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01-18-2005, 10:13 AM
Hey All! :)
First post here, only beginning to post here because someone suggested it from work..I need all the critique/help I can get!
Ok so heres some quick pics, first off the concept im working off (saved from www.anime-model-pics.com (http://www.anime-model-pics.com/))
I need to fix up/tweak a fair bit (hands/fingers, face/nose etc..) but I just want to start texturing soon and get it done, critique of all kind most welcome though. Thanks!
-Dan (Budding Artist attempting to bud....)
01-18-2005, 04:25 PM
you have a decent enough mesh
but if you're trying to closely follow the concept art, it could use a lot of improvement.
the eyes you made need to be narrower, and farther out, and the arms and legs thinner, the hands larger, and things like that...it looks like you're trying to make a normally proportioned person from this peice.
can't wait to see it turn out tho!
01-22-2005, 02:44 AM
I for some reason found it hard to follow the concept art. I think its because I've been trying to keep to normal human proportions and I dont feel comfortable deliberatly creating something out of proportion if you get me heh, all in good time i guess though.
I started texturing it, just very simple, its more colours really..progress shots below!
the unwrap isnt as good as it could be, its painted at 512x512 but it could probably be sized down to 256 without any problems as its very simple..
Unwrap & Texture: (I overlayed the unwrap so it can be seen)
I know theres not much to comment on its pretty basic, but im starting a new model this week :thumbsup:
01-22-2005, 07:16 AM
This is a really good start. I dont see any problems with the body, but the face is really bugging me. It doesnt look like the reference images, and it is like she is screaming or in shock or something.. Anways post some wires so we can critique the actual modelling.
01-25-2005, 08:06 AM
Sorry took so long for wire's, been so tired lately im just crashing out when i get home from work..heres the face wire closeup, its so wrong in all those subtle little ways.. grrrr..
Also I was trying to put nice eyelashes on her and alpha around them, but I didnt quite get to that.
01-25-2005, 12:30 PM
hay dude themodel is pretty cool so far but i think you are keeping the eyes to proportionate to the head, when most anime has large eyes, smal nose and mouth, keep working on it dude, i think your on to something,
take a look at this model by ANDY-H , he got it pretty right if you ask me
good luck man
01-30-2005, 02:05 PM
Ahhh yes, that is exactly the look i was going for in the face haha...less of a nose next time methinks. Thankyou very much for the comments! :) I'm starting a new model now, Samurai Pizza Cat!! :D
01-30-2006, 03:01 PM
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