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Frank the Ninja
01-20-2005, 09:54 PM
Im trying to fit 3 interesting psychis characters in here, all of whom where blindfolds and have telekanetic abilities.

I was hoping for general C&C, and hardcore critiques, paintovers, and comments on the figure to the right. I am having a lot of trouble with him.

Also, I really need some pose ideas for the character who is going to be on the left, a female I think.

Anyways, here it is:
(please forgive the bad scan, my lines are still really light..)

http://www.ninja.oceansend.com/psychic1.jpg

Self crits: Right figure sucks! If you can't tell, his back is to the camera and his arms are folded. (Really need help!)

Center figure is leaning...I hope to fix this with photoshop before I color.

Please help me out, thanks!

-Frank

Octothreat
01-20-2005, 10:02 PM
Overall, it looks very good. I think if you change the outline of the right figure's back to be thinner (maybe shift the shoulder up and right) he will look more like he is turned. Also, the head looks a little oblong. Besides that, good work!

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