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oxxo
02-12-2005, 05:17 PM
Hi all!
i begin a new illustration of my Idle Musings project

This is my first step

http://yannick.signahode.free.fr/forum/un_regard_sur_la_note_noir.jpg

I start color, i've only finish the sky

http://yannick.signahode.free.fr/forum/un_regard_sur_la_note_color.jpg

Tell me what you think about it

See yu!!

CodeNothing
02-12-2005, 06:39 PM
I think if your going to have the color shapes in the city be blurry you need to blurr the line work as well. It looks awkward.

other than that nice job! :)

rebuilder
02-12-2005, 07:23 PM
The colours and values of your background and foreground are very similar right now, which flattens the image a bit. The sense of a big city is good in the sketch.

joeydee
02-12-2005, 08:26 PM
These are great colors and I think the final could get a good lighting and interesting mood with this sky. I'm curious how it will look with details added to the city.
I'm just beginning with this kind of art (sketches are not my Problem, but I'm working on lighting), so it would be great to share further WIPs with us :)

oxxo
02-12-2005, 11:25 PM
Thank for the advice! i'll try to do my best
here, the finish sky in a better quality.


http://yannick.signahode.free.fr/forum/un_regard_sur_la_note_color02.jpg

hunz
02-12-2005, 11:49 PM
i want to see updates! very good work :thumbsup:

God bless u all

DKR1138
02-13-2005, 08:52 AM
:drool: at the sky... that is orsm...

StylusMonkey
02-13-2005, 12:22 PM
I think if your going to have the color shapes in the city be blurry you need to blurr the line work as well. It looks awkward.

other than that nice job! :)

He's obviously just working the values in roughly, look at the sky, this fellow knows what he is doing

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