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hunz
02-15-2005, 02:57 PM
i dont have a name for it :sad:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/ThiagoHunz/asdcopy.jpg

need comments, critics and tips :thumbsup:

Mantat
02-15-2005, 03:42 PM
One major flaw: with such a redish lighting, the tree and leafs shouldnt be green, they should have a mixt of green / orange. Try it and it will look way more natural!

hunz
02-15-2005, 08:07 PM
update, maybe the final one...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/ThiagoHunz/b244c934.jpg
its the color good now?

Mantat
02-15-2005, 08:23 PM
its better but I would remove the lens flare effect and maybe make the part of the tree that arent directly hit by the light much darker.

There seems to also be a perspective problem with the trunk and the folliage but it might just be me :-S

btw, I really like the new clouds!!!

hunz
02-15-2005, 10:07 PM
Mantat, im not working on this draw in home, but, ill search for some references to get the trunk to look better.
and ill remove the lens flare effect, and look for some references for the sky :)
tomorrow morning when i go to work ill do the adjusts
cya,
God bless you all :thumbsup:

Dreamshark
02-16-2005, 12:31 AM
The perspective problem has occurred because of the position of the sun. The reflections of light on the water are in a triangle shape. Therefore the Sun should be near the centre of the pic, opposite the panicle of the reflection.

Nice work though. Quite pleasant.

lulaassassina
02-16-2005, 12:37 AM
psycadelic, friend! :D

um abraço, não desistas nunca de melhorar.

hunz
02-16-2005, 02:53 PM
update ->
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/ThiagoHunz/b29d548d.jpg
what do you think about it now?

cya..
God bless you all

hunz
02-17-2005, 02:42 PM
another update
new clouds and tried to fix the tree ->
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/ThiagoHunz/9fb3b8b7.jpg

need more Comments and Critics...
cya
God bless you all

Mantat
02-17-2005, 03:04 PM
I think the leaves are a bit too redish but its a personal taste.

I think you can call it done!

hunz
02-17-2005, 03:23 PM
yes, it was a try of adding 'curves' to the image (exept the sky), but now i seen that the water is too much "strong", so, ill remove the curves, and give a better detail to the tree and maybe, if no1 give me a better idea, call it done :p

im rly exited with this image, thats my first image finished :bounce:

cya friends,
God bless you all
and thanks for the tips/comments/critics! :thumbsup:

hunz
02-17-2005, 09:29 PM
so here is the update (fixed some clouds, make the tree less redish, some more detailing on foliage)

maybe the final image.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/ThiagoHunz/618ac247.jpg

cya friends :)
God bless you all
and Jesus is the lord! :thumbsup:

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