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yulias
02-06-2005, 05:32 AM
i dont think im much in the way of an artist, but i would like to try to become one. for that, id like your help on 2 pictures which, in all likely hood, are the best i can come up with

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v212/madhatter-penguin/portrait.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v212/madhatter-penguin/ddgj.jpg

please mention any mistakes or comments or anything you believe needs to be said. thank you in advance

cuppacam
02-06-2005, 11:57 AM
I like the top one. Although you could make it more refined by smoothing it out and making the window frame cleaner I don't think it needs any more. Only crit being the contrast between light and dark could be more vivid. Other than that it's great.


The second one is cool. Only wish we could see a close up of the cards and the guy to get a better idea of your painting style. From what I can see tho it's looking cool. You adding a background?

yulias
02-06-2005, 02:23 PM
well there is a larger version here -->> http://www.deviantart.com/view/14761345/

which is 20 percet of the original size, the original is about 20 inches tall, 15 inchs wide. dont really remember. i dont know where i could post a file that big, so i made it much smaller. i could, however, post full size versions of the cards...

i'll work on the window sil

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