Space Station X

[BrockSamson]

It looks good but it would be easier to comment on the model if we could see it better. Could you post some clean renders without the composition elements on it? Also it's hard to make out what the thin structures that point out of the station are, I think maybe a higher or lower view point would help. As far as the composition itself, the only thing that sticks out to me are the three ships in the back ground are all in a line, you may want to re-arange them to look more random. Good work, keep it up.

[linen_umbrella]

Can do a better critique with better lighting and more angles.

[JFVerissimo]

Hello

The model is too big but i render right vision... and im going to make a shader...
http://www.geocities.com/arqmidia/2005/right-low.jpg

[JFVerissimo]

hi

Here you going see the a enlarge perspective...

http://www.geocities.com/arqmidia/2005/7-fase-2.jpg

[ysvry]

great looking space station, i like the colored version better

[JFVerissimo]

the fisrt sketch of the station...

http://www.geocities.com/arqmidia/2005/esbacpo4.jpg

[JFVerissimo]

detail

http://www.geocities.com/arqmidia/2005/6-fase-1.jpg

[JFVerissimo]

http://www.geocities.com/arqmidia/2005/estacao-XENO-2005-low.jpg

enlarged sketch...

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