Twisted Extreme Sports - character/Environment - DoDo

[drunkenmaster20]

now that's gonna leave us guessing for sure. I'm going with it being some sort of shoulder pad...

[dodo3d]

That's right
I am still modeling the body of my player
He is from the dark ages
wait for my update

[dodo3d]

Ok
Time for an update

[Mangled Poly]

nice suit i really like how you did the pads... however i recemend if your going for more realistic approach you make it more sharp and jagged looking but thats good for more cartoony "puff" look

going nice thats just my .02 (trys to think of something creative) CooKIes!

[Benno]

mmmmmmm, armour

[dodo3d]

:shrug:
I didn't mean to make it cartonish
does any body else see the armour suit looks cartonish???

[drunkenmaster20]

only a little, dodo, and it's probably due to the lack of texture/default texture, so I wouldn't worry about it just yet. :)

[dodo3d]

Here is the shoes for my player
still need to add some details to it
any comments so far?

[otacon]

Looks good!:thumbsup: you already have me wondering...

[dodo3d]

Oh ppl I think I am too lazy and very slow .
by the way thanks otacon for the words, I am working now in the arena for the players...
here is another update

[rok]

doesn´t look cartoonish at all.

[dodo3d]

yeah as drunkenmaster20 said : it's the lake of texture and I think I am bad with texture thing but I'll try it
back to modeling here is a test for the arena for the game

[dodo3d]

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[dodo3d]

OK here is the horse for my warior (still under constructions)
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Need comments plz?
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[otacon]

Good job!:thumbsup: Everything is looking good. keep going.:D

[dodo3d]

thx otacon
and I really like ur work too

[dodo3d]

ok alittel update with more views
any comments so far?

[otacon]

Looking good. Maybe you could give the hoarse a tail.:D

[mebamonster]

Looks like an interesting sport forming here. I have a suggestion though. The strap on your horse's saddle seems wrong to me. Usually, the strap goes around the horse's chest rather than it's rear (or the rear strap works in addition to the front strap). I have attached a quick image to show you what I mean. of course, this comment could be completely off because your sport may require what you have created. Anyway, just my 2 cents

[dodo3d]

@mebamonster:
it's ok ,I think that the strap around the rare of the horse make it stabel on the horse back and with the srap in front it make it more and more stabel...thx for this comment I'll do it ...
but I need some comments about the body of the horse itself cause I think it need more modifing do u think that? or do I continue with my warior?

[erilaz]

I like the original design, kind of reminds me of a chess-horse. I think i've been staring at horses for too long (my current work project has me working on cg horses quite a lot).:D

[gwelty]

nice modelling all around....you got a flow to your stuff

now i,m really curious as to what your sport is going to be

[dodo3d]

ok ppl here is some test for the arena with the players
(the arena is still under constructions ) any idea about the arena or any necessary additional to it?
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[dodo3d]

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[Virtuoso]

Well overall your concept is looking nice............

As for your arena, that does give me a question or two.......... The first is the steps or seating area look to be about 5 feet in height or so going by the size of your character and horse, where they should be only 6-9 inchs. The scaling has to be re- done at least from what I am seeing. At the heights you have with the seating the audience would need step ladders to climb up and down from the steps.

Your sport looks interesting and the overall concept,the armor too looks very nice, but...........The arena just seems off in a "scaling" aspect. If I am missing something just excuse me for this, and let me know what I am missing. I am an architect as well as CG fanatic so these type things are up my alley........................:)

[dodo3d]

@Virtuoso:
U r right about the scale ,I think u have a good eye
thx for showing me this mistake I'll do some changes to the scale soon and I was thinking about the step ladder problem cause I don't know how to make the crowd go up and down to the seats ...
but I'll see what I can do
thx again
wait for my update;)

[Satyricon]

Very nice feeling here Dodo! Keep up the good work!:thumbsup:

[mebamonster]

I'm glad you liked my suggestion dodo3d. I didn't want to suggest too much on your horse's modeling because i didn't want to intrude on your style. However, if you want some suggestions on the horse, I have some (of course, feel free to pick and choose what you want to use). Your front legs go too far up into the body...there is no real chest area and they are too far apart. So, If you like, you could pull the horse's front legs down and in a bit and fill in the chest and at the same time, you should then be able to straighten out the horse's rear legs a bit more. The horse's neck seems a bit too flat and wide in the front (its neck should taper in a bit at its front). I have attached another quick photoshoped image to show you what I'm talking about. Hope this helps! your creation is coming along nicely:)

[dodo3d]

@Virtuoso: thx again for ur help ubout the crowd seats I'll do it in the next update of the arena but now I am still working with the skin for the horse and still modeling the warior.

@Satyricon: thx for the nice words

@mebamonster: yeah I really need ur help about that it's the firt time for me for modeling animals ....I had done some changes to the horse as u told (the front & back legs ,the nick ) and I still think it's need work right???

[dodo3d]

and here is another update ....

[Hysteria]

yum

[dodo3d]

mmm...:rolleyes:

I had chick this site it's good ...but I don't think that I'll use it in my entry .
or may be I didn't understand what u mean about attaching this site?
but it's ok thanks any way

[dodo3d]

I think I am working too slow ,I might not finsh it on time
but here is another update hope u like it.

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