Vehicle: tractor new

[kevinmacdonald]

that is lovely ! i love the style , kinda cartoony , but still realistic. love it !

[alanMao]

:p

[FLOw]

more grass...and if you wanna make a scene out of it, mabe yu can make it run over a scarecrow...jus tilt the traktor and put it over a bent scarecrow model...maybe make some crows that drive it :bounce: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[facial]

Well, looks not bad so far,:thumbsup: i suggest:
1) Take more time to think about those grass effect, maybe make them dried up is better, because that mathine looks so old and broken.
2) Focus on layout of you image, now, that mathine looks not propriety i think, how about make it lay down on the groud?

just my own oppinion. Keep post up.
:airguitar :airguitar

[alanMao]

thanks! all the comments is useful for me.:applause:
i will improve the sence.:beer:

[Wiro]

I aggree with the others. The model is great and it's very nicely lit but it lacks a story. What is the tractor doing there? Why does it look so battered?

if it's a discarded tractor then let some foliage grow on and around it. Put a birds nest on the roof, cobwebs around the controls, etc.

If it's still doing it's job, put some tracks in the grass behind it or a sandwich on the wheel, as if the driver just had to go away for a leak.

I think you should tilt or move the camera up a wee bit though, there doesn't seem to be much room for the tractor to "breathe" along the top.

Wiro

[lmc]

excellent:bounce:

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