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Raji
01-28-2005, 06:00 PM
hey everyone

I'm already back with another animation! I'm on a roll!! weee!! Anyway... ahem... this is something i started late at night and decided to finish up real quick. That doesn't mean i tried to rush it, i just didn't want to spend more than 2 days on a 1.5 second animation. http://cgchar.toonstruck.com/forum/html/emoticons/smile.gif

http://tinycomet.com/animations/jump.mpg

Lemme know what you think!

Raji

freakmoomin
01-30-2005, 07:44 PM
hey,

looks not bad, but heres my thoughts......... not gonna go into too much detail but just a couple of things that may (or may not) make it better.

i think when he jumps you need to offset his arms and legs a lot more, right now they are going up and down at pretty much the same time. id make him take off a lot more from one foot, also bring his legs a lot higher up on the jump (and maybe even make the whole jump a wee bit higher) and make it a lot more obvious that hes landing on one foot. the "cusion" jump/land looks pretty good but i think the walk afterwards almost spoils it...id get rid of the walk bit and just make him come to a nice cusioned stop.

cheers

kev

p.s if you think im talking crap just ignore me ;-)

BobDigital
01-30-2005, 09:53 PM
i agree. the actual jump is nice but the landing looks odd to me.

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