jack 's bar scene

[Kickflipkid687]

very nice job! I cant really see anything wrong with it.. great use of textures and lighting. It seems almost to dark above the bar, but its not that big of a deal. :thumbsup:

[semitones]

thanks dude.why my old post has been deleted?::( here is my new upgrade (sorry i speak bad english)^^http://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/final.jpg

[semitones]

no comments or more critics?
http://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/final1024%20copie.jpg

[semitones]

http://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/grand%20wisheycgtalk.jpgplease comments or critics

[YoYoYohan]

it looks very good so far, but i think the typing machine needs a better texture. maybe some rust, vingerprints, skretches or something like that. the chairs upsidedown on the tables on the background could also use some better textures ( right now it looks like they are untextured ( maybe they are :P )).

i like the rest. especially the floor texture with the dirt spots on it.

[semitones]

here is an update but i can make choice between black and white and color. i like the render black and light.

http://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/jack_bar_n&b.jpg

[semitones]

http://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/jack_bar_color.jpgcolor verson

[semitones]

machine 3dhttp://www.axs-clan.com/aboutme/3d/machine3d2.jpg

[biode]

What is the time period? To me the modern looking typewriter looks

out of place in this old looking bar. Ofcourse, that may be you're intent.
The liquid in the whiskey bottle appears to be opaque with streaks
running vertically.

I do like the feel of the scene and the soft render.

cheers

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