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jramauri
02-22-2005, 11:22 AM
Hi, people. I'm a old anime/manga fan, and I'm trying to develop my own style, with a more realistic approach. Now, that I can post attachments, I decide to upload this work, and ask you for some help. I know there's a lot of things I must improve in this image. But for those I'm not aware yet, I'll be grateful for your cooperation. By the way, don't pay attention for the background, it wasn't my aim do it great. Thanks!

Ognus
02-22-2005, 12:01 PM
I think the pose is nice.
The expression on her face is very sweet and endearing.

As for crits: try not to use so much black. The brush you are using is kind of muddy. Try and make something a little crisper. The left leg is longer than the right it seems by quite a bit.


Keep it up!

jramauri
02-23-2005, 12:19 PM
Thanks for the comments. The brush I use is really a little dirty... I'll experiment others to see the results. Briefly, I'm going to post new works, and then we would see if there was some progress.

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