PA Challenge - Character - Carlos Hernande

[CerberusC]

Good start but u must to work in the arms and in the boots hehe
I want to see he with his armouer and his weapon's :D

[pabbloz]

hey Carlos!!!! <--- He's spanish!! :D :D

Good character! He seems like Heman (Universe Masters!, or something like that)

Although it's a good structure, he's very wip yet. I will wait to critic in futures updates!. Why don't you tell about his personality or aspect? What kind of weapons he is going to wear?

Good legs!
I don't like too much the clavicules :(

[Carlos Hernánde]

hey , thanks for your critics ,here you are something more advanced,
i'm wating critiques yor sugesstions :Dhttp://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldarm.jpg

[CerberusC]

hey i love that boots and the armor...still waiting for the pre-final version :]

[Carlos Hernánde]

here you have, a new update for my character...an mad max post-apocalyptic soldier,an animation is in mind. :)
This is the base of my character...all the gadgets and futuristic things are coming http://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldarm2.jpg

[Carlos Hernánde]

it´s my first human model heheheheh :D
(venga españoles subamos ese level) :)http://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldarm3.jpg

[Pancreas]

Hi paisano, I think your character is getting on quite well, let´s go with the weird points:
The hands dont have knuckles, they look too flat, maybe you should bend the fingers a bit (I know this is the typical DaVinci´s anatomical pose, but it will be easier whenever you want to do the fist)
The mask it´s too big, it seems out of proportion, you could use the same concept (the skull with horns) using the half skull, without the jawbone (as the Willow´s bad guy helmet).
The body looks great, I really like the boots and the belt

[Carlos Hernánde]

thanks for your suggestion "pancreas"
A little update, the hands are patched but still remains a lot of work
the helmet it's full helmet cause is the center of the technology in my character...be patient hehehe
(mi ingles deja q desear....jejeje aqui tienes una imagen pa q me digas q te parece :D )http://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldier.jpg

[Carlos Hernánde]

another update :Dhttp://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldier4.jpg http://www.galeon.com/tworld/solfa.jpg

[pabbloz]

muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch BETTER!
I sure you!!

Great job! excelent update!
Very very detailled!
I'm looking forward to see the weapon!! maybe an axe or something similar!!
I love the mask and his horns!
Bravo Carlos!

[Carlos Hernánde]

thanks pabbloz, :D ,i´m working now in a weapon
(lo mismo posteo esta noche ) :)

[Carlos Hernánde]

another update with weapons :D http://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldier7.jpg

[Carlos Hernánde]

i want to post a new pic with colors and textures, but is possible i'll be late :P ,and the robe needs some cloth simulation :Dhttp://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldpose.jpg

[TwoFlower]

you work reall fast.. :)

my crits comes too late but, IMO, hands are too thin...

hope you could finish the texturing before friday...

[Carlos Hernánde]

here you have, it will be my last post i think, the bad thing is that i doesn't have enough time to do textures and the environment, the good thing...i'll animate it reaaaaaaally good, thx to all for the critiques :D



http://www.galeon.com/tworld/soldka.jpg

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