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rynke
02-08-2005, 04:34 PM
Hey,

I've been working on a little pirate project these past days, but need some help in getting some life into my scene. As it's now pretty dull.

Here's the original max render:

http://www.boersting.com/jacob/wips/pirat_take1_max_render.jpg

A little tweak in photoshop:
http://www.boersting.com/jacob/wips/pirat_take1_post_render.jpg

and last but not least, a wire:
http://www.boersting.com/jacob/wips/pirat_take1_wire_render.jpg

All crits are more than welcome.

thx,
koles
02-09-2005, 04:40 PM
Good work, but need something to bring it to life, left side of scene looking little empty same as sky, meybe put there the moon, more stars. Move a little ship on the left and hmmmm....the wood definitively need some texture.
Thats all.... i think...

Keep it up :thumbsup:
Shiver
02-09-2005, 05:26 PM
you could make the dock have some more character, they dont look textured or anything, so..texture them maybe it will bring the scene to life some more..
satch919
02-09-2005, 06:52 PM
How about a nice full moon in the sky? I think it'd balance out the upper portion of the scene.
rynke
02-09-2005, 07:24 PM
thx for respons guys :)

Here is a little update:
-Some wood textures
-More light at the ship
-Full Moon
-More stars
http://www.boersting.com/jacob/wips/pirat_take2_max_render.jpg
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