" editor they have on here, make sure that you don't accidentally delete the image. I've had that happen a few times and it can be a real pain.

As for the image, it looks good. I like how you've done the coloring, and the style is pretty neat. One thing I think you could do is to have the line art that it looks like you have there show through just a bit. It'd define the whole design a bit more and make it easier to see what's going on.

[Rudeone]

Hey there, that's a pretty cute card, perfect for a birthday.
One thing: I'm from the netherlands and I speak a little german cause they teach it in schools here, not really good at it, but I think you forgot a letter, take a close look:D

[egoego]

Thanks already for the first critics.
Well I did a little more work and cleaned up the outlines, also the writing i fixed :)
What do you think now?

;) Sarah

http://www.eo-art.com/pictures/birthday_card3.jpg

[Rudeone]

lol I was right about the spelling huh, pretty funny;)

I do like the card, it's sweet, bet your friend will like it.

Maybe you should darken the side of the face and lighten the front to get a reflection caused by the candle

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