Bear Soccer (My First 3D Short)

[mehdianim]

Hey, That's a lot of animation but you probably didn't spend much time on the details.
Try doing a simple bouncing ball excercise once you get the idea down, apply it to your entire film and you'll see a lot of progress right there.
The problem is there is absolutely no weight in your film, not in the ball nor in the bear and since it's all about bouncing a foot ball around the bouncing ball excercise is exactly what you should start with.

[mikecarry]

I don't understand the story. Why is the bear sad at the end?

[kelvincai]

thanks for ur comments

i understand no enuf stretch for the bear and ball (some for the ball but not enuf for the bear), the ball also lag some rotation too.... i think shld be more to be improved :)

the bear is a doll in a toy shop (kinda not enuf to tell it is a toy shop/storage at the end)
so the bear actually dream abt kicking soccer

my submited one has some text to tell the "thinking" of the bear
so easier to convey the story

glad that you can tell the bear is sad :)

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