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foreverendering
02-05-2005, 07:16 PM
Hey everyone, I just now got a Wacom Tablet. This was the first drawing I did one day after work last week.

http://plaza.ufl.edu/jeremyg/images/24.jpg

Crits, comments, suggestions, would all be nice. This was made in Photoshop. Would like to hear what I could do to make my drawings better...

Thanks

spism
02-05-2005, 08:28 PM
the torso is really cool, although it seems like the thighs are too long and are too thick toward the knees.

foreverendering
02-06-2005, 05:49 PM
Hey thanks man I really appreciate your comment. I think you are right. I'll see what I can do to correct it.

:)

Dire-Wolf
02-06-2005, 09:39 PM
the right knee overlaps the left knee (from our perspective) but it doesent later on (calf and ankle) so some of the form and illusion is lost.

the right knee intersects between the left knee and left greave, offsetting the right greave so it doesent feel like it belongs.

I could be wrong on these things though.

The wings could do some major battle damge (they are kick butt)

Shin Tsuki
02-07-2005, 11:08 PM
I love the expression on her face

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