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BluePulse
02-14-2005, 01:23 PM
I started her a while back and I'm @ it again. Any helpfull c&c towards composition and color, layout whatever would be highly appreciated. :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v296/bluepulse/Mary/Mary_wip_cg.jpg

ameermagdy
02-14-2005, 02:01 PM
the color theme is good, her skin shadows and lights need to be obvious more, the compostion is great! cant comment too much, it's a WIP, good work till now, keep it up.

ditchman
02-14-2005, 05:55 PM
looks good so far, face is nice. maybe her neck's a bit thick? and the blue from the window is too close to the colour of her dress. if you wanted it to echo the colour, i think you should move them apart so they dont touch.

BluePulse
02-16-2005, 11:08 PM
Ok, here is another update. I took some of your commnets to heart and I hope I can get more feedback to help me along my way.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v296/bluepulse/Mary_wip_ta.jpg

ditchman
02-17-2005, 01:18 PM
the window works much better for me now
my problem now is the perspective on the window sill, it is not matching the shelf (the bottom of the vase with flowers is totally flat, but we can see depth on the area with candles

great work

bernoccoli
02-17-2005, 03:11 PM
i like it too, so far. try tu push up contrasts.. i'd make it a little less flat and a little more dramatic. expecially under the head and beyond her.

rebuilder
02-17-2005, 03:16 PM
I think the window is problematic now, it's the strongest focal point of the image. It's just so clearly different colour-wise from the rest, and the bright horizon also does it.

hunz
02-17-2005, 03:32 PM
maybe adding a texture to the upper side of the wall?
good work :applause:
cya,
God bless you all

hunz
02-17-2005, 03:34 PM
ah! and the windows are taking much attetion on it, and i think she needs to be the "center" of the scene.. :)
cya
God bless you all :D

BluePulse
02-22-2005, 03:56 PM
A little more for this update.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v296/bluepulse/Mary/Mary_wip2_cg.jpg

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