Bmw 8ser, Rimon Soliman (3D)

[ringedingdong]

Oh come on!
They build ugly cars, but even they wouldn't build something like this! =)

[Freefall]

Oh come on!
They build ugly cars, but even they wouldn't build something like this! =)

They're the only ones who dare to build innovative car (Renault too btw). There profits raised by about 8% while the profits from almost all other car manufacture dropped.

To stick on topic. It does look like a BMW but I'm getting the idea that it is somekind a boat :bounce: The headlights look abit too extreme IMO and I guess you need a center front grill. Can we see some more views

[szyszek80]

Hmm..slap some huge wheels on it and you'd get an ideal car for Americans.. it looks HUGE, doesn't really have clearly cut shapes.. at least that's what I think Americans want in a car.. just look at a.. Dodge Intrepid, Chrysler 300M. When I look at your concept that's what I'm reminded of. But that's just a matter of taste.

Crits? I'll have to say proportions. When I look at the mirror/lights/wheels.. they don't seem to match the car.

[Koen86]

Hmmz... About the model. I find the edges a bit strange, especialy the headlight area, and the frontwindow area.
If you're building the bmw 8 serie, it doesn't look like it. or i do bad research

greetz koen

[cucaracha]

Nice idea, but the model/render looks a bit 'rushed'.
spend some more time on details and proportions!

and about innovative car design: have a look at Peugeot and Audi

[Rimon]

Hmmz... About the model. I find the edges a bit strange, especialy the headlight area, and the frontwindow area.
If you're building the bmw 8 serie, it doesn't look like it. or i do bad research

greetz koen

thanx alot for ur reply.....thats what most ppl told me......what do u think i should do to make the edges of the car parts appear much clear....
actualy i didnt know that there is an 8 ser i just made this as a development of the 5 ser...
well thanx again fo u opinion....i gotta start correcting my mistacks.....

[Rimon]

about the car proportions, well that was cause of a mistake, that i didnt refer to a BMW drawings( side, fron, top view) i didnt find any....so i just used regular pictuers for the 5 ser. by the way, that was my first post, and my first time to model a car till the end....well actualy i didnt reach the end yet......so as a conclution, my mistaks is the proportions, parts edges, rendering and extra details in the front bumper.....thanx alot guys for ur comments, and plz try to tell me more and more about the mistakes of this work...i'll get more views after i get done with corrercting thous mistaks.....

[Rimon]

oh bye the way, how can i upload an incompete work as a kind of a reply......cause the rules say that i got to upload only complete work???????

[Rimon]

i get a 10 min. rendring time on such a pic.....using a p4 2GH processore...whats ur comments about this????

[xeetstreet]

2, 4, 6, and 8 series are all 2 door coupes.

[doohanarai]

Great job! Modeling very beautiful!

[Almoe]

hmm... intresting concept, but i dont like the front bumper and the headlights
besides that, i think BMW wont never build such a car, it looks just too big ;)

btw: 8 Series -> http://www.germancarfans.com/photos/3031016.001/1015.jpg
was build until 1999
:)

[Geronimo]

Nice Car !

[Koen86]

hey Rimon!

If you want to see the edges better, you could try to round the edges, i think they are to sharp. or give every part more space, like you did between the front bumper, and the front hood. could you post a wireframe, and some close-ups of the edges, maybe i can see more then.

Good luck with it.

Greetz koen

[Rimon]

hi Koen86
that what i realy was doing the last week, i took every part in the car and i added a curv to its edges, it realy took me lotes of time to do this, i select the open edges of every side of the body parts and i start adding segments in a curve shap. do u think this is the write way, or there is any easyer way, like a modefier or somthing
well thanks alot for ur attention, here is some wire frames and the result of the curved endes, try to give me ur opinion
thanx again:bounce:

[Wal3d]

you forgat to show the BMW Identity

its look like Alpha Romio

so try to work on it

[Koen86]

Don't know an Alpha Romio, but if you mean an Alpha Romeo! i guess you've never seen an Alpha because this model doesn't look like it at all!

Sorry Can't see the edges well, but with the close-up you shown is nothing wrong. but that's not the area where i thought the problem was in! area by the light, i thought looked funny..
Good luck with it!

Greetz Koen

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