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yena
02-19-2005, 04:14 PM
just my first painting with my new wacom..... i hope i can finish it soon :)
comments & critiques highly appreciated ^^

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http://yuy.bbmy.ath.cx/CG/t_hope3.jpg (http://yuy.bbmy.ath.cx/CG/hope3.jpg)

Rudeone
02-20-2005, 10:17 PM
Hi there,

Some pointers: - because it's not finished I asume you still gonna paint her right hand and left arm.
- If you're going for realistic anotomy, it's of, her limbs and neck seem to be to thin and long, at least upper arm and upper legs. If you're going for non-realistic anotomy, nevermind what I just said.
- IMO it looks like her throat is pierced by the harp, you should look at that. If her head should be in front of the harp, her hair should be in front of her arm/hand otherwise it would be quite difficult to play the sneares. If you want to show her hand playing the sneares, the leftside of the harp should be in front of her neck so the head will be on the backside of the harp (phew...hope you understand this).
- You should look at your shadows and highlights, IMO it could be detailed some more.
- There should be a background, but I asume you will get to that.

Good luck and keep it up

yena
02-22-2005, 03:24 PM
hi!
thx 4 comment!!!i'll try to change the points you mentioned, but there're things that i can't change anymore, or better, i don't want to change anymore.....
this pic drives me nuts!!!
;)

anyway, thx a lot! your comments and critiques were really helpful!
*hug*

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