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plaguelord
01-25-2005, 11:37 PM
Hi all, I´m making a head, usually I put this in Focused critiques forum, but is dead, so maybe here I can get some help to improve the model, proportions, and topology.
I´m trying to make a male head without much detail, to use as a base for more complex models.
I´m really happy with the model atm, but its really hard to think "ok. its done" . I guess it still have a lot of issues. (the ears are not attached yet)

(corrections with red lines on my picture are very welcome!)
Software 3dmax 6

thanks in advance


Perspective

http://www.ancestralrecall.com.ar/3d/head/head-wip20.jpg

front and side

http://www.ancestralrecall.com.ar/3d/head/head-side.jpg

http://www.ancestralrecall.com.ar/3d/head/head-front.jpg
MatrixAgent1984
01-26-2005, 12:08 AM
Not bad. His demeaner does look menacing, but the lines on his forehead make it look too flat. His eyes also need a lot more detail.
WhiteRabbitObj
01-26-2005, 12:14 AM
A decent start. His ears need to be bigger and moved up more towards the halfway point between the front and back of the head. Also, the jaw looks a little "deep". That is to say, from the jaw to the neck is a bit far, it should be probably half as deep on the sides, the front looks fine. Lastly for now, the bottom lip should be slightly bigger. Your top lip is larger than your bottom lip, and generally, that is not how many people's lips are.
plaguelord
01-26-2005, 11:31 PM
thanks guys, a question about the lips, can I reduce the upper lip instead make the lower lip bigger?

I agree about all the comments, I will work on the ear position and size, the jaw and the eyes.

thanks
plaguelord
01-27-2005, 12:30 AM
I make change on the ear, soften the bone jaw, increase the lower lip, and a little changes on the eye area, also I make the eyebrows position in more resting position.
I hope look better now, plz tell me what you think.
plaguelord
02-04-2005, 12:33 AM
minor changes on the eyes (the ear is still not attached)



http://www.ancestralrecall.com.ar/3d/head/head-wip23.jpg
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