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[mehdianim]

Wow very cool piece, it was nice to watch, it remidns me of the butterfly short. Any way you have the right timing and everything I think you just need to work on the acting most I'd say.
The easiest example to point out is when he's holding the ball finally and is thinking about what to do with it. The point gets accross this way but there are other ways to make your character carry that idea more specifically, like is he perplexed? is he starting to get indeared with the ball? is he losing his temper ? watch lots of TexAvery cartoons, the early WB with Bugs and daffy etc... Otherwise it was a really fun piece to watch and well animated.
And what you did with the credits at the end was a nice touch as well.

[ma13pramod]

Thanks dude for the input....yes i shld have seen the early WB works as u said..thanks for gviving me the names....ur inputs will help me for sure in my future animations.

thanks for ur time
bye
pramod

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