View Full Version : Original: Shiden and the Word
02-22-2005, 01:27 AM
Fist off, it's a *HE*! This is a starting drawing of a new coloring I'm planning to work on. Please leave crits if you think something needs to be fixed~
The main focus about this image is to not judge others, and how everyone is redeemable. I've got a few more things in it, but I won't reveal them until I complete the painting.
Scroll down to see the progress.
02-22-2005, 02:14 AM
Looking awesome so far. Your sketch has great potential. No crits yet. Oh, and I love the idea behind it.
02-22-2005, 02:18 AM
hie,everythings seems to be fine,just i'dprefer it without the cheek lines..anticipate for the next update;)
02-23-2005, 03:38 AM
02-23-2005, 11:50 PM
Thanks for your input you two.... just wish more people would give their opinion... dunno if it sucks completely or if it's ok so far. I'll start painting it when I get a commission done here soon.
02-24-2005, 12:11 AM
A little inspired by Final Fantasy 7's Cloud? I can see some resemblance.
And the hair sticking up reminds me of a certain scene from 'There's something about Mary' :D
It looks pretty cool, but IMO there's something weird with the arm holding the book, it looks a little out of proportion. Maybe you should rotate the lower-arm slightly to the left and move it a little up cause I think his upper-arm could be to long.
Other than that, like I said, pretty cool
02-24-2005, 02:53 AM
The hair kinda reminds of "There's Something About Mary"
02-24-2005, 03:57 PM
something about mary... lol.
well the right fore arm is too long it looks like. other than that, no crits.
02-25-2005, 11:19 AM
I shortened up his forearm a bit.
Don't mind the biege BG; just something I do for myself to look at colors.
02-25-2005, 05:30 PM
its better, but i think the non-forearm part of the arm (bicep part) is a tad long also
again, its an easy fix
02-25-2005, 09:45 PM
Thanks for the input hjalmar :)
Instead of posting another picture, I just edited the above image.
02-26-2005, 12:37 AM
thats lookin a lot better:D time for details i think
I like the character design
looks evil, so evil he willcast deamons on de and smite all that oppose
lol, yeah im a freak
02-26-2006, 07:00 AM
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