february 2005 entry @ 10secondClub contest

[Abhimation]

Hey....

1) Get some holds in the movements. Right now i cant see any.

2) Give the body some movement.... the legs are stuck from start till end.

3) Hands and body and head, all are moving at the same time. This makes loose the focus on the actions. Make it clear with the actions.

4) Check the Arcs.

5) Timing seems ok... pretty nice.

6) Youve got few nice poses in the end. Try breakin the symettry in the start of it n ull get more of them i guess...

7) Just few tweaks dude n itll luk gr8.....

Goodluck....

[josephlyw]

Hi mayj_kickass,

I think his hands' movement do not seem to work. If you try to act the audio out, you'll know what i mean ~ you won't point your hands at every direction. Try to reduce the movement and offset the keys.

Good luck!

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