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02-06-2005, 03:54 PM
Here are a couple of colored sketches, drawn in pencil and colored in photoshop with a 'cel-shade' style in mind, it's not meant to look realistic, it's comic book drawing. Critics are welcome.
Thanks in advance !
02-06-2005, 04:24 PM
Nice character creation. I reaaly like the stile, the art line and the colors are well chosen and aplied. Only thing i would rework in the first image is the breast area. They are very marked, an i think it would be nice if those lines were a little bit smoother, not so 'hardlines', dont know if my poor english let me explain my self. For example, the line of the arm that cross the left breast line looks a bit strange, maybe the breast line donsent need to be touching the arm line, of viceversa, looks strange this zone to me.
Hope i have help or just give a clue, to improve this really good comic stile image. IŽll keep my eye on your work!!!
02-08-2005, 03:28 PM
Thanks ! It's true about the arm-breast connection, should have noticed before.
02-08-2006, 04:00 PM
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