Mythologic Warrior (nudity), Alberto Cano (3D)

[koncz]

Great modelling work on the character and clothes, i like the render too :thumbsup: .

Georges.:)

[makaka]

thanks my friend for your comments ;-)

[dahiya]

excellent modelling.

the background has way softer light than that on the model. you might get around it with some simulated DOF. her shield and the stones look like they have the same bump map. is that intentional?

[nachofrades]

where is the nudity?

Good work, but I think the shadows are too hard in that environment.

[makaka]

Hi men thanks for your comments, the bump is different in the stones... because is another material... but is possible that seems similars... I don`t know... maybe the light ambient is more softer ... I`ll change the level light.
dahiya thanks for your observations ;-)
nachofrdes... yes is semi nudity... good observation X-D
I want hard shadows for the sunlight... but is a possible mistake, I`ll think in your critics... thanks

[cycom]

Nice modelling and texturing,. keep the good work,makaka.

[dcmoutinho]

very nice, great modeling...

[MorganHill]

Really nice work.

Only comments: Grass placement looks too linear, would look better in more irregular clumps. Also shadows/highlights on skull pile would be good. But really good warrior, love the veins on the thigh.

[makaka]

1000 Thanks for your comments, I feel very hope.

Yes..I agree whith your comment... is a lot linear the grass... thanks for your observation :-)

[celedine]

Good work. I like the trees, are they Fotos or Paint Effects or are they modeled?

[dees]

amazing, great job on details and texturing.

I notice the detail on the background (the picture you put in as BG) and Sharpness are less than the main scene itself..... but NOT that less, infact it creates an illusion of difference lighting, and a wall paper in the sky.
SO I was thingking.....motion blurred images for the background ? and yes camera angle do a lot of difference for that .... keep rockin !:buttrock:

[ali_3dartist]

nice work
but the scin hasn t bump enough
try some more ad win the cg talk

[makaka]

Thanks for the comments, well... celedine The tree is a photo... is a planar transparency whit alfa channel.

dees... yes I think with the little fog is possible inprove the image... I make now... tomorrow put the new render

ali_3dartist... i agree with your comment... is possible make more contrast in the BG and is possible inprove the render... Thanks

[mnt]

nothing wrong with the "bump" things, the modelling is great but here's some notes:

her skin is too clean for a Warrior women..!
removing the grass would be better..or reducing them, make them shorter and more randomly
the background is bad and it is distorting the whole scene refering to the old periods

that's way i only give it http://www.cgtalk.com/images/rating/rating_4.gif and not 5
very good work.

[makaka]

Thanks nidal for the 4 stars... and thanks for your critic, I`ll think a new render with the same character but I´ll change the Buckgraund in this job I`ll change the all wrong.

Thanks ;-)

[new23dee]

great work. keep it up.

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