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NOOB!
01-26-2005, 03:14 PM
hey i've always like wierd anatomy,i'm highly inspired by peter chung *aeon flux*

anyway i wud like sum crits n comment *especially colouring *

ninja

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/noobeene/niinja.jpg

giovanna

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/noobeene/d83c7084.jpg

giovanna colours *finished ?*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/noobeene/giovannacolours.jpg

Falcorr
01-26-2005, 03:27 PM
I like your coloring, but the anatomy of the woman definetly looks weird.

Id try to fix her hands. Unless that is the style youre after?
Specially wrist and the palm of the hand on the colored version.

NOOB!
01-26-2005, 03:34 PM
yeh i am goin for the wierd anatomy.

however...i agree with the crit u gave me,thats sumthin i can fix.

for sum reason the figure in the pencilled version looks better.wierd.

i love drawing thin waists,dunno why.lol

Squibbit
01-26-2005, 03:46 PM
pretty fun lookin lady :thumbsup:

NOOB!
01-26-2005, 06:00 PM
lol thanks squib

NOOB!
01-30-2005, 11:50 AM
ninja coloured.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/noobeene/ninka2.jpg

hey guys i wanna make these submissions for expose' so crits would be appreciated,i also don't know anything about this *watermark* stuff.

NOOB!
01-30-2005, 03:17 PM
n-n-n nobody??



*runs away crying*

Squibbit
01-30-2005, 03:50 PM
mwahaha! run u little thing!

i will show mercy on you and comment most humbly

it almost looks like the big head is on the ninjas lap...they seem
physically one..like the big head grew from the ninja's shoulder...

this my friend is insanity and we cannot allow this

you must now make things better, for fixed it is a fine image!

alastairwinter
01-30-2005, 04:31 PM
Hey noob,

Quick CC on Ninja - Nice concept on the ninga from MSG (?).

For crit, I think Squib is right. The head is supposed to be sort of in the background right, kind of like those images you see in a poster no? If so, an easy fix might be to kind of 'fade out' the head and wires so that it's not as bright/dark as the ninja himself. And then add more detail to the ninja and perhaps a little less on the head so that the ninja sticks out foremost.

A quick thing on the anatomy is that something with that left leg bothers me, I think it's telling me that the left hip/thigh connection is off. It's too low I think, sort of looks like it's dislocated in the image. Shifting it up and to the right maybe?

As for coloring and all that, I think it depends on what style you're going for. IMO I'd say lighten up the skin a little bit, since the shoulder's seem so light, but that's all good. And the penciling type effect, you use it well so I'm not sure what 'way' you wanted to try and color this.

Also, why no background? :)

I'll check back some, great start though!

NOOB!
01-30-2005, 04:37 PM
thanks u guys.

i want to work on those mistakes and make these submissions for expose 3

i can't think of what to do for the backgrounds of both images,they are both very *technical* characters.

anyone have ideas?

and this watermark thing?? they sed u can't have watermarks,how do i know whether i have a watermark or not? lol

hyelp me!!! with backgrounds mostly.

peachstapler
01-30-2005, 06:25 PM
I like the chick's pencil-thick abdomen and huge booty.

Raļ's
01-30-2005, 07:00 PM
You should look after the anatomy of the neck (it is excesses length) and feet of your feminine character...

NOOB!
01-30-2005, 07:13 PM
You should look after the anatomy of the neck (it is excesses length) and feet of your feminine character...

ok...so u didn't read the first post did ya? i do agree about the feet though.

thanks peach

help me think of a background for these pieces!!!

Squibbit
01-30-2005, 08:46 PM
dude, u pit a woman standing on a pencil leg somewhere and u
can come up with the background yourself.. :P

well..ok.. suggestion or two...

all green background for ninja..huge amount of toxic waste all around...
barrels and barrels, some lying on their sides , pools of waste... waste rats
closing in on the cyborg remains the ninja has destroyed


for de lady... put a bored lookin artist in the background with a tired smile on his
lips... by his side he has a glass container of five more pencil women. (the women
are the size of normal pencils. he controls them through the neuro helmets on their
heads.. this one could have the helmet smoking, circuits throwing sparks, cause
she's rather annoyed by the situation..

:shrug:

SupremePain
01-30-2005, 08:52 PM
Cool pieces, and i see the Aeon Flux inspiration...

I see what's wrong with that wrist, on the pencil version it has a shade on the top which makes it look like it's bending, on the colored version it has a highlight which makes it look like a very thick and short wrist.

NOOB!
01-30-2005, 08:56 PM
ok well,that ninja background idea is cool,gunna try that.



as for ur other idea.........*cough* *tumbleweed*

etc.

suggestions for giovanna *thats the gurl* backgroundsguys???? i have backgrounds block.

edit: on second thought squib,that second idea cud work.hehe
but i'm still open for suggestions guys.

hjalmar
01-30-2005, 11:43 PM
maybe a cyber ninja city for the guy? he does look kinda high-tech


for the gal...

...

...

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i suck at background ideas =.= maybe a woodsey area? or on a giant piece of paper, drawing something? maybe a dude, and she just finished the head so thats why shes covering up so he cant peek?

ive got an overactive imagination sometimes...

Squibbit
01-31-2005, 05:22 AM
*cough* *tumbleweed*

lol


well hey, u started it... that hair could be ink or filled with ink.
and the leg would be pen. when she drew the hair would turn
whiter or grow shorter.

?

hey maybe she's a criminal and has to draw herself clothes
for punishment ? ...nnghh... *points* oh look, a platypus!

*runs away*

hjalmar
01-31-2005, 05:28 AM
maybe she is a platapus in disguise?

maybe she was drawing her hair?

OOH!! I KNOW!! she is a mechanical pencil...and shes pressing her chest for more lead!!

YES!!! IM AWSOME!!!

Squibbit
01-31-2005, 06:51 AM
you could put an endless surface for her to stand on. on this surface would be
billions of plug-in holes. in the background bould be two lonely-looking faces, a guy
looking down and a girl looking up , her head glowing just enough to be noticeable.
The woman in the pic would be a telepathic operator... sort of like phone operators of old.
she would glide in the air towar a plugin hole, the hole representing a connection to the
girl's mind. The woman's leg would then be turned into a pin which she would then
put in the hole. Then she would fly to find a hole , a soulmate for the girl , the guy
in the background , drawing behind a thin line connecting her knee to the plugin pin of
the other leg. when she would find the right plugin she would change her other leg to
a pin and connect the two souls.

Smirnoff
01-31-2005, 07:49 AM
i just love mgs! especially grey fox! :drool:

the pose is great ..... you may want to adjust the head maybe (as sayed above) blend it in.

for the bg you have propably played mgs on ps? :lightbulb well there is this scene where solid see's grey for the first time. he has killed and dismembered some soldiers. you could make a corridor with lots of soldiers lying on the floor bleeding to death!

the girl is very nice indeed...though you should do something to the hand

but overall great work, and your style is just .......awesome!! :thumbsup:

NOOB!
01-31-2005, 05:26 PM
yes those are very good ideas squib and hjalmar *cough cough*



that sounds cool smirnoff,i'll start sketching a background later this week.

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