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BC1967 09-17-2002, 05:05 PM Thought I'd put this up to see if anyone would have any comments?
http://www.epilogue.net/cgi/database/art/view.pl?id=19214
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MadHatter
09-17-2002, 05:25 PM
Great Illustration...
only crit i have is that the woman's left hand looks strange. the fingers are perfectly straight after the 2nd knuckle. don't think it's possible...i can't do it anyway. maybe im a freak.
just a quick question...is that another woman, or is it a guy with long hair. hard to tell with fantasy drawings...alot of the guys seem to have long hair.
awesome work. was it done entirely digitally? if so, what prog?
BC1967
09-17-2002, 05:36 PM
Thanks.
Her hand is a bit odd, too sketchy.
The painting is acrylic. I took it into PS to adjust the color , and to punch up the lights.
Oh, and it's a guy.
jeroentje
09-17-2002, 06:41 PM
Looks very good, is this for a book cover?
Only thing that bugs me a bit is that the guys shoes draw a lot of attention, and the girl's face plus whatever she's holding doesn't enough.
Post more! But please read this (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=20814) first.
jeroentje
BC1967
09-17-2002, 08:01 PM
Good points., I'll fix those things. I was worried that the little green lthings she's handing him were too bright. Maybe if I just knock back the shoes?
The painting is a portfolio piece. Would that it were a cover commission.
jeroentje
09-17-2002, 08:06 PM
I was thinking: make the green thing bright(er) and white, and turn the lights at the bottom to blue and less bright (shoes become darker, logically speaking).
Some other thing I noticed: this is very crowdy. But there is not much going on in that big sky, so maybe kick in some dramatic clouds.
BC1967
09-17-2002, 08:12 PM
I like the blue and the clouds idea. A project for tonight.
btw the toy packaging pieces are great. Very funny.
jeroentje
09-17-2002, 09:23 PM
hehe, thanks, I have 20 more... I was planning a book with them. Only not done anything with it for 3 months...
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