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RBancone
01-13-2005, 09:02 PM
Hi,I Just scanned my drawing that I'm going to color in photoshop.What do you think?c&c welcome. Wow you are right..hwo could i make a so long forearm????i have made it shorter just by selecting it and moving it..


http://s04.imagehost.org/1561/girl.jpg

tttia
01-13-2005, 11:30 PM
I like the overall look, and the anatomy looks pretty close. The face is a bit rounded, but I guess I would have to see the reference if any, lot of variation out there. I would say a bit more cheek and jaw definition would help.

Not sure there is a whole lot going on in the piece as far as point, action, theme, etc....unless your just a big cig fan. But as far as just a portrayal of a scene it is fine.

Eternally Mine
01-14-2005, 06:32 AM
I like it and she seems to have an air of sophistcation and mystery about her.

:)

supremo
01-14-2005, 07:49 AM
This is looking to be a great WIP. I can't wait to see where this goes.

I don't really see any problems at first glance, closer inspection might say her right forearm/hand are out of proportion.

Keep us updated!

Rudeone
01-14-2005, 02:52 PM
I agree with supremo about the arm, both upper arm and lower arm are to long and maybe to thin, goes for both arms.
And than there is something about the eyes, they are way to defined I think, loosen them up a litlle, make the lower lashes less thick.
The hair, nose, mouth and jawline look good, same for the shoulders and breasts.

Keep it up!

Rudeone
01-14-2005, 02:57 PM
Correction, her lower left arm is good, but you have to bring it up in order to make the upper arm smaller cause you have to keep the shoulders the way they are.

RBancone
01-16-2005, 10:35 AM
I dunnow where is mi first post about it.Anyway this is the update..i Corrected the arm proportions and started to paint the skin..
http://s04.imagehost.org/1561/girl.jpg

http://s04.imagehost.org/1574/Untitled-1.jpg

Jokinen
01-16-2005, 05:15 PM
really nice start- i especially like the shading around the neck and chest area. Keep up the good work.

-JJ

Rudeone
01-16-2005, 11:12 PM
It's starting to look really good...but I have to say the arms still look out of proportion to me, find some anotomy pics on the net.
Try this: stand straight and keep your arms down, you will notice that your elbows are at the hight of your lower ribs, now imagine 'smoking girl' in that pose, the way I see it is that her elbows are almost at the hight of were the hips start.
Anyway nice job on the colours, keep us updated!

RBancone
01-20-2005, 03:03 PM
almost finished
http://s04.imagehost.org/1609/Fumo2.JPG

Rudeone
01-20-2005, 03:08 PM
:eek: post a smaller version please

AIPh Pretzel
01-20-2005, 03:10 PM
You just broke my Internet.

RBancone
01-20-2005, 10:21 PM
sorry..here is an updated and smaller version.:)

http://s04.imagehost.org/1614/Fumo2.JPG

Kirt
01-20-2005, 11:06 PM
I merged your two threads together. Next time use the search function to find older threads rather than starting a new one.

I also changed your "internet buster" image link to a URL.

Thanks.

Rudeone
01-21-2005, 12:19 AM
Great piece!:thumbsup: I like the way you coloured it, but...You didn't change the arms proportions...ah well looking at it it doesn't even bother me, it even looks quite natural to me now. I like the smoothness of the piece. Nice detail those nipples :D, good job!

RBancone
01-21-2005, 01:35 PM
ok kirt,thanks for the advice.Thank you Rudeone.I looked it better befre coloring it and the left arm looked good,she is thin so the arm looks long anyway thanks for your advices and comments

RBancone
01-21-2005, 07:12 PM
this is the next step..now it is really...almost finished

http://s04.imagehost.org/1627/Fumo3.jpg

Rudeone
01-21-2005, 07:52 PM
yep, I like it!, but I noticed a flaw in the left walls window: looking at the reflecting light on the wall behind the girl and the shadow going diagonal in the left wall, you could asume that it is the hight of the window, but the outside of the wall goes straight up, it needs to go parallel to the shadow (am I being clear here? couldn't really find the words in english).

Another point: I think the couch should have a little bit more shadow on the right side, especially underneath her left arm, but that's just my opinion.

Are you gonna add some decoration to the walls? maybe a picture hanging of one of your previous works :)

looking forward to see your finished work, take care

MDN67
01-22-2005, 11:45 AM
Hi, the painting of the body of the woman is very made well, a criticism at the level of the face, you should work the glance and especially the details of the outline of eyes, at the moment they do not go very indeed with the rest of the painting, the good work for the rest

designbox
01-22-2005, 12:13 PM
Great job. The neck looks just like real. I think you should make some smoke from the cigarete.

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