primitive theatre

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[Razorshark]

Link seems to work for me...

Looks nice 'nd soft and I like the fast motions... those movements call for a -whoosh- kind of sound I guess.

[coffeefery]

Pretty funny :) However, I think the animation's a little too fast. It may be the style that you're looking for, but slowing it a tad bit would make it better. Plus, we get to see how the character moves too.

[jchristo]

thanks for the comments. I know what you mean about the speed. The truth is, I would have slowed it down if it weren't for that pesky 10 second time limit. I had to cut so much just to get it to slow to the speed it's at now. Thanks again for the comments.

[HenningK]

Nice, I like the motion myself. Covers up some rigging problems besides. One beat I didn't get was the quick almost-throw before the real throw... practicing? Winding up?
And i definitely like the weird set he's in. What's the story?
-hen

[jchristo]

Thanks for the feedback. That almost-throw thing was just for me to get him turned towards the board. I tried to incorporate it into the anticipation, but it does come off a little weird. There wasn't much of a backstory, other than this guy throwing darts in a bar. The backdrop is supposed to be some kind of alien bar.

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