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02-02-2005, 08:35 PM
hello everybody, I will be very happy i You give me any crit
02-02-2005, 11:55 PM
Because it's in a really early stage it's hard to crit, but I found some things: I think her head and neck aren't really in the middle of her torso, you should move it a little to the right, or move her left shoulder a little to the left.
Second point: I think her neck is slightly to large, move her head down a little.
Third point: her breasts don't look identical, her left one looks bigger and the other one isn't the same shape as the left one, more like an horisontal elipse shape, hope you understand what I'm trying to say.
02-03-2006, 12:00 AM
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